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The story pretty much runs on a string of CMOH between the two sisters, but there's a few scenes that stand out.
* Like in chapter 5 where Corona realizes that the changeling that had just attacked them was dying and let it feed on her love, paralleling the flashback with the baby bird.
* Like in chapter 5 where Corona realizes that the changeling that had just attacked them was dying and let it feed on her love, paralleling the flashback with the baby bird.
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The story pretty much runs on a string of CMOH between the two sisters, but there's a few scenes that stand out.
*Like in chapter 5 where Corona realizes that the changeling that had just attacked them was dying and let it feed on her love, paralleling the flashback with the baby bird.
*Like in chapter 5 where Corona realizes that the changeling that had just attacked them was dying and let it feed on her love, paralleling the flashback with the baby bird.
