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* The scene when Edith and Momone are chatting after busting shame that Edith's Mother enters the Cafe.
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* The scene when Edith and Momone (Creator/SylvieTestud) are chatting after busting shame that Edith's Mother enters the Cafe.
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* Some of the scenes with Edith and her Father are sweet, but the ending, when he manages to buy the doll she saw in the window, is lovely.
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* Some of the scenes with Edith and her Father father are sweet, but the ending, when he manages to buy the doll she saw in the window, is lovely.
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* The scene with Creator/MarleneDietrich greeting her after she sang and thanking her for sending her to Paris. It's the start of a great friendship.
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* The scene with Creator/MarleneDietrich greeting her after she sang and thanking her for sending her to Paris. It's Paris, marking the start of a great friendship.
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* The scene with Creator/MarleneDietrich greeting her after she sang and thanking her for sending her to Paris, it's the start of a great friendship.
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* The scene with Creator/MarleneDietrich greeting her after she sang and thanking her for sending her to Paris, it's Paris. It's the start of a great friendship.
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* After little Edith removes her eye bandage and reacts to everything, her Grandmother, who hasn't been the warmest around her, responds joy that she can see.
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* After little Edith removes her eye bandage and reacts to everything, her Grandmother, grandmother, who hasn't been the warmest around her, responds joy that she can see.
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* Titine (Creator/EmmanuelleSeigner), a prostitute from the brothel little Edith is raised, becomes a ParentalSubstitute, taking care of her and loving her like a mother would.
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* Titine (Creator/EmmanuelleSeigner), a prostitute [[HookerWithAHeartOfGold prostitute]] from the brothel little Edith is raised, raised in, becomes a ParentalSubstitute, ParentalSubstitute to her, taking care of her and loving her like a mother would.
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* Titine (Creator/EmmanuelleSeigner), a prostitute from the brothel little Edith is raised, becomes a ParentalSubstitute, lovingly taking care of her.
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* Titine (Creator/EmmanuelleSeigner), a prostitute from the brothel little Edith is raised, becomes a ParentalSubstitute, lovingly taking care of her.her and loving her like a mother would.
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* Titine (Creator/EmmanuelleSeignier), a prostitute from the brothel little Edith is raised, becomes a ParentalSubstitute, lovingly taking care of her.
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* Titine (Creator/EmmanuelleSeignier), (Creator/EmmanuelleSeigner), a prostitute from the brothel little Edith is raised, becomes a ParentalSubstitute, lovingly taking care of her.
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* Titine, a prostitute from the brothel little Edith is raised, becomes a ParentalSubstitute, lovingly taking care of her.
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* Titine, Titine (Creator/EmmanuelleSeignier), a prostitute from the brothel little Edith is raised, becomes a ParentalSubstitute, lovingly taking care of her.
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* Titine, a prostitute from the brothel little Edith is raised, becomes a ParentalSubstitute, lovingly taking care of her.
* After little Edith removes her eye bandage and reacts to everything, her Grandmother, who hasn't been the warmest around her, responds joy that she can see.
* Some of the scenes with Edith and her Father are sweet, but the ending, when he manages to buy the doll she saw in the window, is lovely.
* The scene when Edith and Momone are chatting after busting shame that Edith's Mother enters the Cafe.
* The scene with Creator/MarleneDietrich greeting her after she sang and thanking her for sending her to Paris, it's the start of a great friendship.
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* After little Edith removes her eye bandage and reacts to everything, her Grandmother, who hasn't been the warmest around her, responds joy that she can see.
* Some of the scenes with Edith and her Father are sweet, but the ending, when he manages to buy the doll she saw in the window, is lovely.
* The scene when Edith and Momone are chatting after busting shame that Edith's Mother enters the Cafe.
* The scene with Creator/MarleneDietrich greeting her after she sang and thanking her for sending her to Paris, it's the start of a great friendship.
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