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* Meta example: One of the first place [[http://whatpumpkin.tumblr.com/post/170158644280/honespy-i-really-love-these-two victors]] for the Hiveswap Comics contest features a much more sympathetic take on [[NightmareFetishist Kuprum]] and [[NightmareFuel Folykl]], with Kuprum protecting a weak-since-birth Folykl, giving her special headphones, and ultimately letting the fatigue-ridden latter ride on his backpack.
* Another example from the Hiveswap Comics Contest: The [[http://whatpumpkin.tumblr.com/post/171208239335/maidofsalt-god-this-took-me-weeks-to 2/23/18 winning comic]] told how someone had lost their friends due to life issues, particularly school. When Hiveswap was first released, they couldn't play it due to the after-mentioned scholarly issues. Then, an old friend messaged them about Hiveswap, inviting the artist to play the game together. This resulted in the friends being reunited and the artist finding light in their life again.
* The Hiveswap Comics Contest in general is this, given how many people have entered, and the different types of comics they've entered with.
* Another example from the Hiveswap Comics Contest: The [[http://whatpumpkin.tumblr.com/post/171208239335/maidofsalt-god-this-took-me-weeks-to 2/23/18 winning comic]] told how someone had lost their friends due to life issues, particularly school. When Hiveswap was first released, they couldn't play it due to the after-mentioned scholarly issues. Then, an old friend messaged them about Hiveswap, inviting the artist to play the game together. This resulted in the friends being reunited and the artist finding light in their life again.
* The Hiveswap Comics Contest in general is this, given how many people have entered, and the different types of comics they've entered with.
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Added a bit from Act 2. Is calling it "moirallegiance" passe? If so, just change it to "friendship."
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* Xefros's determined declaration that he'll protect Joey in an upcoming fight with Azdaja. When the Goldblood knocks Joey down, Xefros displays a much stronger psychic power than usual and manages to win.
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* Xefros's determined declaration that he'll protect Joey in an upcoming fight with Azdaja. When the Goldblood knocks Joey down, Xefros displays a much stronger psychic power than usual [[BerserkButton goes berserk]] and manages uses his telekinesis (previously shown to win.be very weak) to ''absolutely mop the floor'' with Azdaja, winning their strife duel in one attack.
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* Between the cerulean/blue and purple cars, Joey ''finally'' gets it through to Xefros that Dammek isn't a good friend, and that he should think for himself. Xefros responds with his thoughts on their experiences so far, showing a deep understanding of the situation by bringing up a problem inherent to the Tetrarchs' revolution that Dammek never discussed. Later, between the purple car and the conductor's car, he comes up with an answer. For all his self-deprecation, Xefros is anything but stupid, and Joey is slowly helping him realize that. With Joey helping Xefros improve as a person and Xefros vowing to protect his new friend, the two have developed a healthier moirallegiance in half a day than Xefros and Dammek did in years.
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* Xefros's determined declaration that he'll protect Joey in an upcoming fight with Azdaja. When the Goldblood knocks Joey down, Xefros displays a much stronger psychic power than usual and manages to win.
* Azdaja and Konyyl [[AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther making up and having a good, long hug]] after they'd spent the better portion of your initial time in the Gold/Olive car screaming at each other, finally apologising to each other after their argument.
* Azdaja and Konyyl [[AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther making up and having a good, long hug]] after they'd spent the better portion of your initial time in the Gold/Olive car screaming at each other, finally apologising to each other after their argument.
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** Afterwards, Xefros's attempts to comfort Joey and assuage her guilt afterwards. Telling her that he was the one who killed him, not her, and that she can let him shoulder the guilt for the death.
* Xefros's determined declaration that he'll protect Joey in an upcoming fight with Azdaja.
* Azdaja and Konyyl making up and having a good, long hug after they'd spent the better portion of your initial time in the Gold/Olive car screaming at each other. Finally making up after their argument.
* Xefros's determined declaration that he'll protect Joey in an upcoming fight with Azdaja.
* Azdaja and Konyyl making up and having a good, long hug after they'd spent the better portion of your initial time in the Gold/Olive car screaming at each other. Finally making up after their argument.
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** Afterwards, Xefros's Xefros attempts to comfort Joey and assuage her guilt afterwards. Telling afterwards, telling her that he was the one who killed him, not her, and that she can let him shoulder the guilt for the death.
* Xefros's determined declaration that he'll protect Joey in an upcoming fight with Azdaja.
* Azdaja and Konyyl making up and having a good, long hug after they'd spent the better portion of your initial time in the Gold/Olive car screaming at each other. Finally making up after their argument.
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* Xefros's determined declaration that he'll protect Joey in an upcoming fight with Azdaja.
* Azdaja and Konyyl making up and having a good, long hug after they'd spent the better portion of your initial time in the Gold/Olive car screaming at each other. Finally making up after their argument.
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** Afterwards, Xefros's attempts to comfort Joey and assuage her guilt afterwards. Telling her that he was the one who killed him, not her, and that she can let him shoulder the guilt for the death.
* Xefros's determined declaration that he'll protect Joey in an upcoming fight with Azdaja.
* Azdaja and Konyyl making up and having a good, long hug after they'd spent the better portion of your initial time in the Gold/Olive car screaming at each other. Finally making up after their argument.
* Xefros's determined declaration that he'll protect Joey in an upcoming fight with Azdaja.
* Azdaja and Konyyl making up and having a good, long hug after they'd spent the better portion of your initial time in the Gold/Olive car screaming at each other. Finally making up after their argument.
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* Towards the end of Act 2, Xefros kills Baizli in order to save Joey.
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Moments subpages (such as Heartwarming, Tearjerker etc.) are Spoilers Off pages.
!'''As a Moments subpage, [[Administrivia/SpoilersOff all spoilers are unmarked.]] Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned.'''
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* What does Joey say upon learning how bad [[spoiler:Dammek]] is to Xefros?
--> '''Joey''': i am going to do my absolute best to raise your standard of friendship where having your name remembered is not the nicest thing anyone has ever done for you.
--> '''Joey''': i am going to do my absolute best to raise your standard of friendship where having your name remembered is not the nicest thing anyone has ever done for you.
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* What does Joey say upon learning how bad [[spoiler:Dammek]] Dammek is to Xefros?
-->'''Joey''': '''Joey:''' i am going to do my absolute best to raise your standard of friendship where having your name remembered is not the nicest thing anyone has ever done for you.
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--> '''Joey''': [[BigNo NO!]]
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--> '''Joey''': '''Joey:''' [[LittleNo no!]]
-->'''Joey''': '''Joey:''' [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness No!]]
-->'''Joey''': '''Joey:''' [[BigNo NO!]]
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* Another example from the Hiveswap Comics Contest: The [[http://whatpumpkin.tumblr.com/post/171208239335/maidofsalt-god-this-took-me-weeks-to 2/23/18 winning comic]] told how a girl had lost her friends due to life issues, particularly school. When Hiveswap was first released, she couldn't play it due to the after-mentioned scholarly issues. Then, an old friend messaged her about Hiveswap, inviting the artist to play the game together. This resulted in the friends being reunited and the artist finding light in her life again.
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* Another example from the Hiveswap Comics Contest: The [[http://whatpumpkin.tumblr.com/post/171208239335/maidofsalt-god-this-took-me-weeks-to 2/23/18 winning comic]] told how a girl someone had lost her their friends due to life issues, particularly school. When Hiveswap was first released, she they couldn't play it due to the after-mentioned scholarly issues. Then, an old friend messaged her them about Hiveswap, inviting the artist to play the game together. This resulted in the friends being reunited and the artist finding light in her their life again.
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* Another example from the Hiveswap Comics Contest: The [[http://whatpumpkin.tumblr.com/post/171208239335/maidofsalt-god-this-took-me-weeks-to 2/23/17 winning comic]] told how a girl had lost her friends due to life issues, particularly school. When Hiveswap was first released, she couldn't play it due to the after-mentioned scholarly issues. Then, an old friend messaged her about Hiveswap, inviting the artist to play the game together. This resulted in the friends being reunited and the artist finding light in her life again.
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* Another example from the Hiveswap Comics Contest: The [[http://whatpumpkin.tumblr.com/post/171208239335/maidofsalt-god-this-took-me-weeks-to 2/23/17 2/23/18 winning comic]] told how a girl had lost her friends due to life issues, particularly school. When Hiveswap was first released, she couldn't play it due to the after-mentioned scholarly issues. Then, an old friend messaged her about Hiveswap, inviting the artist to play the game together. This resulted in the friends being reunited and the artist finding light in her life again.
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* [[http://whatpumpkin.tumblr.com/post/171869905780/its-the-final-troll-call-at-leastfor-thisOn the last Troll Call for Act 2]], we had this message:
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* [[http://whatpumpkin.tumblr.com/post/171869905780/its-the-final-troll-call-at-leastfor-thisOn com/post/171869905780/its-the-final-troll-call-at-leastfor-this On the last Troll Call for Act 2]], we had this message:
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* The Hiveswap Comics Contest in general is this, given how many people have entered, and the different types of comics they've entered with.
* [[http://whatpumpkin.tumblr.com/post/171869905780/its-the-final-troll-call-at-leastfor-thisOn the last Troll Call for Act 2]], we had this message:
--> Just a brief word, if you’ll permit me. These have been a lot of fun. The enthusiasm from all of y’all whenever a new Troll Call hits, the flood of art and cosplay… it means a lot. Kept us warm through the long winter, and all that. I hope that wherever you all are, you’re doing well, and we’ll see you again soon. Thank you, from all of us. –Cohen
* [[http://whatpumpkin.tumblr.com/post/171869905780/its-the-final-troll-call-at-leastfor-thisOn the last Troll Call for Act 2]], we had this message:
--> Just a brief word, if you’ll permit me. These have been a lot of fun. The enthusiasm from all of y’all whenever a new Troll Call hits, the flood of art and cosplay… it means a lot. Kept us warm through the long winter, and all that. I hope that wherever you all are, you’re doing well, and we’ll see you again soon. Thank you, from all of us. –Cohen
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* Another example from the Hiveswap Comics Contest: The [[http://whatpumpkin.tumblr.com/post/171208239335/maidofsalt-god-this-took-me-weeks-to 2/23/17 winning comic]] told how a girl had lost her friends due to life issues, particularly school. When Hiveswap was first released, she couldn't play it due to the after-mentioned scholarly issues. Then, an old friend messaged her about Hiveswap, inviting the artist to play the game together. This resulted in the friends being reunited and the artist finding light in her life again.
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* Meta example: One of the first place [[http://whatpumpkin.tumblr.com/post/170158644280/honespy-i-really-love-these-two#notes victors]] for the Hiveswap Comics contest features a much more sympathetic take on [[NightmareFetishist Kuprum]] and [[NightmareFuel Folykl]], with Kuprum protecting a weak-since-birth Folykl, giving her special headphones, and ultimately letting the fatigue-ridden latter ride on his backpack.
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* Meta example: One of the first place [[http://whatpumpkin.tumblr.com/post/170158644280/honespy-i-really-love-these-two#notes com/post/170158644280/honespy-i-really-love-these-two victors]] for the Hiveswap Comics contest features a much more sympathetic take on [[NightmareFetishist Kuprum]] and [[NightmareFuel Folykl]], with Kuprum protecting a weak-since-birth Folykl, giving her special headphones, and ultimately letting the fatigue-ridden latter ride on his backpack.
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* Meta example: One of the first place [[http://whatpumpkin.tumblr.com/post/170158644280/honespy-i-really-love-these-two#notes victors]] for the Hiveswap Comics contest features a much more sympathetic take on [[NightmareFetishist Kuprum]] and [[NightmareFuel Folykl]], with Kuprum protecting a weak-since-birth Folykl, giving her special headphones, and ultimately letting the fatigue-ridden latter ride on his backpack.
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* Xefros' adorable little Christmas-tree blush when he unthinkingly grabs ahold of Joey's jacket.
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Seemed odd to not point out two of the three options has Joey take this so seriously she drops her quirk.
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--> '''Joey''': No![[OOCIsSeriousBusiness No!]]
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--> '''Joey''': [[LittleNono!]][[LittleNo no!]]
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* After Xefros spends a while casually talking about how he's gutterblood trash, what are Joey's options to respond?
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* After Xefros spends a while casually talking about how he's gutterblood trash, what are Joey's options to respond?
[[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre respond]]?
--> '''Joey''':no![[LittleNono!]]
--> '''Joey''':
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* If you try to use the flaregun on Harley Manor with the monsters (and Joey) inside, Jude responds with this:
--> [[WhatYouAreInTheDark "But as a last resort... no. Never.]] If it comes to that, you'll fight your way in there and save your sister yourself, overwhelming odds and certain death be damned!"
--> [[WhatYouAreInTheDark "But as a last resort... no. Never.]] If it comes to that, you'll fight your way in there and save your sister yourself, overwhelming odds and certain death be damned!"
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* After Xefros spends a while casually talking about how he's gutterblood trash, what are Joey's options to respond?
--> '''Joey''': no!
--> '''Joey''': No!
--> '''Joey''': NO!
--> '''Joey''': no!
--> '''Joey''': No!
--> '''Joey''': NO!
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--> '''Joey''': i am going to do my absolute best to raise your standard of friendship where having your name remembered is not the nicest thing anyone has ever done for you.you.
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* What does Joey say upon learning how bad [[spoiler:Dammek]] is to Xefros?
--> '''Joey''': i am going to do my absolute best to raise your standard of friendship where having your name remembered is not the nicest thing anyone has ever done for you.
--> '''Joey''': i am going to do my absolute best to raise your standard of friendship where having your name remembered is not the nicest thing anyone has ever done for you.
