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[[{{Villain}} Someone]] who preys on infants/children, especially for sustenance.
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Trying to revise this very slightly.
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[[{{Villains}} Someone]] who preys on infants/children, especially for sustenance.
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-->[-Visit the unabridged delectable version [[ChildEater HERE]].-]
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Also, I tried working on the page's conciseness (which I'm trying to work on with my writing).
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A villain who preys on children, especially for sustenance.
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[[{{Villains}} Someone]] who preys on
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A villain who devours children for sustenance.
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A villain who devours children preys on children, especially for sustenance.
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Got the page an unabrdged link.
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