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* Princess Melisande's request to her father to go join Peter on present day Earth. Also counts as a TearJerker for those parents who can relate to how Carolinus must be feeling.
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* Princess Melisande's request to her father to go join Peter on present day Earth. Also counts as a TearJerker for those parents who can relate to how Carolinus must be feeling.feeling upon her request.
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* Peter visits Melisande in her dreams before returning to the realm of man, Carolinus musing that even if he said it, Peter's heart isn't totally closed to the wonders of magic.
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* Peter and Princess Melisande's interactions, before all the hijinks caused by the accident that caused Peter's consciousness to take over Gorbash's body.
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* Peter and Princess Melisande's interactions, interactions. That is, before all the hijinks caused by the accident that caused Peter's consciousness to take over Gorbash's body.
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* Peter and Princess Melisande's, before all the hijinks caused by the accident that caused Peter's consciousness to take over Gorbash's body.
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* Peter and Princess Melisande's, Melisande's interactions, before all the hijinks caused by the accident that caused Peter's consciousness to take over Gorbash's body.
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* Princess Melisande's request to her father to go join Peter on present day earth. Also counts as a TearJerker for those parents who can relate to how Carolinus must be feeling.
--> '''Melisande''': May I join him father?
--> '''Carolinus''': Of all questions, I feared that the most.
--> '''Melisande''': May I?
--> '''Carolinus''': That must be your decision child.
--> '''Melisande''': May I join him father?
--> '''Carolinus''': Of all questions, I feared that the most.
--> '''Melisande''': May I?
--> '''Carolinus''': That must be your decision child.
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* Princess Melisande's request to her father to go join Peter on present day earth.Earth. Also counts as a TearJerker for those parents who can relate to how Carolinus must be feeling.
--> '''Melisande''': -->'''Melisande:''' May I join him father?
--> '''Carolinus''':father?\\
'''Carolinus:''' Of all questions, I feared that themost.
--> '''Melisande''':most.\\
'''Melisande:''' MayI?
--> '''Carolinus''':I?\\
'''Carolinus:''' That must be yourdecision decision, child.
--> '''Carolinus''':
'''Carolinus:''' Of all questions, I feared that the
--> '''Melisande''':
'''Melisande:''' May
--> '''Carolinus''':
'''Carolinus:''' That must be your
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* Peter and Princess Melisande's, before all the hijinks caused by the accident that caused Peter's consciousness to take over Gorbash's body.
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** Specifically, it's right after Sir Orrin drove Bryagh off the nest, where he'd [[WouldHurtAChild eaten]] all of the rest of the eggs and hatchlings. The last egg hatched into Gorbash, who promptly bonded with Sir Orrin. The two were inseparable from that moment onward.
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** Specifically, it's right after Sir Orrin drove Bryagh off the nest, where he'd [[WouldHurtAChild eaten]] all of the rest of the eggs and hatchlings. The last egg hatched into Gorbash, who promptly bonded with Sir Orrin. The two were inseparable from that moment onward.onward (until, of course, Gorbash was given to Melisande).
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** Specifically, it's right after Sir Orrin drove Bryagh off the nest, where he'd [[WouldHurtAChild eaten]] all of the rest of the eggs and hatchlings. The last egg hatched into Gorbash, who promptly bonded with Sir Orrin. The two were inseparable from that moment onward.
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* Princess Melisande's request to her father to go join Peter on present day earth. Also counts as a TearJerker for those parents who can relate to how Carolinus must be feeling.
--> '''Melisande''': May I join him father?
--> '''Carolinus''': Of all questions, I feared that the most.
--> '''Melisande''': May I?
--> '''Carolinus''': That must be your decision child.
--> '''Melisande''': May I join him father?
--> '''Carolinus''': Of all questions, I feared that the most.
--> '''Melisande''': May I?
--> '''Carolinus''': That must be your decision child.
