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The anguish someone experiences when their actions don't elicit the reverence they (at least think) they deserve.
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The anguish someone experiences when their actions don't elicit the reverence they (at least think) they think they) deserve.
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Conciseness (though I'm working on that)
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The anguish a character experiences when their actions don't elicit the reverence they deserve (or at least think they do).
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The anguish a character someone experiences when their actions don't elicit the reverence they deserve (or at (at least think think) they do).deserve.
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-->[-''HELLO?!'' I've written the whole of the [[DudeWheresMyRespect unabridged version]] all by myself! Can't you at ''least'' give me some recognition for that?!-]
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-->[-''HELLO?!'' I've written the whole all of the unabridged version [[DudeWheresMyRespect unabridged version]] HERE]] all by myself! Can't you at ''least'' give me some recognition for that?!-]
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-->[-Hum ! ''Hellooooo'' ! I wrote the entire [[DudeWheresMyRespect unabridged version]] all by myself ! Can I at least get some recognition for that ?!-]
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The anguish a character experiences when their actions don't elicit the reverence they deserve (or at least thinks they do).
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The anguish a character experiences when their actions don't elicit the reverence they deserve (or at least thinks think they do).
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The anguish a character experiences when his actions don't elicit the reverence he deserves (or at least thinks he does).
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The anguish a character experiences when his their actions don't elicit the reverence he deserves they deserve (or at least thinks he does).they do).
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[DudeWheresMyRespect HERE]]-]
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Sometimes doing heroic things doesn't garner you the reverence you deserve for it.
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