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* Snow returning to the dwarves with a teapot, saying it's all she can replace when she trashed the cottage. She apologizes, and the "It's you/It's me" exchange puts it into borderline TearJerker territory. And then they all reassure that they'll help her to rescue Charming, every step of the way.
** It was a mug, not a teapot. She was replacing the one Happy complained about her breaking at the beginning of the episode.
** It was a mug, not a teapot. She was replacing the one Happy complained about her breaking at the beginning of the episode.
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* Snow returning to the dwarves with a teapot, mug, saying it's all she can replace when she trashed the cottage. She apologizes, and the "It's you/It's me" exchange puts it into borderline TearJerker territory. And then they all reassure that they'll help her to rescue Charming, every step of the way.
** It was a mug, not a teapot. She was replacing the one Happy complained about her breaking at the beginning of the episode.way.
** It was a mug, not a teapot. She was replacing the one Happy complained about her breaking at the beginning of the episode.
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* Snow returning to the dwarves with a teapot, saying it's all she can replace when she trashed the cottage. She apologizes, and the "It's you/It's me" exchange puts it into borderline TearJerker territory. And then they all reassure that they'll help her to rescue Charming, every step of the way.
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* Snow returning to the dwarves with a teapot, saying it's all she can replace when she trashed the cottage. She apologizes, and the "It's you/It's me" exchange puts it into borderline TearJerker territory. And then they all reassure that they'll help her to rescue Charming, every step of the way.way.
** It was a mug, not a teapot. She was replacing the one Happy complained about her breaking at the beginning of the episode.
** It was a mug, not a teapot. She was replacing the one Happy complained about her breaking at the beginning of the episode.
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* Snow returning to the dwarves with a teapot, saying it's all she can replace when she trashed the cottage. She apologizes, and the "It's you/It's me" exchange puts it into borderline TearJerker territory.
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* Snow returning to the dwarves with a teapot, saying it's all she can replace when she trashed the cottage. She apologizes, and the "It's you/It's me" exchange puts it into borderline TearJerker territory. And then they all reassure that they'll help her to rescue Charming, every step of the way.
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* Granny revealing to Ruby that she's planning to retire soon, and wants to give the cafe to her.
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* Granny revealing to Ruby that she's planning to retire soon, and wants to give the cafe to her.her.
* Snow returning to the dwarves with a teapot, saying it's all she can replace when she trashed the cottage. She apologizes, and the "It's you/It's me" exchange puts it into borderline TearJerker territory.
* Snow returning to the dwarves with a teapot, saying it's all she can replace when she trashed the cottage. She apologizes, and the "It's you/It's me" exchange puts it into borderline TearJerker territory.
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* Dreamy and Nova watching the fireflies, after Belle advised him what she really wanted.
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* Dreamy and Nova watching the fireflies, after Belle advised him what she really wanted.wanted.
* Granny revealing to Ruby that she's planning to retire soon, and wants to give the cafe to her.
* Granny revealing to Ruby that she's planning to retire soon, and wants to give the cafe to her.
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* Emma's willingness to spend time with Henry even though she knows its a distraction by Regina so she can talk to Mr. Gold.
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* Emma's willingness to spend time with Henry even though she knows its a distraction by Regina so she can talk to Mr. Gold.Gold.
* Dreamy and Nova watching the fireflies, after Belle advised him what she really wanted.
* Dreamy and Nova watching the fireflies, after Belle advised him what she really wanted.
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Emma's willingness to spend time with Henry even though she knows its a distraction by Regina so she can talk to Mr. Gold.
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* Emma's willingness to spend time with Henry even though she knows its a distraction by Regina so she can talk to Mr. Gold.
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** Indeed. When Belle returns with straw, he's positively surprized that she actually came back and ''skips'' down stairs. Then he pretends he was spinning the whole time in that awkward embarassed sort of way that people do when they're trying not to be obvious about something. And then later in the real world, when Regina is dangling Belle's cup, Mr. Gold's hands are positively trembling beneath it since he's so afraid it'll get damaged in some way.
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** Indeed. When Belle returns with straw, he's positively surprized that she actually came back and ''skips'' down stairs. Then he pretends he was spinning the whole time in that awkward embarassed sort of way that people do when they're trying not to be obvious about something. And then later in the real world, when Regina is dangling Belle's cup, Mr. Gold's hands are positively trembling beneath it since he's so afraid it'll get damaged in some way.way.
Emma's willingness to spend time with Henry even though she knows its a distraction by Regina so she can talk to Mr. Gold.
Emma's willingness to spend time with Henry even though she knows its a distraction by Regina so she can talk to Mr. Gold.
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* It ends in tears, but Rumpelstiltskin's burgeoning relationship with Belle is incredibly sweet. And even in the real world, we see that he'll go to any lengths to retrieve the one memento he has of her.
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* It ends in tears, but Rumpelstiltskin's burgeoning relationship with Belle is incredibly sweet. And even in the real world, we see that he'll go to any lengths to retrieve the one memento he has of her.her.
** Indeed. When Belle returns with straw, he's positively surprized that she actually came back and ''skips'' down stairs. Then he pretends he was spinning the whole time in that awkward embarassed sort of way that people do when they're trying not to be obvious about something. And then later in the real world, when Regina is dangling Belle's cup, Mr. Gold's hands are positively trembling beneath it since he's so afraid it'll get damaged in some way.
** Indeed. When Belle returns with straw, he's positively surprized that she actually came back and ''skips'' down stairs. Then he pretends he was spinning the whole time in that awkward embarassed sort of way that people do when they're trying not to be obvious about something. And then later in the real world, when Regina is dangling Belle's cup, Mr. Gold's hands are positively trembling beneath it since he's so afraid it'll get damaged in some way.
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* While out on a Valentines Day Girl's Night, Ashley is unable to get over the fact that she and Sean have been unable to truly be together, much less married, due to her taking care of the baby, and him working long hours in order to support her and the baby. Just as she's getting ready to leave, cue Sean with flowers. And a ring and proposal.
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* While out on a Valentines Day Girl's Night, Ashley is unable to get over the fact that she and Sean have been unable to truly be together, much less married, due to her taking care of the baby, and him working long hours in order to support her and the baby. Just as she's getting ready to leave, cue Sean with flowers. And a ring and proposal.proposal.
* It ends in tears, but Rumpelstiltskin's burgeoning relationship with Belle is incredibly sweet. And even in the real world, we see that he'll go to any lengths to retrieve the one memento he has of her.
* It ends in tears, but Rumpelstiltskin's burgeoning relationship with Belle is incredibly sweet. And even in the real world, we see that he'll go to any lengths to retrieve the one memento he has of her.
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* Mary Margaret and David successfully reuniting a dove with its flock, and then ''finally'' getting together.
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* Mary Margaret and David successfully reuniting a dove with its flock, and then ''finally'' getting together.together.
* While out on a Valentines Day Girl's Night, Ashley is unable to get over the fact that she and Sean have been unable to truly be together, much less married, due to her taking care of the baby, and him working long hours in order to support her and the baby. Just as she's getting ready to leave, cue Sean with flowers. And a ring and proposal.
* While out on a Valentines Day Girl's Night, Ashley is unable to get over the fact that she and Sean have been unable to truly be together, much less married, due to her taking care of the baby, and him working long hours in order to support her and the baby. Just as she's getting ready to leave, cue Sean with flowers. And a ring and proposal.
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* The dwarves taking in Snow White after she was forced to tell James she didn't love him, and Grumpy convincing her to wait on taking the potion that will make her forget him.
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* The dwarves taking in Snow White after she was forced to tell James she didn't love him, and Grumpy convincing her to wait on taking the potion that will make her forget him. Even before that, he offers his hand in silence to hold as they walk into forest which she takes.
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** This becomes more {{Heartwarming In Hindsight}}, as he was likely hesitating to applaud due to his bitter memories of what he thought was the love of his own life. But now he recognizes that Snow White has actually found hers.
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* The dwarves taking in Snow White after she was forced to tell James she didn't love him, and Grumpy convincing her to wait on taking the potion that will make her forget him.
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* The dwarves taking in Snow White after she was forced to tell James she didn't love him, and Grumpy convincing her to wait on taking the potion that will make her forget him.him.
* Mary Margaret and David successfully reuniting a dove with its flock, and then ''finally'' getting together.
* Mary Margaret and David successfully reuniting a dove with its flock, and then ''finally'' getting together.
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* Nicholas and Ava reuniting with their father.
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* Nicholas and Ava reuniting with their father.father.
* The dwarves taking in Snow White after she was forced to tell James she didn't love him, and Grumpy convincing her to wait on taking the potion that will make her forget him.
* The dwarves taking in Snow White after she was forced to tell James she didn't love him, and Grumpy convincing her to wait on taking the potion that will make her forget him.
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* Jiminy getting his wish of being turned into a cricket to escape his parents, and heading off to be [[spoiler:Gepetto]]'s conscience.
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* Jiminy getting his wish of being turned into a cricket to escape his parents, and heading off to be [[spoiler:Gepetto]]'s conscience.conscience.
* Nicholas and Ava reuniting with their father.
* Nicholas and Ava reuniting with their father.
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* Emma going to stay with Mary Margret so that she would have someone at the end of Episode Three.
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* Emma going to stay with Mary Margret so that she would have someone at the end of Episode Three.Three.
* Jiminy getting his wish of being turned into a cricket to escape his parents, and heading off to be [[spoiler:Gepetto]]'s conscience.
* Jiminy getting his wish of being turned into a cricket to escape his parents, and heading off to be [[spoiler:Gepetto]]'s conscience.
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'''Prince Charming''': What's 28 years when you have eternal love? I have faith. You'll save me, as I did you.
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'''Prince Charming''': What's 28 years when you have eternal love? I have faith. You'll save me, as I did you.you.
* Emma going to stay with Mary Margret so that she would have someone at the end of Episode Three.
* Emma going to stay with Mary Margret so that she would have someone at the end of Episode Three.
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'''Prince Charming''': What's 28 years when you have eternal love? I have faith. You'll save me as I did you.
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'''Prince Charming''': What's 28 years when you have eternal love? I have faith. You'll save me me, as I did you.
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* As he lays dying, Prince Charming smiles when he sees that Emma got away.
* Snow White trying to wake up Prince Charming with a kiss.
* Snow White putting on a brave face for Prince Charming before he goes to deliver Emma to the wardrobe, only to break down in cries of agony for her lost baby after he leaves.
* Snow White trying to wake up Prince Charming with a kiss.
* Snow White putting on a brave face for Prince Charming before he goes to deliver Emma to the wardrobe, only to break down in cries of agony for her lost baby after he leaves.
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* As he lays dying, Prince Charming's little smile when he realizes Emma got away.
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* As he lays dying, Prince Charming's little smile Charming smiles when he realizes sees that Emma got away.
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* When Snow White starts to rethink whole wardrobe idea because she doesn't want to leave Charming, he says easily the most romantic line in the pilot.
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* When Snow White starts to rethink whole wardrobe idea because she doesn't want to leave Charming, he says his response is easily the most romantic line in the pilot.
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-->'''Snow White''': "He said it would be on her ''28th'' birthday!"\\
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-->'''Snow White''': "He He said it would be on her ''28th'' birthday!"\\birthday!\\
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* Snow White putting on a brave face for Prince Charming before he goes to deliver Emma to the wardrobe, only to break down in cries of agony for her lost baby after he leaves.
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* Snow White putting on a brave face for Prince Charming before he goes to deliver Emma to the wardrobe, only to break down in cries of agony for her lost baby after he leaves.leaves.
* When Snow White starts to rethink whole wardrobe idea because she doesn't want to leave Charming, he says easily the most romantic line in the pilot.
-->'''Snow White''': "He said it would be on her ''28th'' birthday!"\\
'''Prince Charming''': What's 28 years when you have eternal love? I have faith. You'll save me as I did you.
* When Snow White starts to rethink whole wardrobe idea because she doesn't want to leave Charming, he says easily the most romantic line in the pilot.
-->'''Snow White''': "He said it would be on her ''28th'' birthday!"\\
'''Prince Charming''': What's 28 years when you have eternal love? I have faith. You'll save me as I did you.
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* Prince Charming's little smile as he lays dying, when he realizes Emma got away.
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* As he lays dying, Prince Charming's little smile as he lays dying, when he realizes Emma got away.
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* Snow White putting on a brave face for Prince Charming before he goes to deliver Emma to the wardrobe, only to break down into cries of agony for her lost baby after he leaves.
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* Snow White putting on a brave face for Prince Charming before he goes to deliver Emma to the wardrobe, only to break down into in cries of agony for her lost baby after he leaves.
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* Snow White putting on a brave face for Prince Charming before he goes to deliver Emma to the wardrobe, only to break down in cries of agony for her lost baby after he leaves.
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* Snow White putting on a brave face for Prince Charming before he goes to deliver Emma to the wardrobe, only to break down in into cries of agony for her lost baby after he leaves.
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* Snow White trying to wake up Prince Charming with a kiss.
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* Snow White trying to wake up Prince Charming with a kiss.kiss.
* Snow White putting on a brave face for Prince Charming before he goes to deliver Emma to the wardrobe, only to break down in cries of agony for her lost baby after he leaves.
* Snow White putting on a brave face for Prince Charming before he goes to deliver Emma to the wardrobe, only to break down in cries of agony for her lost baby after he leaves.
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* The end of the pilot, with the clock moving again now that Emma's settled into the town.
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* The end of the pilot, with the clock moving again now that Emma's settled into the town.town.
* Prince Charming's little smile as he lays dying, when he realizes Emma got away.
* Snow White trying to wake up Prince Charming with a kiss.
* Prince Charming's little smile as he lays dying, when he realizes Emma got away.
* Snow White trying to wake up Prince Charming with a kiss.
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* Grumpy begrudgingly applauding during Snow White's wedding.
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* Grumpy begrudgingly applauding during Snow White's wedding.wedding.
* The end of the pilot, with the clock moving again now that Emma's settled into the town.
* The end of the pilot, with the clock moving again now that Emma's settled into the town.
