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A ButtMonkey whom the audience sympathizes with or feels that their abuse is overkill.
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A ButtMonkey Laconic/ButtMonkey whom the audience sympathizes with or feels that their abuse is overkill.
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-->[-Visit the overly tortured and beaten down unabridged version [[DesignatedMonkey HERE]]. Please help the poor ButtMonkey over here, where he ''actually'' needs to take an solid break from the maddening and aggressively violent chaos.-]
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-->[-Visit the overly tortured and beaten down unabridged version [[DesignatedMonkey HERE]]. Please help the poor ButtMonkey over here, where he they ''actually'' needs need to take an solid break from the maddening and aggressively violent chaos.-]
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-->[-Visit the overly tortured and beaten down unabridged version [[DesignatedMonkey HERE]].. please help the poor {{butt monkey}} over here, where he ''actually'' needs to take an solid break from the maddening and aggressively violent chaos.-]
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-->[-Visit the overly tortured and beaten down unabridged version [[DesignatedMonkey HERE]].. please HERE]]. Please help the poor {{butt monkey}} ButtMonkey over here, where he ''actually'' needs to take an solid break from the maddening and aggressively violent chaos.-]
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[DesignatedMonkey HERE]]-]
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-->[-Visit the overly tortured and beaten down unabridged version [[DesignatedMonkey HERE]]-]HERE]].. please help the poor {{butt monkey}} over here, where he ''actually'' needs to take an solid break from the maddening and aggressively violent chaos.-]
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Previous Laconic made it sound indistinguishable from "Unintentionally Sympathetic" or other similar tropes.
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The audience finds this character more sympathetic than the writer intended.
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WriterOnBoard [[XMeetsY meets]] TheUnfavorite.
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WriterOnBoard meets TheUnfavorite.
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WriterOnBoard meets [[XMeetsY meets]] TheUnfavorite.
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-->[-See unabridged version [[DesignatedMonkey HERE]]-]
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WriterOnBoard meets TheUnfavorite
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WriterOnBoard meets TheUnfavoriteTheUnfavorite.
