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* Chapter 6: Shikako and Ino comfort Sakura after the latter is failed by her Jounin sensei. To help her out, Shikako suggests that Sakura study to become a medical nin.
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* Chapter 5: After Team 7 gets the bells, Naruto gives them to Shikako and Sasuke when he thinks that only two of them can go on to become ninja.
--> He gave one of the bells to Sasuke like I wanted, then the other one to me. His face was determined but so heartbroken. I was sure that the team would pass as a team, yet they didn't know that. Naruto was serious about giving up his dream so I could pass.
--> He gave one of the bells to Sasuke like I wanted, then the other one to me. His face was determined but so heartbroken. I was sure that the team would pass as a team, yet they didn't know that. Naruto was serious about giving up his dream so I could pass.
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* Strangely, Naruto's reaction to the Team 7 line-up is both this and a CMOF. After wanting to be put on a team with Sakura and ''not'' with Sasuke, he gets Sasuke, but Shikako instead of Sakura... and after ''booing'' about Sasuke, he sends Shikako a look that implies he wants to give her TheGlomp. Which shows just how much her kindness has impacted him:
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* Chapter 4: Strangely, Naruto's reaction to the Team 7 line-up is both this and a CMOF. After wanting to be put on a team with Sakura and ''not'' with Sasuke, he gets Sasuke, but Shikako instead of Sakura... and after ''booing'' about Sasuke, he sends Shikako a look that implies he wants to give her TheGlomp. Which shows just how much her kindness has impacted him:
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* Chapter 3: Shikako notes that Ino could easily become one of the "popular girls" in class, but sticks with her friends instead.
* After the Uchiha Massacre, Shikako does what she can to make sure that Sasuke doesn't isolate himself.
* After the Uchiha Massacre, Shikako does what she can to make sure that Sasuke doesn't isolate himself.
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** Shikako notes that Ino could easily become one of the "popular girls" in class, but sticks with her friends instead.
* ** After the Uchiha Massacre, Shikako does what she can to make sure that Sasuke doesn't isolate himself.
** Shikako notes that Ino could easily become one of the "popular girls" in class, but sticks with her friends instead.
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* Chapter 3: Shikako notes that Ino could easily become one of the "popular girls" in class, but sticks with her friends instead.
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*** The next day, Naruto is worried that their parents told them to stay away from him. Shikako quickly disabuses him of that notion.
----> That was really all it took to befriend Naruto, a game and a goodbye. In the morning, as Iruka-sensei tried to bring the class to order, he approached us hesitantly with wary hope in his eyes. I had no idea how many times people had become distant from him after their parents had had a word with him, but as far as I could see, he was canon Naruto. He wasn't ''dangerous''. I kicked out the chair next to me and his face lit up with such joy that it almost hurt to look at.
----> That was really all it took to befriend Naruto, a game and a goodbye. In the morning, as Iruka-sensei tried to bring the class to order, he approached us hesitantly with wary hope in his eyes. I had no idea how many times people had become distant from him after their parents had had a word with him, but as far as I could see, he was canon Naruto. He wasn't ''dangerous''. I kicked out the chair next to me and his face lit up with such joy that it almost hurt to look at.
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** Instead of telling his children to stay away from Naruto, Shikaku tells them to choose for themselves what they want to do.
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** Instead of telling his children to stay away from Naruto, Shikaku tells them to choose for themselves do what they want to do.think is right.
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* Shikako, unlike a lot of other kids, reaches out to Naruto and treats him like a person.
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** When some kids once again say that they don't want to play with Chouji, both Shikamaru and Shikako decide to play with him instead of them.
** Shikako, unlike a lot of otherkids, kids at the time, reaches out to Naruto and treats him like a person.person. So she decides to have him join her, her brother, and Chouji in playing a game.
---> "So," Shika said, slouching to a stop. "Did you want to play ninja with us?"\\
The look of joy on his face was kind of heartbreaking.
** When some kids once again say that they don't want to play with Chouji, both Shikamaru and Shikako decide to play with him instead of them.
** Shikako, unlike a lot of other
---> "So," Shika said, slouching to a stop. "Did you want to play ninja with us?"\\
The look of joy on his face was kind of heartbreaking.
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** Naruto is stunned when he finds out that Tazuna named their new bridge after him due to both Naruto and the bridge [[HopeBringer bringing the people of the Land of Waves hope]].
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* Chapter 15 has a bonding moment between the team in an innocent water fight game that reminds you that these ninja are still just children and also:
--> "Sasuke," I said quietly but seriously. "I know you don't like people touching you, but I'm going to hug you now." Fair warning given, I practically wrapped myself around him, tilting my chin down so they couldn't see my watery eyes. "You aren't allowed to die. You hear me? Rule Number One of Team 7: No dying."
--> "Sasuke," I said quietly but seriously. "I know you don't like people touching you, but I'm going to hug you now." Fair warning given, I practically wrapped myself around him, tilting my chin down so they couldn't see my watery eyes. "You aren't allowed to die. You hear me? Rule Number One of Team 7: No dying."
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** Shikako hugs Sasuke after he gets up from his injuries.
---> "Sasuke," I said quietly but seriously. "I know you don't like people touching you, but I'm going to hug you now." Fair warning given, I practically wrapped myself around him, tilting my chin down so they couldn't see my watery eyes. "You aren't allowed to die. You hear me? Rule Number One of Team 7: No dying.""
** Team 7 has a bonding moment via an innocent water fight game that reminds you that these ninja are still just children.
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** Shikako hugs Sasuke after he gets up from his injuries.
---> "Sasuke," I said quietly but seriously. "I know you don't like people touching you, but I'm going to hug you now." Fair warning given, I practically wrapped myself around him, tilting my chin down so they couldn't see my watery eyes. "You aren't allowed to die. You hear me? Rule Number One of Team 7: No dying.
** Team 7 has a bonding moment via an innocent water fight game that reminds you that these ninja are still just children.
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* In Chapter 1, after a confrontation with some of Team 7 and and a ''very'' irate Jiraiya, Kisame muses to Itachi that his little brother has gotten really ruthless and might just succeed in killing him some day, since he's already to the point where he'll [[HumanShield body-switch with a teammate to get out of being hit]] with a [[MindRape particularly nasty genjutsu]], which is something he'd only known Bloody Mist veterans and the worse kinds of missing-nin to do. Itachi then corrects him: Sasuke wasn't in any position to do a replacement jutsu; Shikako had willingly [[TakingTheBullet took the hit]] ''[TakingTheBullet for]]'' [TakingTheBullet him]]. Even more shocking when you realize that she ''knew'' exactly how horrible the genjutsu was, but also knew that it would be even worse on Sasuke.
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* In Chapter 1, after a confrontation with some of Team 7 and and a ''very'' irate Jiraiya, Kisame muses to Itachi that his little brother has gotten really ruthless and might just succeed in killing him some day, since he's already to the point where he'll [[HumanShield body-switch with a teammate to get out of being hit]] with a [[MindRape particularly nasty genjutsu]], which is something he'd only known Bloody Mist veterans and the worse kinds of missing-nin to do. Itachi then corrects him: Sasuke wasn't in any position to do a replacement jutsu; Shikako had willingly [[TakingTheBullet took the hit]] ''[TakingTheBullet ''[[TakingTheBullet for]]'' [TakingTheBullet [[TakingTheBullet him]]. Even more shocking when you realize that she ''knew'' exactly how horrible the genjutsu was, but also knew that it would be even worse on Sasuke.
