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** Carlos' smile when he sees the doors move of their own accord.
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** Carlos' smile when he sees the doors move of their own accord.
** Also, by the rules of the scavenger hunt game, a wish is granted to the one who finds their hidden treasure. Simón's wish was for Laura to join him and the other orphans as ghosts so that she can care for them. It is quite likely that Laura's wish after she had found her hidden treasure (which was Simón) would be for Carlos to join them once he dies, so they will be [[TogetherInDeath reunited again.]]
** Also, by the rules of the scavenger hunt game, a wish is granted to the one who finds their hidden treasure. Simón's wish was for Laura to join him and the other orphans as ghosts so that she can care for them. It is quite likely that Laura's wish after she had found her hidden treasure (which was Simón) would be for Carlos to join them once he dies, so they will be [[TogetherInDeath reunited again.]]
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-->[[PeterPan "She's grown old, like Wendy in the story!"]]
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-->[[DiedHappilyEverAfter The ending.]]
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-->[[PeterPan "She's grown old, like Wendy in the story!"]]
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-->[[PeterPan "She's grown old, like Wendy in the story!"]]story!"]]
** Carlos' smile when he sees the doors move of their own accord.
** Carlos' smile when he sees the doors move of their own accord.
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-->[[DiedHappilyEverAfter The ending.]]
-->"It's Laura!"
-->[[PeterPan "She's grown old, like Wendy in the story!"]]
-->"It's Laura!"
-->[[PeterPan "She's grown old, like Wendy in the story!"]]
