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*** Her almost palpable The sheer ferocity of her hatred of [[spoiler: Fossor]] for ''daring'' to think that he's going take Felicity away. The sheer ferocity of And then there's her equally intense desire to protect her roommate is undeniable.from him or anything else, which she declares to Herbie.
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** [[spoiler: Then Asenath steps up to reveal that she's Shiori's half-sister and declares that being Shiori's brother also makes him her brother. Columbus agrees and pulls both of his sisters into a hug.]]
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** [[spoiler: Then Asenath steps up to reveal that she's Shiori's half-sister and declares that being Shiori's brother also makes him her brother. Columbus agrees and pulls both of his sisters into a hug.]]]]
* The talk between Gaia and Avalon in [[https://ceruleanscrawling.wordpress.com/2016/06/12/mini-interlude-2-avalon/ Avalon's mini-interlude]], which ends with a bit of good natured ribbing between the two of them and a hug.
** Similarly, her description of her relationship with Seller and everything he did for her. It's pretty obvious that he's her father in all but name.
** Said interlude also features Avalon reflecting on her relationship with Flick, which is basically a downpour of heartwarming.
*** While Avalon makes a point of being on a LastNameBasis with Flick out loud, she internally refers to her roommate exclusively as Felicity.
*** As long as no one (especially Felicity) is looking, Avalon plays with and talks to Herbie just like Flick does. [[spoiler: She's also the one who got him his eyes, using Scout as an intermediary.]]
*** Avalon was impressed by Felicity's willingness to work to strengthen and better herself when she asked her for help, and deeply touched by when she defended her from Trice's attack.
---> ''Sands and the boys had willingly stayed too. All willing to fight, all willing to risk themselves just for her, in spite of Trice’s offer to let them leave safely. They stayed, all of them. And yet, thinking of Felicity’s choice to stay was… it was just ''different'' than the others. It made her feel… it made her feel…''
*** Her almost palpable hatred of [[spoiler: Fossor]] for ''daring'' to think that he's going take Felicity away. The sheer ferocity of her desire to protect her roommate is undeniable.
*** The AngerBornOfWorry Avalon feels when she thinks of how Felicity was literally (and easily) abducted by aliens, even if it was by accident.
*** And finally, her struggle to overcome her hangups and admit her feelings for Felicity to herself. At this point it should be obvious that she has it ''bad'' for Flick.
* Sean Gerardo's relationship with his uncles Sebastian and Mateo (who isn't related to Sean, but is Seb's boyfriend). He's closer to them than his usually absent parents.
** Ever wonder why Sean handled Flick's claim that [[spoiler: Strangers aren't all evil]] so well, especially compared to his fellow Heretic-born Sands? It's because of his uncles. [[spoiler: Mateo, who Sean always thought was a bystander, is actually a werewolf who went full on PapaWolf mode when he found a gang threatening Sean as a kid. Sean didn't realize what happened that day until he went through the Edge and saw it from Sebastian's perspective. This left him confused until Flick told him about Asenath and he realized that not all Alters are evil.]]
*** Building on that. Sean's Heretic weapon is a robot dog that protects him. [[spoiler: His beloved uncle is a werewolf who saved his life]]. This is not a coincidence.
* The talk between Gaia and Avalon in [[https://ceruleanscrawling.wordpress.com/2016/06/12/mini-interlude-2-avalon/ Avalon's mini-interlude]], which ends with a bit of good natured ribbing between the two of them and a hug.
** Similarly, her description of her relationship with Seller and everything he did for her. It's pretty obvious that he's her father in all but name.
** Said interlude also features Avalon reflecting on her relationship with Flick, which is basically a downpour of heartwarming.
*** While Avalon makes a point of being on a LastNameBasis with Flick out loud, she internally refers to her roommate exclusively as Felicity.
*** As long as no one (especially Felicity) is looking, Avalon plays with and talks to Herbie just like Flick does. [[spoiler: She's also the one who got him his eyes, using Scout as an intermediary.]]
*** Avalon was impressed by Felicity's willingness to work to strengthen and better herself when she asked her for help, and deeply touched by when she defended her from Trice's attack.
---> ''Sands and the boys had willingly stayed too. All willing to fight, all willing to risk themselves just for her, in spite of Trice’s offer to let them leave safely. They stayed, all of them. And yet, thinking of Felicity’s choice to stay was… it was just ''different'' than the others. It made her feel… it made her feel…''
*** Her almost palpable hatred of [[spoiler: Fossor]] for ''daring'' to think that he's going take Felicity away. The sheer ferocity of her desire to protect her roommate is undeniable.
*** The AngerBornOfWorry Avalon feels when she thinks of how Felicity was literally (and easily) abducted by aliens, even if it was by accident.
*** And finally, her struggle to overcome her hangups and admit her feelings for Felicity to herself. At this point it should be obvious that she has it ''bad'' for Flick.
* Sean Gerardo's relationship with his uncles Sebastian and Mateo (who isn't related to Sean, but is Seb's boyfriend). He's closer to them than his usually absent parents.
** Ever wonder why Sean handled Flick's claim that [[spoiler: Strangers aren't all evil]] so well, especially compared to his fellow Heretic-born Sands? It's because of his uncles. [[spoiler: Mateo, who Sean always thought was a bystander, is actually a werewolf who went full on PapaWolf mode when he found a gang threatening Sean as a kid. Sean didn't realize what happened that day until he went through the Edge and saw it from Sebastian's perspective. This left him confused until Flick told him about Asenath and he realized that not all Alters are evil.]]
*** Building on that. Sean's Heretic weapon is a robot dog that protects him. [[spoiler: His beloved uncle is a werewolf who saved his life]]. This is not a coincidence.
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* Shiori's reunion with Columbus. She basically glomps him as he lands in a pool of water, pulling him into a tight hug and apologizing for the way she was acting. He stands there stunned for a few seconds ([[spoiler:he just got randomly teleported to another planet after all]]), then returns the hug.
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* Shiori's reunion with Columbus. She basically glomps him as he lands in a pool of water, pulling him into a tight hug and apologizing for the way she was acting. He stands there stunned for a few seconds ([[spoiler:he just got randomly teleported to another planet after all]]), then returns the hug.
** Later, she takes him aside and confesses her [[DarkSecret "Dark" Secret]] to him. Columbus is shocked for a few seconds before declaring it to be the coolest thing he's ever heard.
--> '''Columbus''': You're like {{ComicBook/Blade}}. Only better because you're Shiori.
--> '''Shiori''': B-bu-but the—Crossroads was talking about how every St-Stranger is evil and all that. And [[spoiler: vampires]] are… you know.
--> '''Columbus''': Shy, they can say anything they want. They could get every single person who has ever gone to that school, every Heretic who has ever existed to line up and tell me about how [[spoiler: evil vampires are]], all of them repeating over and over in one hundred percent agreement. And I’d tell every last one to screw themselves. Because you’re my sister. And I love you.
*** [[spoiler: Then Asenath steps up and reveals that she's Shiori's half-sister and declares that being Shiori's brother also makes him her brother. Columbus agrees and pulls both of his sisters into a hug.]]
** Later, she takes him aside and confesses her [[DarkSecret "Dark" Secret]] to him. Columbus is shocked for a few seconds before declaring it to be the coolest thing he's ever heard.
--> '''Columbus''': You're like {{ComicBook/Blade}}. Only better because you're Shiori.
--> '''Shiori''': B-bu-but the—Crossroads was talking about how every St-Stranger is evil and all that. And [[spoiler: vampires]] are… you know.
--> '''Columbus''': Shy, they can say anything they want. They could get every single person who has ever gone to that school, every Heretic who has ever existed to line up and tell me about how [[spoiler: evil vampires are]], all of them repeating over and over in one hundred percent agreement. And I’d tell every last one to screw themselves. Because you’re my sister. And I love you.
*** [[spoiler: Then Asenath steps up and reveals that she's Shiori's half-sister and declares that being Shiori's brother also makes him her brother. Columbus agrees and pulls both of his sisters into a hug.]]
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* Shiori's reunion with Columbus. She basically glomps him as he lands in a pool of water, pulling him into a tight hug and apologizing for the way she was acting. He stands there stunned for a few seconds ([[spoiler: he ([[spoiler:he just got randomly teleported to another planet after all]]), then returns the hug.
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--> '''Gaia''': If you learn nothing else in your life, know this, Felicity. [[spoiler: Your mother]] is the most heroic person I have ever known in my long life.
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--> '''Gaia''': If you learn nothing else in your life, know this, Felicity. [[spoiler: Your mother]] is the most heroic person I have ever known in my long life.life.
* Shiori's reunion with Columbus. She basically glomps him as he lands in a pool of water, pulling him into a tight hug and apologizing for the way she was acting. He stands there stunned for a few seconds ([[spoiler: he just got randomly teleported to another planet after all]]), then returns the hug.
* Shiori's reunion with Columbus. She basically glomps him as he lands in a pool of water, pulling him into a tight hug and apologizing for the way she was acting. He stands there stunned for a few seconds ([[spoiler: he just got randomly teleported to another planet after all]]), then returns the hug.
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* While most of it is distressing, there is one standout moment during the conversation Gaia has with Flick and Shiori ([[spoiler:and Asenath]]), when Gaia makes a point of [[spoiler: affirming to Flick how much of a hero her mother was.]]
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* While most of it is distressing, there is one standout moment during the conversation Gaia has with Flick and Shiori ([[spoiler:and Asenath]]), Asenath]]) when Gaia makes a point of [[spoiler: affirming to Flick how much of a hero her mother was.is.]]
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*** [[spoiler: The reunion of Asenath and Shiori. Senny instantly recognizes her sister's scent when arriving on the Meregan ship and quickly pulls Shiori into a hug and starts comforting her. She also reveals Shiori's birth name. Reathma.]]
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*** [[spoiler: The reunion of Asenath and Shiori. Senny instantly recognizes her sister's scent when arriving on the Meregan ship and quickly pulls Shiori into a hug and starts comforting her. She also reveals Shiori's birth name. Reathma.]]]]
* While most of it is distressing, there is one standout moment during the conversation Gaia has with Flick and Shiori ([[spoiler:and Asenath]]), when Gaia makes a point of [[spoiler: affirming to Flick how much of a hero her mother was.]]
--> '''Gaia''': If you learn nothing else in your life, know this, Felicity. [[spoiler: Your mother]] is the most heroic person I have ever known in my long life.
* While most of it is distressing, there is one standout moment during the conversation Gaia has with Flick and Shiori ([[spoiler:and Asenath]]), when Gaia makes a point of [[spoiler: affirming to Flick how much of a hero her mother was.]]
--> '''Gaia''': If you learn nothing else in your life, know this, Felicity. [[spoiler: Your mother]] is the most heroic person I have ever known in my long life.
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** And Shiori's [[TearsOfJoy reaction]] to seeing an image of Asenath[[spoiler:, her half-sister, for the first time in her life.]]
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*** [[spoiler: The reunion of Asenath and Shiori. Senny instantly recognizes her sister's scent when arriving on the Meregan ship and quickly pulls Shiori into a hug and starts comforting her. She also reveals Shiori's birth name. Reathma.]]
*** [[spoiler: The reunion of Asenath and Shiori. Senny instantly recognizes her sister's scent when arriving on the Meregan ship and quickly pulls Shiori into a hug and starts comforting her. She also reveals Shiori's birth name. Reathma.]]
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* Flick describing Asenath and how much she trusts her to the Meregan so can summon her to help save their children. [[spoiler: Made doubly heartwarming by the fact that she's also reiterating the information to Shiori, Asenath's half-sister who was despairing over her vampiric heritage just the day before.]]
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* Flick describing Asenath and how much she trusts her to the Meregan so they can summon her to help save their children. [[spoiler: Made doubly heartwarming by the fact that because she's also reiterating the information to Shiori, Asenath's half-sister who was despairing over her vampiric heritage just the day before.]]
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--> '''Asenath''': Bring me. You don’t have to ask, Flick. It’s children. Give me a minute to warn Twister.
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--> '''Asenath''': Bring me. You don’t have to ask, Flick. It’s children. Give me a minute to warn Twister.
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* Flick describing Asenath and how much she trusts her to the Meregan so can summon her to help save their children. [[spoiler: Made doubly heartwarming by the fact that she's also reiterating the information to Shiori, Asenath's half-sister who was despairing over her vampiric heritage just the day before.
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* Flick describing Asenath and how much she trusts her to the Meregan so can summon her to help save their children. [[spoiler: Made doubly heartwarming by the fact that she's also reiterating the information to Shiori, Asenath's half-sister who was despairing over her vampiric heritage just the day before. ]]
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** And Shiori's [[TearsOfJoy reaction]] to seeing an image of Asenath[[spoiler:, her half-sister, for the first time in her life.
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** And Shiori's [[TearsOfJoy reaction]] to seeing an image of Asenath[[spoiler:, her half-sister, for the first time in her life.]]
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* Flick describing Asenath and how much she trusts her to the Meregan so can summon her to help save their children.
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* Flick describing Asenath and how much she trusts her to the Meregan so can summon her to help save their children. [[spoiler: Made doubly heartwarming by the fact that she's also reiterating the information to Shiori, Asenath's half-sister who was despairing over her vampiric heritage just the day before.
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--> '''Asenath''': Bring me. You don’t have to ask, Flick. It’s children. Give me a minute to warn Twister.Twister.
** And Shiori's [[TearsOfJoy reaction]] to seeing an image of Asenath[[spoiler:, her half-sister, for the first time in her life.
** And Shiori's [[TearsOfJoy reaction]] to seeing an image of Asenath[[spoiler:, her half-sister, for the first time in her life.
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--> Bring me. You don’t have to ask, Flick. It’s children. Give me a minute to warn Twister.
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* Flick describing Asenath and how much she trusts her [[spoiler: to the Meregan so can summon her to help save their children]].
--> '''Flick''': So if certain people refuse to consider Asenath to be human, then we can’t use the word humanity to mean compassion, kindness, and just… plain caring about other people anymore. Because I’ve never met anyone in my life who embodies those concepts more than Asenath. She’s a vampire, but she’s not a threat. She’s not a monster. She’s my friend. She saved my life. She’s a hero.
--> '''Flick''': So if certain people refuse to consider Asenath to be human, then we can’t use the word humanity to mean compassion, kindness, and just… plain caring about other people anymore. Because I’ve never met anyone in my life who embodies those concepts more than Asenath. She’s a vampire, but she’s not a threat. She’s not a monster. She’s my friend. She saved my life. She’s a hero.
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* Flick describing Asenath and how much she trusts her [[spoiler: to the Meregan so can summon her to help save their children]].
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--> '''Flick''': So if certain people refuse to consider Asenath to be human, then we can’t use the word humanity to mean compassion, kindness, and just… plain caring about other people anymore. Because I’ve never met anyone in my life who embodies those concepts more than Asenath. She’s a vampire, but she’s not a threat. She’s not a monster. She’s my friend. She saved my life. She’s ahero.hero.
** Contact with Asenath is established and Flick starts to explain the situation before Senny cuts her off and proves her right.
--> Bring me. You don’t have to ask, Flick. It’s children. Give me a minute to warn Twister.
--> '''Flick''': So if certain people refuse to consider Asenath to be human, then we can’t use the word humanity to mean compassion, kindness, and just… plain caring about other people anymore. Because I’ve never met anyone in my life who embodies those concepts more than Asenath. She’s a vampire, but she’s not a threat. She’s not a monster. She’s my friend. She saved my life. She’s a
** Contact with Asenath is established and Flick starts to explain the situation before Senny cuts her off and proves her right.
--> Bring me. You don’t have to ask, Flick. It’s children. Give me a minute to warn Twister.
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** Flick and Shiori wound up on the Meregan's world because [[spoiler: their emergency beacon mistook Flick for her mother when she was helping Shiori, a HalfHumanHybrid, come to terms with her heritage. It was the act of treating a part-Alter with compassion (on top of their shared genetics) that made the beacon confuse Flick with Joselyn.]]
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** Flick and Shiori wound up on the Meregan's world because [[spoiler: their emergency beacon mistook Flick for her mother when she was helping Shiori, a HalfHumanHybrid, come to terms with her heritage. It was the act of treating a part-Alter with compassion (on top of their shared genetics) that made the beacon confuse Flick with Joselyn.]]]]
* Flick describing Asenath and how much she trusts her [[spoiler: to the Meregan so can summon her to help save their children]].
--> '''Flick''': So if certain people refuse to consider Asenath to be human, then we can’t use the word humanity to mean compassion, kindness, and just… plain caring about other people anymore. Because I’ve never met anyone in my life who embodies those concepts more than Asenath. She’s a vampire, but she’s not a threat. She’s not a monster. She’s my friend. She saved my life. She’s a hero.
* Flick describing Asenath and how much she trusts her [[spoiler: to the Meregan so can summon her to help save their children]].
--> '''Flick''': So if certain people refuse to consider Asenath to be human, then we can’t use the word humanity to mean compassion, kindness, and just… plain caring about other people anymore. Because I’ve never met anyone in my life who embodies those concepts more than Asenath. She’s a vampire, but she’s not a threat. She’s not a monster. She’s my friend. She saved my life. She’s a hero.
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*** [[WhenSheSmiles When she Shoiri starts smiling]], Flick knows she's making progress.progress.
* The Meregan, a race of giants on the verge of extinction, found a seven year old [[HalfHumanHybrid half-human]] boy wondering around their world in the last decade. What do they do? Befriend him and try to send him back home. When they can't, the let him stay with them as they continue to search for a way to get him back to earth.
** [[spoiler: They're also very good friends of Flick's mother, and immediately promise to help save her from Fossor when Flick tells them what happened.]]
** Flick and Shiori wound up on the Meregan's world because [[spoiler: their emergency beacon mistook Flick for her mother when she was helping Shiori, a HalfHumanHybrid, come to terms with her heritage. It was the act of treating a part-Alter with compassion (on top of their shared genetics) that made the beacon confuse Flick with Joselyn.]]
* The Meregan, a race of giants on the verge of extinction, found a seven year old [[HalfHumanHybrid half-human]] boy wondering around their world in the last decade. What do they do? Befriend him and try to send him back home. When they can't, the let him stay with them as they continue to search for a way to get him back to earth.
** [[spoiler: They're also very good friends of Flick's mother, and immediately promise to help save her from Fossor when Flick tells them what happened.]]
** Flick and Shiori wound up on the Meregan's world because [[spoiler: their emergency beacon mistook Flick for her mother when she was helping Shiori, a HalfHumanHybrid, come to terms with her heritage. It was the act of treating a part-Alter with compassion (on top of their shared genetics) that made the beacon confuse Flick with Joselyn.]]
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* Flick running up to Avalon and asking her to help her learn how to fight after the first attempt on Avalon's life in the First Steps arc. Avalon is legitimately surprised that Flick doesn't hate her because of what happened, and while she doesn't react much, it's clear that she's touched. Especially once she starts [[DefrostingIceQueen Defrosting]] and the scene becomes even more HeartwarmingInHindsight.
** Similarly, the rest of the team leaping to Avalon's defense when they get ambushed in the First Hunt arc.
** Similarly, the rest of the team leaping to Avalon's defense when they get ambushed in the First Hunt arc.
* Another heartwarming moment with Avalon comes when Flick returns from home and tells her team about what happened while she was gone. Avalon doesn't say anything, she just walks up to Flick and makes it clear she's not alone by being there. It's small, but potent.
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--> '''Flick''': Let me tell you about [[spoiler: your sister]]. Let me tell you [[HorrorDoesntSettleForSimpleTuesday what happened when I went home]], [[BigDamnHeroes and how]] [[FireForgedFriends I met her]]. Then you can tell me if you still think she has to be evil.
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--> '''Flick''': Let me tell you about [[spoiler: your sister]]. Let me tell you [[HorrorDoesntSettleForSimpleTuesday what happened when I went home]], [[BigDamnHeroes and how]] [[FireForgedFriends I met her]]. Then you can tell me if you still think she has to be evil.evil.
** The girls spend a lot of time together over the next arc, and throughout it all Flick's unwavering and genuine support of Shiori in the face of her DarkSecret goes a long way to helping her recover.
*** [[WhenSheSmiles When she starts smiling]], Flick knows she's making progress.
** The girls spend a lot of time together over the next arc, and throughout it all Flick's unwavering and genuine support of Shiori in the face of her DarkSecret goes a long way to helping her recover.
*** [[WhenSheSmiles When she starts smiling]], Flick knows she's making progress.
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* Flick runs into her old best friend, Miranda Wallbern, who moved away from Wyoming when they were thirteen. Coming right after the traumatic events of the birthday, seeing Miranda makes Flick ecstatic. Miranda's just as happy to see Flick, and they spend an hour catching up before Flick has to leave. [[spoiler: What's more, Miranda was recruited by Eden's Garden, which means that Flick is able to tell her everything that happened, providing her with additional and much needed support after her encounter with Fossor.]]
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* Flick runs into her old best friend, Miranda Wallbern, who moved away from Wyoming when they were thirteen. Coming right after the traumatic events of the birthday, seeing Miranda makes Flick ecstatic. Miranda's just as happy to see Flick, and they spend an hour catching up before Flick has to leave. [[spoiler: What's more, Miranda was recruited by Eden's Garden, which means that Flick is able to tell her everything that happened, providing her with additional and much needed support after her encounter with Fossor.]]]]
* After Shiori Porter has a public FreakOut over the stress of her DarkSecret [[spoiler: and Flick accidentally sees her private notebook with the name Asenath written all over it]], Flick confronts her to try and help. What follows ends up being pretty much exactly what Shiori needs to hear as Flick gives her some desperately needed comfort and support as she deconstructs Shiori's InternalizedCategorism.
** [[spoiler: The icing on the cake is Flick's defense of her friend Asenath, Shiori's half-sister, who similarly comforted Flick earlier in the story.]]
--> '''Flick''': Let me tell you about [[spoiler: your sister]]. Let me tell you [[HorrorDoesntSettleForSimpleTuesday what happened when I went home]], [[BigDamnHeroes and how]] [[FireForgedFriends I met her]]. Then you can tell me if you still think she has to be evil.
* After Shiori Porter has a public FreakOut over the stress of her DarkSecret [[spoiler: and Flick accidentally sees her private notebook with the name Asenath written all over it]], Flick confronts her to try and help. What follows ends up being pretty much exactly what Shiori needs to hear as Flick gives her some desperately needed comfort and support as she deconstructs Shiori's InternalizedCategorism.
** [[spoiler: The icing on the cake is Flick's defense of her friend Asenath, Shiori's half-sister, who similarly comforted Flick earlier in the story.]]
--> '''Flick''': Let me tell you about [[spoiler: your sister]]. Let me tell you [[HorrorDoesntSettleForSimpleTuesday what happened when I went home]], [[BigDamnHeroes and how]] [[FireForgedFriends I met her]]. Then you can tell me if you still think she has to be evil.
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--> '''Flick''': Thank you. For everything. I’d be… a lot worse off if it wasn’t for you.
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--> ''Could you call me Felicity?''
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--> ''Could '''Flick''': Could you call me Felicity?''Felicity?
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--> '''Twister''': ''Everyone deserves to eat good on their birthday so, ya know, figured I’d provide.''
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--> '''Twister''': ''Everyone Everyone deserves to eat good on their birthday so, ya know, figured I’d provide.''
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** To quote one of the chapter's comments: "It’s really hard to buy the crossroads teachings when a vampire and immortally reborn shapeshifter make you dinner for your birthday."
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** To quote one of the chapter's comments: "It’s really hard to buy the crossroads teachings when a vampire and immortally reborn shapeshifter make you dinner for your birthday."birthday"
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* The final gift Flick receives for her seventeenth birthday, especially in light of what happened that day (although it doubles as a {{Tearjerker}}. [[spoiler: It's a scrapbook her mother had been making. Joselyn had taken a photo of Felicity every single day from the day she was born until the day Fossor came and wrote a little note to go with each and every one of them. The last entry was a hastily written message telling Flick how much she loves her, and names Gaia Sinclaire as someone she can trust.]]
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* The final gift Flick receives for her seventeenth birthday, especially in light of what happened that day (although it doubles as a {{Tearjerker}}.{{Tearjerker}}). [[spoiler: It's a scrapbook her mother had been making. Joselyn had taken a photo of Felicity every single day from the day she was born until the day Fossor came and wrote a little note to go with each and every one of them. The last entry was a hastily written message telling Flick how much she loves her, and names Gaia Sinclaire as someone she can trust.]]
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** The last line of the chapter.
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** To quote one of the chapter's comments: "It’s really hard to buy the crossroads teachings when a vampire and immortally reborn shapeshifter make you dinner for your birthday."
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** To quote one of the chapter's comments: "It’s really hard to buy the crossroads teachings when a vampire and immortally reborn shapeshifter make you dinner for your birthday.""
* The final gift Flick receives for her seventeenth birthday, especially in light of what happened that day (although it doubles as a {{Tearjerker}}. [[spoiler: It's a scrapbook her mother had been making. Joselyn had taken a photo of Felicity every single day from the day she was born until the day Fossor came and wrote a little note to go with each and every one of them. The last entry was a hastily written message telling Flick how much she loves her, and names Gaia Sinclaire as someone she can trust.]]
* Flick runs into her old best friend, Miranda Wallbern, who moved away from Wyoming when they were thirteen. Coming right after the traumatic events of the birthday, seeing Miranda makes Flick ecstatic. Miranda's just as happy to see Flick, and they spend an hour catching up before Flick has to leave. [[spoiler: What's more, Miranda was recruited by Eden's Garden, which means that Flick is able to tell her everything that happened, providing her with additional and much needed support after her encounter with Fossor.]]
* The final gift Flick receives for her seventeenth birthday, especially in light of what happened that day (although it doubles as a {{Tearjerker}}. [[spoiler: It's a scrapbook her mother had been making. Joselyn had taken a photo of Felicity every single day from the day she was born until the day Fossor came and wrote a little note to go with each and every one of them. The last entry was a hastily written message telling Flick how much she loves her, and names Gaia Sinclaire as someone she can trust.]]
* Flick runs into her old best friend, Miranda Wallbern, who moved away from Wyoming when they were thirteen. Coming right after the traumatic events of the birthday, seeing Miranda makes Flick ecstatic. Miranda's just as happy to see Flick, and they spend an hour catching up before Flick has to leave. [[spoiler: What's more, Miranda was recruited by Eden's Garden, which means that Flick is able to tell her everything that happened, providing her with additional and much needed support after her encounter with Fossor.]]
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** Also, her reaction to Crossroads Academy's teachings that Strangers are AlwaysChaoticEvil is to immediately discount it. She knew from the beginning that non-humans are perfectly capable of being just as nuanced and complicated as human beings, because her own mother wasn't human. This stands in sharp contrast to Shiori Porter's fear and confusion over her own heritage.
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** Also, her reaction to Crossroads Academy's teachings that Strangers are AlwaysChaoticEvil is to immediately discount it. She knew from the beginning that non-humans are perfectly capable of being just as nuanced and complicated as human beings, because her own mother wasn't human. This stands in sharp contrast to Shiori Porter's fear and confusion over her own heritage.heritage.
* Flick comes home from a distressing, exposition laden conversation with Seller to discover that Twister has broken out her [[SupremeChef world class culinary skills]] to cook her a delicious birthday dinner.
--> '''Twister''': ''Everyone deserves to eat good on their birthday so, ya know, figured I’d provide.''
** Bear in mind, Flick is a Crossroads Heretic who has been taught to view all Strangers as evil monsters. Twister knows this, and only met Flick a few hours earlier. But hey, Asenath vouched for her.
** To quote one of the chapter's comments: "It’s really hard to buy the crossroads teachings when a vampire and immortally reborn shapeshifter make you dinner for your birthday."
* Flick comes home from a distressing, exposition laden conversation with Seller to discover that Twister has broken out her [[SupremeChef world class culinary skills]] to cook her a delicious birthday dinner.
--> '''Twister''': ''Everyone deserves to eat good on their birthday so, ya know, figured I’d provide.''
** Bear in mind, Flick is a Crossroads Heretic who has been taught to view all Strangers as evil monsters. Twister knows this, and only met Flick a few hours earlier. But hey, Asenath vouched for her.
** To quote one of the chapter's comments: "It’s really hard to buy the crossroads teachings when a vampire and immortally reborn shapeshifter make you dinner for your birthday."
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* Vanessa Moon's reaction to Crossroads Academy's teachings that Strangers are AlwaysChaoticEvil is to immediately discount it. She knew from the beginning that non-humans are perfectly capable of being just as nuanced and complicated as human beings, because her own mother wasn't human. This stands in sharp contrast to Shiori Porter's fear and confusion over her own heritage.
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* Vanessa Moon's Moon has dedicated her life to finding her scattered family and reuniting them, despite her own fear of danger and confrontation.
** Also, her reaction to Crossroads Academy's teachings that Strangers are AlwaysChaoticEvil is to immediately discount it. She knew from the beginning that non-humans are perfectly capable of being just as nuanced and complicated as human beings, because her own mother wasn't human. This stands in sharp contrast to Shiori Porter's fear and confusion over her own heritage.
** Also, her reaction to Crossroads Academy's teachings that Strangers are AlwaysChaoticEvil is to immediately discount it. She knew from the beginning that non-humans are perfectly capable of being just as nuanced and complicated as human beings, because her own mother wasn't human. This stands in sharp contrast to Shiori Porter's fear and confusion over her own heritage.
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** For that matter, Flick's reaction to learning the truth behind [[spoiler: her mother's disappearance is to forgive her, take back every bad thought she ever had about her, and swear to rescue her.]]
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--> ''Could you call meFelicity?''Felicity?''
* Vanessa Moon's reaction to Crossroads Academy's teachings that Strangers are AlwaysChaoticEvil is to immediately discount it. She knew from the beginning that non-humans are perfectly capable of being just as nuanced and complicated as human beings, because her own mother wasn't human. This stands in sharp contrast to Shiori Porter's fear and confusion over her own heritage.
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* Vanessa Moon's reaction to Crossroads Academy's teachings that Strangers are AlwaysChaoticEvil is to immediately discount it. She knew from the beginning that non-humans are perfectly capable of being just as nuanced and complicated as human beings, because her own mother wasn't human. This stands in sharp contrast to Shiori Porter's fear and confusion over her own heritage.
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* Pretty much everything [[spoiler: Asenath]] does in [[https://ceruleanscrawling.wordpress.com/2016/02/03/visitations-5-08-donation-bonus/ Visitations 5-08]], gently comforting Flick as she breaks down in the face of the previous chapter's [[TheReveal Reveal]] before promising to help her [[spoiler: save her mother, protect her father, and kill TheNecromancer who ruined their lives in the first place]] in any way she can.
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--> ''Could you call me Felicity?''
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