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The camera lingers on a door because it's going to be reopened after a [[{{Laconic/Beat}} beat]].
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The camera lingers on a door because it's going to be reopened after a [[{{Laconic/Beat}} [[{{Laconic/beat}} beat]].
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The camera lingers on a door because it's going to be reopened after a {{Laconic/beat}}.
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The camera lingers on a door because it's going to be reopened after a {{Laconic/beat}}.[[{{Laconic/Beat}} beat]].
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--> [-Wait, you forgot to read the unabridged version. The door is [[DoorFocus HERE]].-]
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The camera lingers on a door because it's going to be reopened after a {{beat}}.
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The camera lingers on a door because it's going to be reopened after a {{beat}}.{{Laconic/beat}}.
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After a character exits, the camera lingers on the door. {{Beat}}. The character re-enters through the door.
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--> [-Wait, you forgot to read the unabridged version. The door is [[DoorFocus here]].-]
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After a character exits, the camera focus for a while on the door. After a {{Beat}}, the character re-enters through the door.
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After a character exits, the camera focus for a while lingers on the door. After a {{Beat}}, the {{Beat}}. The character re-enters through the door.
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After a character exits, the camera focus for a while on the door. After a {{Beat}}, the character renters through the door.
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After a character exits, the camera focus for a while on the door. After a {{Beat}}, the character renters re-enters through the door.
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After a character exits, the camera focus for a while on the door. After a {{Beat}}, the character renters through the door.
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--> [-Wait, you forgot to read the unabridged version. The door is [[DoorFocus here]].-]
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--> [-Wait, you forgot to read the unabridged version. The door is [[DoorFocus here]].-]
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