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* Bolin looking at Korra in admiration as she demonstrates her firebending, noticing how the flames made her skin glow.
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!!Prologue: Katara's Story
* The funeral service Aang's friends gave him is both this and a tearjerker.
* Doubles as a Tearjerker: According to Tenzin, Korra has accepted Tonraq and Senna as her true parents, and she is willing to talk to them as well as Jinora, Ikki, and Meelo, but the effects of what the Red Lotus put her through will not simply disappear overnight.
* Korra having fun with Jinora and Ikki by having an air scooter race with them. Korra appears to be having a lot of fun with them, and this seems to be the most fun she has had with anyone besides spending time with Naga, Asami, Bolin, and Mako.
* Korra and Katara finally meeting.
* The funeral service Aang's friends gave him is both this and a tearjerker.
* Doubles as a Tearjerker: According to Tenzin, Korra has accepted Tonraq and Senna as her true parents, and she is willing to talk to them as well as Jinora, Ikki, and Meelo, but the effects of what the Red Lotus put her through will not simply disappear overnight.
* Korra having fun with Jinora and Ikki by having an air scooter race with them. Korra appears to be having a lot of fun with them, and this seems to be the most fun she has had with anyone besides spending time with Naga, Asami, Bolin, and Mako.
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* After identifying Korra as the Avatar, the Red Lotus leave the other children with enough supplies to survive until the rescue party finds them.
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* Ghazan allowing Korra to keep Naga, a decision that is reciprocated by the rest of the Red Lotus with the exception of Ming-Hua.
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* Unalaq begging Korra to spare his family even if she must kill him in return.
* Lin ordering the metal-benders to use non-lethal force on Korra.
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* After discovering Korra can Firebend, Tonraq does not even consider the possibility that Senna might have cheated on him. His first guess is that Korra is the Avatar.
* Doubles as Funny. Korra using Waterbending for the first time.
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--->'''Asami''': I would like to propose a toast. To the newest employee of Future Industries and forklift operator; Mako. To Bolin and Mako for their new home in the company dorms.
--->'''Bolin''': This is going to be so awesome. Oh, wait. Where's Korra going to live?
--->'''Asami''': Well, I've offered to let her stay here.
--->'''Korra''': And I've decided... I will.
--->'''Asami''': So to new jobs, new places to live and new friendships. Cheers.
--->'''Everyone''': Cheers.
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--->'''Asami''': I would like to propose a toast. To the newest employee of Future Industries and forklift operator; Mako. To Bolin and Mako for their new home in the company dorms.
--->'''Bolin''': This is going to be so awesome. Oh, wait. Where's Korra going to live?
--->'''Asami''': Well, I've offered to let her stay here.
--->'''Korra''': And I've decided... I will.
--->'''Asami''': So to new jobs, new places to live and new friendships. Cheers.
--->'''Everyone''': Cheers.
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* Korra refusing to give up on saving Asami's life and being successful.
!!Chapter Nineteen: Freedom
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!!Chapter One: The Girl in the Snow
* Asami and Korra's first meeting as children along with the fact that Korra did not hesitate to help Asami.
!!Chapter Two: Escape to Republic City
!!Chapter Three: The Missing Child
* Lin and Tenzin's conversation.
!!Chapter Four: First Meeting
!!Chapter Five: Adventures and Misfortunes
!!Chapter Six: Memento
!!Chapter Seven: Search of the Lotus
!!Chapter Eight: The Chiblocker Lady
* Asami making Korra, Bolin, and Mako her honored guests.
!!Chapter Nine: Uncharted Territories
!!Chapter Ten: Connection
* Asami hugging Korra
* Asami getting Mako a job for her company and helping get the brothers a new place to live.
* Korra taking up Asami's
!!Chapter Eleven: For Whom the Fire Burns
!!Chapter Twelve: City of Fireworks
* Asami wanting to help Korra live like a 'modern' girl.
* Korra and Asami spending time together all day.
* Asami holding Korra's hand as they watch the fireworks.
* Asami feeling relieved when she sees Korra has not runaway or disappeared.
!!Chapter Thirteen: The Game
* Bolin being AFriendToAllChildren and helping
* Asami and Mako cheering on the Fire Ferrets.
* Korra and Asami singing together even if Korra is off-key.
!!Chapter Fourteen: Terror
* When Korra's friends find out [[spoiler:Yujin was killed and there are intruders in the mansion]], their first instinct is to find Korra and make sure she is okay.
* Asami, Bolin, and Mako attempting to [[spoiler:prevent the Red Lotus from taking Korra even though they are unable.]]
* Korra convincing [[spoiler:Zaheer from killing her friends.]]
!!Chapter Fifteen: Assassination
!!Chapter Sixteen: Broken Chains
* Korra [[spoiler:reuniting with Naga along with the fact that Naga swam to her master the moment she noticed Korra's presence.]]
* Korra's first meeting with Tenzin.
* Korra's reaction to [[spoiler:the fact that Asami, Bolin, and Mako wanted to save her after she was kidnapped while she was afraid that they would not want anything to do with her.]]
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* The fact that the authors plan on writing the story because they're happy with the feedback they have been receiving so far and hope to make it even better.
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[[folder:Book One: Healing]]
!!Chapter One: The Girl in the Snow
* Asami and Korra's first meeting as children along with the fact that Korra did not hesitate to help Asami.
!!Chapter Two: Escape to Republic City
!!Chapter Three: The Missing Child
* Lin and Tenzin's conversation.
!!Chapter Four: First Meeting
!!Chapter Five: Adventures and Misfortunes
!!Chapter Six: Memento
!!Chapter Seven: Search of the Lotus
!!Chapter Eight: The Chiblocker Lady
* Asami making Korra, Bolin, and Mako her honored guests.
!!Chapter Nine: Uncharted Territories
!!Chapter Ten: Connection
* Asami hugging Korra
* Asami getting Mako a job for her company and helping get the brothers a new place to live.
* Korra taking up Asami's
!!Chapter Eleven: For Whom the Fire Burns
!!Chapter Twelve: City of Fireworks
* Asami wanting to help Korra live like a 'modern' girl.
* Korra and Asami spending time together all day.
* Asami holding Korra's hand as they watch the fireworks.
* Asami feeling relieved when she sees Korra has not runaway or disappeared.
!!Chapter Thirteen: The Game
* Bolin being AFriendToAllChildren and helping
* Asami and Mako cheering on the Fire Ferrets.
* Korra and Asami singing together even if Korra is off-key.
!!Chapter Fourteen: Terror
* When Korra's friends find out [[spoiler:Yujin was killed and there are intruders in the mansion]], their first instinct is to find Korra and make sure she is okay.
* Asami, Bolin, and Mako attempting to [[spoiler:prevent the Red Lotus from taking Korra even though they are unable.]]
* Korra convincing [[spoiler:Zaheer from killing her friends.]]
!!Chapter Fifteen: Assassination
!!Chapter Sixteen: Broken Chains
* Korra [[spoiler:reuniting with Naga along with the fact that Naga swam to her master the moment she noticed Korra's presence.]]
* Korra's first meeting with Tenzin.
* Korra's reaction to [[spoiler:the fact that Asami, Bolin, and Mako wanted to save her after she was kidnapped while she was afraid that they would not want anything to do with her.]]
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!!General
* The fact that the authors plan on writing the story because they're happy with the feedback they have been receiving so far and hope to make it even better.
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