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* Paul and Marion drive a whole day just to see that David's doing okay. Obviously he's not okay at all and Paul has to save David from [[spoiler: killing himself.]] Paul then has David tell him what's going on. And believes David instead of calling him crazy or anything else.
** [[spoiler: Sissi, D and Fluffy]] urging Paul to help David.
** [[spoiler: Sissi, D and Fluffy]] urging Paul to help David.
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* Paul and Marion drive a whole day just to see that David's doing okay. Obviously he's not okay at all and Paul has to save David from [[spoiler: killing himself.]] himself. Paul then has David tell him what's going on. And believes David instead of calling him crazy or anything else.
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** [[spoiler:[[ViolationOfCommonSense [[ViolationOfCommonSense Paul beating the shit out of out of David to keep him from killing himself.]]]] ]] Then yelling at him and saying if he does anything like that again, [[AngerBornOfWorry he will hit him some more.]]
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* When David finds [[spoiler: where Duke killed himself,]] he suddenly realizes the reason for everything that happened. [[spoiler: Duke lived a life very similar to David's. He tried to kill David because he hated how similar he was...and at the same time he also tried to ''save'' David because he didn't want David to come down the same path he did.]] David thanks [[spoiler: Duke]] for helping him and ensures that [[spoiler: Duke receives a proper burial so he can finally rest in peace.]] [[TearJerker Sniffles.]]
* David's mother [[spoiler: being cured of her insanity long enough to enjoy the first happy moments with her son she's had in a long time. Sadly, she dies soon after, but she has no regrets.]]
* [[spoiler: The sequel, The Sandman, shows that David has gotten out from his depression and he is a much happier person. He also has Shirley as his fiancee.]]
* The entirety of David's relationship with [[AdorablyPrecociousChild Fluffy]]. If he [[spoiler:and Shirley]] ever end up having a kid, he'd definitely be cut out for the job.
* David's mother [[spoiler: being cured of her insanity long enough to enjoy the first happy moments with her son she's had in a long time. Sadly, she dies soon after, but she has no regrets.]]
* [[spoiler: The sequel, The Sandman, shows that David has gotten out from his depression and he is a much happier person. He also has Shirley as his fiancee.]]
* The entirety of David's relationship with [[AdorablyPrecociousChild Fluffy]]. If he [[spoiler:and Shirley]] ever end up having a kid, he'd definitely be cut out for the job.
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* When David finds [[spoiler: where Duke killed himself,]] himself, he suddenly realizes the reason for everything that happened. [[spoiler: Duke lived a life very similar to David's. He tried to kill David because he hated how similar he was...and at the same time he also tried to ''save'' David because he didn't want David to come down the same path he did.]] David thanks [[spoiler: Duke]] Duke for helping him and ensures that [[spoiler: Duke receives a proper burial so he can finally rest in peace.]] peace. [[TearJerker Sniffles.]]
* David's mother[[spoiler: being cured of her insanity long enough to enjoy the first happy moments with her son she's had in a long time. Sadly, she dies soon after, but she has no regrets.]]
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*[[spoiler: The sequel, The Sandman, shows that David has gotten out from his depression and he is a much happier person. He also has Shirley as his fiancee.]]
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* The entirety of David's relationship with [[AdorablyPrecociousChild Fluffy]]. If he[[spoiler:and Shirley]] and Shirley ever end up having a kid, he'd definitely be cut out for the job.
* David's mother
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* The entirety of David's relationship with [[AdorablyPrecociousChild Fluffy]]. If he
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** When Paul tells David to TryNotToDie.
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* [[ViolationOfCommonSense Paul beating the shit out of out of David to keep him from killing himself.]] Then yelling at him and saying if he does anything like that again, [[AngerBornOfWorry he will hit him some more.]]]]
* The entirety of David's relationship with [[AdorablyPrecociousChild Fluffy]]. If he [[spoiler:and Shirley]] ever end up having a kid, he'd definitely be cut out for the job.
* The entirety of David's relationship with [[AdorablyPrecociousChild Fluffy]]. If he [[spoiler:and Shirley]] ever end up having a kid, he'd definitely be cut out for the job.
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* [[ViolationOfCommonSense Paul beating the shit out of out of David to keep him from killing himself.]] Then yelling at him and saying if he does anything like that again, [[AngerBornOFWorry [[AngerBornOfWorry he will hit him some more.]]
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* [[ViolationOfCommonSense Paul beating the shit out of out of David to keep him from killing himself.]] Then yelling at him and saying if he does anything like that again, [[AngerBornOFWorry he will hit him some more.]]
* [[ViolationOfCommonSense Paul beating the shit out of out of David to keep him from killing himself.]] Then yelling at him and saying if he does anything like that again, [[AngerBornOFWorry he will hit him some more.]]
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* The sequel, The Sandman, shows that David has gotten out from his depression and he is a much happier person. He also has Shirley as his fiancee.
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* David's mother [[spoiler: being cured of her insanity long enough to enjoy the first happy moments with her son she's had in a long time. Sadly, she dies soon after, but she has no regrets.]]]]
* When Paul tells David to TryNotToDie.
* When Paul tells David to TryNotToDie.
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* When David finds [[spoiler: where Duke killed himself,]] he suddenly realizes the reason for everything that happened. [[spoiler: Duke lived a life very similar to David's. He tried to kill David because he hated how similar he was...and at the same time he also tried to ''save'' David because he didn't want David to come down the same path he did.]] David thanks [[spoiler: Duke]] for helping him and ensures that [[spoiler: Duke receives a proper burial so he can finally rest in peace.]] [[TearJerker Sniffles.]]
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* When David finds [[spoiler: where Duke killed himself,]] he suddenly realizes the reason for everything that happened. [[spoiler: Duke lived a life very similar to David's. He tried to kill David because he hated how similar he was...and at the same time he also tried to ''save'' David because he didn't want David to come down the same path he did.]] David thanks [[spoiler: Duke]] for helping him and ensures that [[spoiler: Duke receives a proper burial so he can finally rest in peace.]] [[TearJerker Sniffles.]]
* David's mother [[spoiler: being cured of her insanity long enough to enjoy the first happy moments with her son she's had in a long time. Sadly, she dies soon after, but she has no regrets.]]
* David's mother [[spoiler: being cured of her insanity long enough to enjoy the first happy moments with her son she's had in a long time. Sadly, she dies soon after, but she has no regrets.]]
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-->"He's your friend, right? Go to him."
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* When Sissi suddenly runs back and kisses David on the cheek as a "thank you" for all the help he's given her.
* When David finds [[spoiler: where Duke killed himself,]] he suddenly realizes the reason for everything that happened. [[spoiler: Duke lived a life very similar to David's. He tried to kill David because he hated how similar he was...and at the same time he also tried to ''save'' David because he didn't want David to come down the same path he did.]] David thanks [[spoiler: Duke]] for helping him and ensures that [[spoiler: Duke receives a proper burial so he can finally rest in peace.]] [[TearJerker Sniffles.]]
* When David finds [[spoiler: where Duke killed himself,]] he suddenly realizes the reason for everything that happened. [[spoiler: Duke lived a life very similar to David's. He tried to kill David because he hated how similar he was...and at the same time he also tried to ''save'' David because he didn't want David to come down the same path he did.]] David thanks [[spoiler: Duke]] for helping him and ensures that [[spoiler: Duke receives a proper burial so he can finally rest in peace.]] [[TearJerker Sniffles.]]
