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* In issue #36, Marko and Alana find the prison where Klara and Hazel have been kept, and Marko teleports in to rescue them. When he and Hazel see each other for the first time in at least four years, Hazel is frozen motionless. Marko brings out her old stuffed toy Ponk Konk, thinking that she'd remember it even if she didn't remember him. Halfway through his trying to jog her memory, Hazel (who actually did recognize him, she was just shocked by his sudden appearance) snaps out of her freez and runs over to hug him, repeating "Daddy. Daddy. Daddy."
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* In issue #36, Marko and Alana find the prison where Klara and Hazel have been kept, and Marko teleports in to rescue them. When he and Hazel see each other for the first time in at least four years, Hazel is frozen motionless. Marko brings out her old stuffed toy Ponk Konk, thinking that she'd remember it even if she didn't remember him. Halfway through his trying to jog her memory, Hazel (who actually did recognize him, she was just shocked by his sudden appearance) snaps out of her freez freeze and runs over to hug him, repeating "Daddy. Daddy. Daddy."
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** This is compounded by Marko's next actions, going berserk and absolutely flattening The Will, with the kind of fury he normally only shows when his own family is threatened.
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** This is compounded by Marko's next actions, going berserk and absolutely flattening The Will, with the kind of fury he normally only shows when his own family is threatened.threatened.
* The flashback of Marko reassuring Hazel that she's not obligated to have children of her own.
* The flashback of Marko reassuring Hazel that she's not obligated to have children of her own.
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* In issue #36, Marko and Alana find the prison where Klara and Hazel have been kept, and Marko teleports in to rescue them. When he and Hazel see each other for the first time in at least four years, Hazel is frozen motionless. Marko brings out her old stuffed toy Ponk Konk, thinking that she'd remember it even if she didn't remember him. Halfway through his trying to jog her memory, Hazel(who actually did recognize him, she was just shocked by his sudden appearance) snaps out of her freez and runs over to hug him, repeating "Daddy. Daddy. Daddy."
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* In issue #36, Marko and Alana find the prison where Klara and Hazel have been kept, and Marko teleports in to rescue them. When he and Hazel see each other for the first time in at least four years, Hazel is frozen motionless. Marko brings out her old stuffed toy Ponk Konk, thinking that she'd remember it even if she didn't remember him. Halfway through his trying to jog her memory, Hazel(who Hazel (who actually did recognize him, she was just shocked by his sudden appearance) snaps out of her freez and runs over to hug him, repeating "Daddy. Daddy. Daddy."
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* When Prince Robot is captured by The Will, he near instantly sells out Hazel in exchange for his own life... and unknown to him, Marko was in earshot. Despite this Marko instantly forgives Prince Robot and tries to negotiate the Prince's safety, while reassuring him that his son is safe. Prince Robot's display clearly shows how much he appreciated this gesture [[spoiler:and he at least dies happy when The Will declines to negotiate and kills him anyway.]]
** This is compounded by Marco's next actions, going absolutely berserk and absolutely flattening The Will, with the kind of fury he normally only shows when his own family is threatened.
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** This is compounded by
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* When Prince Robot is captured by The Will, he near instantly sells out Hazel in exchange for his own life... and unknown to him, Marko was in earshot. Despite this Marko instantly forgives Prince Robot and tries to negotiate the Prince's safety, while reassuring him that his son is safe. Prince Robot's display clearly shows how much he appreciated this gesture [spoiler]and he at least dies happy when The Will declines to negotiate and kills him anyway.[/spoiler]
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* When Prince Robot is captured by The Will, he near instantly sells out Hazel in exchange for his own life... and unknown to him, Marko was in earshot. Despite this Marko instantly forgives Prince Robot and tries to negotiate the Prince's safety, while reassuring him that his son is safe. Prince Robot's display clearly shows how much he appreciated this gesture [spoiler]and [[spoiler:and he at least dies happy when The Will declines to negotiate and kills him anyway.[/spoiler]]]
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* Squire meeting Hazel. As they run off to play, Future Hazel calls Squire her new brother.
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* Squire meeting Hazel. As they run off to play, Future Hazel calls Squire her new brother.brother.
* When Prince Robot is captured by The Will, he near instantly sells out Hazel in exchange for his own life... and unknown to him, Marko was in earshot. Despite this Marko instantly forgives Prince Robot and tries to negotiate the Prince's safety, while reassuring him that his son is safe. Prince Robot's display clearly shows how much he appreciated this gesture [spoiler]and he at least dies happy when The Will declines to negotiate and kills him anyway.[/spoiler]
** This is compounded by Marco's next actions, going absolutely berserk and absolutely flattening The Will, with the kind of fury he normally only shows when his own family is threatened.
* When Prince Robot is captured by The Will, he near instantly sells out Hazel in exchange for his own life... and unknown to him, Marko was in earshot. Despite this Marko instantly forgives Prince Robot and tries to negotiate the Prince's safety, while reassuring him that his son is safe. Prince Robot's display clearly shows how much he appreciated this gesture [spoiler]and he at least dies happy when The Will declines to negotiate and kills him anyway.[/spoiler]
** This is compounded by Marco's next actions, going absolutely berserk and absolutely flattening The Will, with the kind of fury he normally only shows when his own family is threatened.
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[[caption-width-right:350:''“Once upon a time, each of us was somebody's kid. Everyone had a father, even if he never provided anything more than his seed. Everyone had a mother, even if she had to leave us on a stranger's doorstep. No matter how we're eventually raised, all of our stories begin the exact same way. They all end the same, too.”'' ]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:''“Once upon a time, each of us was somebody's kid. Everyone had a father, even if he never provided anything more than his seed. Everyone had a mother, even if she had to leave us on a stranger's doorstep. kid...No matter how we're eventually raised, all of our stories begin the exact same way. They all end the same, too.”'' ]]
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* In issue #36, Marko and Alana find the prison where Klara and Hazel have been kept, and Marko teleports in to rescue them. When he and Hazel see each other for the first time in at least four years, Hazel is frozen motionless. Marko brings out her old stuffed toy Ponk Konk, thinking that she'd remember it even if she didn't remember him. Halfway through his trying to jog her memory, Hazel(who actually did recognize him, she was just shocked by his sudden appearance) snaps out of her freez and runs over to hug him, repeating "Daddy. Daddy. Daddy."
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* In issue #36, Marko and Alana find the prison where Klara and Hazel have been kept, and Marko teleports in to rescue them. When he and Hazel see each other for the first time in at least four years, Hazel is frozen motionless. Marko brings out her old stuffed toy Ponk Konk, thinking that she'd remember it even if she didn't remember him. Halfway through his trying to jog her memory, Hazel(who actually did recognize him, she was just shocked by his sudden appearance) snaps out of her freez and runs over to hug him, repeating "Daddy. Daddy. Daddy.""
* Squire meeting Hazel. As they run off to play, Future Hazel calls Squire her new brother.
* Squire meeting Hazel. As they run off to play, Future Hazel calls Squire her new brother.
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* Marko and an older Hazel's reunion.
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* In issue #36, Marko and an older Hazel's reunion.Alana find the prison where Klara and Hazel have been kept, and Marko teleports in to rescue them. When he and Hazel see each other for the first time in at least four years, Hazel is frozen motionless. Marko brings out her old stuffed toy Ponk Konk, thinking that she'd remember it even if she didn't remember him. Halfway through his trying to jog her memory, Hazel(who actually did recognize him, she was just shocked by his sudden appearance) snaps out of her freez and runs over to hug him, repeating "Daddy. Daddy. Daddy."
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* Prince Robot IV holding his son for the first time.
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* Prince Robot IV holding his son for the first time.time.
* Marko and an older Hazel's reunion.
* Marko and an older Hazel's reunion.
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* Can also cross over into TearJerker, but Barr's reason for [[spoiler: not telling Marko or Klara why he had an incurable disease and is dying.]]
--> '''Barr''': [[spoiler: Because I don't want my final days in this universe to be filled with pity and sorrow.]] I want to spend this time doing what I like best for the people I care about most.
--> '''Barr''': [[spoiler: Because I don't want my final days in this universe to be filled with pity and sorrow.]] I want to spend this time doing what I like best for the people I care about most.
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* Can also cross over into TearJerker, but Barr's reason for [[spoiler: not telling Marko or Klara why he had an incurable disease and is dying.]]
--> '''Barr''': [[spoiler: Because I don't want my final days in this universe to be filled with pity and sorrow.]] I want to spend this time doing what I like best for the people I care about most.
* Marko and Alana [[spoiler: finally reembracing one another after Dengo kidnapped her.]]
--> '''Barr''': [[spoiler: Because I don't want my final days in this universe to be filled with pity and sorrow.]] I want to spend this time doing what I like best for the people I care about most.
* Marko and Alana [[spoiler: finally reembracing one another after Dengo kidnapped her.]]
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* Can also cross over into TearJerker, but Barr's reason for After Alana and Marko's fight, Izabel tells Alana about her regrets of breaking up with her girlfriend in order to convince her to forgive Marko since "if you find someone who can forgive all your bullshit...the least you can do is try to forgive them."
* Doubles as a Tearjerker: Yuma knocks Ghus out to prevent him from [[spoiler:sacrificing himself to stop a fire in the ship]].
* Marko and Alana [[spoiler:not telling Marko or Klara why he had an incurable disease and is dying.finally embracing one another after Dengo kidnapped her.]]
--> '''Barr''': [[spoiler: Because I don't want my final days in this universe to be filled with pity and sorrow.]] I want to spend this time doing what I like best * Prince Robot IV holding his son for the people I care about most.
* Marko and Alana [[spoiler: finally reembracing one another after Dengo kidnapped her.]]first time.
* Doubles as a Tearjerker: Yuma knocks Ghus out to prevent him from [[spoiler:sacrificing himself to stop a fire in the ship]].
* Marko and Alana [[spoiler:
* Marko and Alana [[spoiler: finally reembracing one another after Dengo kidnapped her.]]
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--> '''Barr''': [[spoiler: Because I don't want my final days in this universe to be filled with pity and sorrow.]] I want to spend this time doing what I like best for the people I care about most.
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--> '''Barr''': [[spoiler: Because I don't want my final days in this universe to be filled with pity and sorrow.]] I want to spend this time doing what I like best for the people I care about most.most.
* Marko and Alana [[spoiler: finally reembracing one another after Dengo kidnapped her.]]
* Marko and Alana [[spoiler: finally reembracing one another after Dengo kidnapped her.]]
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--> '''Marko''': What, that my wife can do anything? Isn't it obvious?
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--> '''Marko''': What, that my wife can do anything? Isn't it obvious?obvious?
* Can also cross over into TearJerker, but Barr's reason for [[spoiler: not telling Marko or Klara why he had an incurable disease and is dying.]]
--> '''Barr''': [[spoiler: Because I don't want my final days in this universe to be filled with pity and sorrow.]] I want to spend this time doing what I like best for the people I care about most.
* Can also cross over into TearJerker, but Barr's reason for [[spoiler: not telling Marko or Klara why he had an incurable disease and is dying.]]
--> '''Barr''': [[spoiler: Because I don't want my final days in this universe to be filled with pity and sorrow.]] I want to spend this time doing what I like best for the people I care about most.
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* Barr and Marko's father asks Alana bond over why Alana fell in love she has risked so much to be with Marko.Marko. She replies "Because your son is so goddamn beautiful." He chuckles that looks don't last, and then she really makes you want to get the tissues when she says "I wasn't talking about his looks".
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--> '''Sophie''': ''(hugs Lying Cat)''
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--> '''Sophie''': ''(hugs Lying Cat)''Cat)''
* From issue 18, when [[spoiler: Alana flies for the first time]]:
--> '''Alana''': How? How did you know...?
--> '''Marko''': What, that my wife can do anything? Isn't it obvious?
* From issue 18, when [[spoiler: Alana flies for the first time]]:
--> '''Alana''': How? How did you know...?
--> '''Marko''': What, that my wife can do anything? Isn't it obvious?
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** Made more heartwarming when it's revealed in issue 18 that [[spoiler: The Will named Sophie after his sister]]
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** Made more heartwarming when it's revealed in issue 18 that [[spoiler: The Will named Sophie after his sister]]sister, The Brand, who he had been estranged with.]]
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** Later that issue, Barr holds his granddaughter and says "Hazel, eh? Beautiful goddamn name."
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** Later that issue, Barr holds his granddaughter and says to himself (or her), "Hazel, eh? Beautiful goddamn name."
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* Izabel deciding to help Alana and Marko in spite of the possibility that either Alana's or Marko's race causing the genocide of Izabel's people.
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* Izabel deciding to help Alana and Marko in spite of the possibility that either Alana's or Marko's race causing caused the genocide of Izabel's people.
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--> '''Alana''': No, she's fucking ''perfect''
** Later that issue, Barr holds his granddaughter and says "Hazel eh? Beautiful goddamn name."
** Later that issue, Barr holds his granddaughter and says "Hazel eh? Beautiful goddamn name."
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--> '''Alana''': No, she's fucking ''perfect''
''perfect''!
** Later that issue, Barr holds his granddaughter and says"Hazel "Hazel, eh? Beautiful goddamn name."
** Later that issue, Barr holds his granddaughter and says
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--> ''BigDamnKiss''''(BigDamnKiss)''
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--> '''Lying Cat''': ''silent''''(silent)''
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--> '''Lying Cat''': ''silent''''(silent)''
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--> '''Sophie''' (hug)'''Sophie''': ''(hugs Lying Cat)''
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--> '''Sophie''': My name is Sophie. I am six and a half years old. I can stand on one leg for a real long time. My favorite color is blue-green. I want to be a doctor or a dancer when I am grown up. I am all dirty on the inside because I did bad things with...
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--> '''Sophie''': My name is Sophie. I am six and a half years old. old.
--> '''Lying Cat''': ''silent''
--> '''Sophie''': I can stand on one leg for a real long time. My favorite color is blue-green. I want to be a doctor or a dancer when I am grownup. up.
--> '''Lying Cat''': ''silent''
--> '''Sophie''': I am all dirty on the inside because I did bad things with...
--> '''Lying Cat''': ''silent''
--> '''Sophie''': I can stand on one leg for a real long time. My favorite color is blue-green. I want to be a doctor or a dancer when I am grown
--> '''Lying Cat''': ''silent''
--> '''Sophie''': I am all dirty on the inside because I did bad things with...
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* The Will giving Slave Girl a name - Sophie
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* The Will giving Slave Girl a name - SophieSophie.
* From issue 14.
--> '''Sophie''': My name is Sophie. I am six and a half years old. I can stand on one leg for a real long time. My favorite color is blue-green. I want to be a doctor or a dancer when I am grown up. I am all dirty on the inside because I did bad things with...
--> '''Lying Cat''': LYING
--> '''Sophie''' (hug)
* From issue 14.
--> '''Sophie''': My name is Sophie. I am six and a half years old. I can stand on one leg for a real long time. My favorite color is blue-green. I want to be a doctor or a dancer when I am grown up. I am all dirty on the inside because I did bad things with...
--> '''Lying Cat''': LYING
--> '''Sophie''' (hug)
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* The Will giving Slave Girl a name - Sophie
* The Will giving Slave Girl a name - Sophie
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* Barr inquiring about Hazel
* Izabel deciding to help Alana and Marko in spite of the possibility that either Alana's or Marko's race causing the genocide of Izabel's people
* The Will killing Slave Girl's pimp and his later rescue of her
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* Hazel's birth
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* Izabel deciding to help Alana and Marko in spite of the possibility that either Alana's or Marko's race causing the genocide of Izabel'speople
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* The Will killing Slave Girl's pimp and his later rescue ofher
her.
* Barr inquiring aboutHazelHazel.
* Izabel deciding to help Alana and Marko in spite of the possibility that either Alana's or Marko's race causing the genocide of Izabel's
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* Barr and Alana bond over why Alana fell in love with MarkoMarko.
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* Alana and Marko's first kiss. She finds out he's being transferred from her prison to Blacksite, which is a death sentence. Marko knows, but he's accepted his fate. So Alana shoots off his ball and chain.
--> '''Marko''': Why are you doing this?
--> '''Alana''': Why do you think?
--> ''BigDamnKiss''
* Alana and Marko's first kiss. She finds out he's being transferred from her prison to Blacksite, which is a death sentence. Marko knows, but he's accepted his fate. So Alana shoots off his ball and chain.
--> '''Marko''': Why are you doing this?
--> '''Alana''': Why do you think?
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* Barr inquiring about Hazel
-> '''Barr''': Is it...normal?
-> '''Alana''': No, she's fucking ''perfect''
** Later that issue, Barr holds his granddaughter and says "Hazel eh? Beautiful goddamn name."
* Barr and Alana bond over why Alana fell in love with Marko
* Izabel deciding to help Alana and Marko in spite of the possibility that either Alana's or Marko's race causing the genocide of Izabel's people
* The Will killing Slave Girl's pimp and his later rescue of her
* Barr inquiring about Hazel
-> '''Barr''': Is it...normal?
-> '''Alana''': No, she's fucking ''perfect''
** Later that issue, Barr holds his granddaughter and says "Hazel eh? Beautiful goddamn name."
* Barr and Alana bond over why Alana fell in love with Marko