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* Fireheart and Graystripe go behind their leader's back to share [=ThunderClan=] prey with [=RiverClan=] when the latter clan is in shambles and starving due to the flood. While Bluestar is obliged to punish them when she finds out later, she's still understanding of why they did what they did.
** When [=ThunderClan=] is refused passage through [=ShadowClan=] territory after the hostile Gathering, Crookedstar overhears Nightstar's threats and — remembering Fireheart and Graystripe's kindness — offers [=ThunderClan=] a way home through [=RiverClan=] territory, saying that all cats should help each other in hard times.
** When [=ThunderClan=] is refused passage through [=ShadowClan=] territory after the hostile Gathering, Crookedstar overhears Nightstar's threats and — remembering Fireheart and Graystripe's kindness — offers [=ThunderClan=] a way home through [=RiverClan=] territory, saying that all cats should help each other in hard times.
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** After Brightpaw is attacked by the dog pack, Bluestar gives her the uncomfortable warrior name of "Lostface" as a permanent reminder of event and how [=StarClan=] did nothing to intervene. Lostface is devastated, but Cloudtail promises that he will never say her new name and tells her she is still beautiful to him.
** Mistyfoot and Stonefur forgiving their mother:
** Mistyfoot and Stonefur forgiving their mother:
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* Cloudtail begs Firestar to change Lostface's name again and he does: to Brightheart. Both she and Cloudtail are beyond happy with this, and even Firestar gets a little emotional watching.
--> ''Firestar swallowed, his throat choked with emotion. It was moments like this that made being a leader worthwhile.''
--> ''Firestar swallowed, his throat choked with emotion. It was moments like this that made being a leader worthwhile.''
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* A. Dangerous. Path. WINS. In the Riverclan and Thunderclan battle, Graystripe calls to Fireheart, when her children, Mistyfoot and Stonefur, are trying to kill her. Fireheart, even after being called a traitor by Bluestar, saves her life. Graystripe then warns Fireheart to look out as Graystripe's leader, Leopardstar is about to attack Fireheart. After being exiled and taken into Thunderclan, Fireheart asks, "So can Graystripe stay?".
** Cloudtail telling Brightheart she is still beautiful to him.
** Mistyfoot and Stonefur forgiving their mother:
-->'''Mistyfoot''' (to Bluestar while she's dying): "We forgive you, Bluestar."
-->'''Stonefur''': "We forgive you."
** Cloudtail telling Brightheart she is still beautiful to him.
** Mistyfoot and Stonefur forgiving their mother:
-->'''Mistyfoot''' (to Bluestar while she's dying): "We forgive you, Bluestar."
-->'''Stonefur''': "We forgive you."
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** Cloudtail telling Brightheart she is still beautiful to him.
** Mistyfoot and Stonefur forgiving their mother:
-->'''Mistyfoot''' (to Bluestar while she's dying): "We forgive you, Bluestar."
-->'''Stonefur''': "We forgive you."
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[[AC:A Dangerous Path]]
* A. Dangerous. Path. WINS. In the Riverclan and Thunderclan battle, Graystripe calls to Fireheart, when Bluestar's children, Mistyfoot and Stonefur, are trying to kill her. Fireheart, even after being called a traitor by Bluestar, saves her life. Graystripe then warns Fireheart to look out as Graystripe's leader, Leopardstar is about to attack Fireheart. After being exiled and taken into Thunderclan, Fireheart asks, "So can Graystripe stay?".
** After Brightpaw is attacked by the dog pack, Bluestar gives her the uncomfortable warrior name of "Lostface" as a permanent reminder of event and how [=StarClan=] did nothing to intervene. Lostface is devastated, but Cloudtail promises that he will never say her new name and tells her she is still beautiful to him.
** Mistyfoot and Stonefur forgiving their mother:
-->'''Mistyfoot''' (to Bluestar while she's dying): "We forgive you, Bluestar."
-->'''Stonefur''': "We forgive you."
[[AC:The Darkest Hour]]
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** Cloudtail telling [[spoiler: Brightheart]] she is still beautiful to him.
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** Cloudtail telling [[spoiler: Brightheart]] Brightheart she is still beautiful to him.
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-->'''Mistyfoot''' (to Bluestar [[spoiler:while she's dying]]): "We forgive you, Bluestar."
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-->'''Mistyfoot''' (to Bluestar [[spoiler:while while she's dying]]): dying): "We forgive you, Bluestar."
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* Whitestorm being appointed the deputy of [=ThunderClan=] after Firestar was made leader. It's so satisfying, after seeing him step in to help him when Firestar was not that experienced.
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* Whitestorm being appointed the deputy of [=ThunderClan=] after Firestar was made leader. It's so satisfying, after seeing him step in to help him when Firestar was not that experienced.experienced.
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* Yellowfang's speech to Cinderpelt about losing someone in ''Forest of Secrets''.
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* Yellowfang's speech to Cinderpelt about losing someone in ''Forest of Secrets''.Secrets''.
* Whitestorm being appointed the deputy of [=ThunderClan=] after Firestar was made leader. It's so satisfying, after seeing him step in to help him when Firestar was not that experienced.
* Whitestorm being appointed the deputy of [=ThunderClan=] after Firestar was made leader. It's so satisfying, after seeing him step in to help him when Firestar was not that experienced.
