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The point at which an evil creature transforms into a more human form instead of getting increasingly monstrous.
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The point at which an evil creature transforms into a more human humanoid form instead of getting increasingly monstrous.
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-->[-Visit the ultimate unabridged version, [[BishonenLine after going through each monstrous form, and reaching the most humanoid form possible]].-]
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-->[-Visit the ultimate unabridged version, [[BishonenLine after going through each monstrous form, stage, and reaching the most humanoid form possible]].-]
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-->[-Visit unabridged version, [[BishonenLine after going through each monstrous form, and reaching the most humanoid]].-]
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-->[-Visit the ultimate unabridged version, [[BishonenLine after going through each monstrous form, and reaching the most humanoid]].humanoid form possible]].-]
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[BishonenLine HERE]]-]
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-->[-Visit unabridged version version, [[BishonenLine HERE]]-]after going through each monstrous form, and reaching the most humanoid]].-]
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The point at which an evil creature evolves into a more human form instead of getting increasingly monstrous.
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The point at which an evil creature evolves transforms into a more human form instead of getting increasingly monstrous.
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swapping per the Laconic Description Improvement thread
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Monster's most powerful form looks the most human.
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A monster's most powerful form looks the most human.
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This seems more accurate in terms of trope focus. I\'m think the over-general wording might have prompted a bit of shoehorning.
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Full power form appears the most human-like.
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