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--> '''[[PosthumousNarration Wallace's Spirit]], as his sword proudly stood in the windy plains:''' ''"In the Year of Our Lord 1314... Patriots of Scotland, starving and outnumbered, charged the Fields of Bannockburn... They fought like Warrior Poets... They fought like Scotsmen, and won Their Freedom."''

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--> ---> '''[[PosthumousNarration Wallace's Spirit]], as his sword proudly stood in the windy plains:''' ''"In the Year of Our Lord 1314... Patriots of Scotland, starving and outnumbered, charged the Fields of Bannockburn... They fought like Warrior Poets... They fought like Scotsmen, and won Their Freedom."''

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* Home Alone: The archery tournament is about the only time we get an honest smile out of Prince Edward, and the only time we see him doing something he seems to enjoy and is good at. Doubles with tearjerker, as it seems to be one of the few happy moments in his life, and is about to be [[AbusiveParents broken up]] by Longshanks.
* Edward and Phillip standing up for each other during the window scene is really sweet. [[AbusiveParents Again, Longshanks spoils it,]] [[BuryYourGays this time with heartwrenching finality]]



-->'''Robert The Bruce:''' ''"You have bled with '''Wallace...''' Now bleed with '''Me.'''"
** To this Hamish, with a mighty roar, hurls Wallace's Sword forth, as both the Blade and James Horner's majestic anthem to his bravery soars across the skies and plants his soul into the fields of Bannockburn. And charging forth with Robert, it was '''Wallace's''' name and not their King's that The Warriors of Scotland triumphantly chanted in love and honor for their friend. ManlyTears '''will''' be shed.

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-->'''Robert The Bruce:''' ''"You ''You have bled with '''Wallace...''' '''Wallace!''' Now bleed with '''Me.'''"
'''Me'''''.
** To this Hamish, with a mighty roar, hurls Wallace's Sword forth, as both the Blade and James Horner's majestic anthem to his bravery soars across the skies and plants his soul into the fields of Bannockburn. And charging forth with Robert, it was '''Wallace's''' name and not their King's that The Warriors of Scotland triumphantly chanted in love and honor for their fallen friend. ManlyTears '''will''' be shed.



* Home Alone: The archery tournament is about the only time we get an honest smile out of Prince Edward, and the only time we see him doing something he seems to enjoy and is good at. Doubles with tearjerker, as it seems to be one of the few happy moments in his life, and is about to be [[AbusiveParents broken up]] by Longshanks.
* Edward and Phillip standing up for each other during the window scene is really sweet. [[AbusiveParents Again, Longshanks spoils it,]] [[BuryYourGays this time with heartwrenching finality]]

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* Home Alone: The archery tournament is about the only time we get an honest smile out of Prince Edward, and the only time we see him doing something he seems to enjoy and is good at. Doubles with tearjerker, as it seems to be one of the few happy moments in his life, and is about to be [[AbusiveParents broken up]] by Longshanks.
* Edward and Phillip standing up for each other during the window scene is really sweet. [[AbusiveParents Again, Longshanks spoils it,]] [[BuryYourGays this time with heartwrenching finality]]
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** Earlier on, just after Wallace is knighted, he urges Bruce to unite the clans as they would respect and follow him, Wallace then caps it off by telling Bruce point blank that HE would follow Bruce, the look on Robert the Bruce's face when Wallace said that speaks volumes about the respect and admiration Bruce has for Wallace.
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* Home Alone: The archery tournament is about the only time we get an honest smile out of Prince Edward, and the only time we see him doing something he seems to enjoy and is good at. Doubles with tearjerker, as it seems to be one of the few happy moments in his life, and is about to be [[AbusiveParents broken up]] by Longshanks.

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* Home Alone: The archery tournament is about the only time we get an honest smile out of Prince Edward, and the only time we see him doing something he seems to enjoy and is good at. Doubles with tearjerker, as it seems to be one of the few happy moments in his life, and is about to be [[AbusiveParents broken up]] by Longshanks.Longshanks.
* Edward and Phillip standing up for each other during the window scene is really sweet. [[AbusiveParents Again, Longshanks spoils it,]] [[BuryYourGays this time with heartwrenching finality]]
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* Home Alone: The archery tournament is about the only time we get an honest smile out of Prince Edward, and the only time we see him doing something he seems to enjoy and is good at. Doubles with tearjerker, as it seems to be one of the few happy moments in his life, and is about to be broken up by Longshanks.

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* Home Alone: The archery tournament is about the only time we get an honest smile out of Prince Edward, and the only time we see him doing something he seems to enjoy and is good at. Doubles with tearjerker, as it seems to be one of the few happy moments in his life, and is about to be [[AbusiveParents broken up up]] by Longshanks.
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* [[ Home Alone]] : The archery tournament is about the only time we get an honest smile out of Prince Edward, and the only time we see him doing something he seems to enjoy and is good at. Doubles with tearjerker, as it seems to be one of the few happy moments in his life, and is about to be broken up by Longshanks.

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* [[ Home Alone]] : Alone: The archery tournament is about the only time we get an honest smile out of Prince Edward, and the only time we see him doing something he seems to enjoy and is good at. Doubles with tearjerker, as it seems to be one of the few happy moments in his life, and is about to be broken up by Longshanks.
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* [[Home Alone Home Alone]] : The archery tournament is about the only time we get an honest smile out of Prince Edward, and the only time we see him doing something he seems to enjoy and is good at. Doubles with tearjerker, as it seems to be one of the few happy moments in his life, and is about to be broken up by Longshanks.

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* [[Home Alone [[ Home Alone]] : The archery tournament is about the only time we get an honest smile out of Prince Edward, and the only time we see him doing something he seems to enjoy and is good at. Doubles with tearjerker, as it seems to be one of the few happy moments in his life, and is about to be broken up by Longshanks.
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* Home Alone: The archery tournament is about the only time we get an honest smile out of Prince Edward, and the only time we see him doing something he seems to enjoy and is good at. Doubles with tearjerker, as it seems to be one of the few happy moments in his life, and is about to be broken up by Longshanks.

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* [[Home Alone Home Alone: Alone]] : The archery tournament is about the only time we get an honest smile out of Prince Edward, and the only time we see him doing something he seems to enjoy and is good at. Doubles with tearjerker, as it seems to be one of the few happy moments in his life, and is about to be broken up by Longshanks.
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--> '''[[PosthumousNarration Wallace's Spirit]], as his sword proudly stood in the windy plains:''' ''"In the Year of Our Lord 1314... Patriots of Scotland, starving and outnumbered, charged the Fields of Bannockburn... They fought like Warrior Poets... They fought like Scotsmen, and won Their Freedom."''

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--> '''[[PosthumousNarration Wallace's Spirit]], as his sword proudly stood in the windy plains:''' ''"In the Year of Our Lord 1314... Patriots of Scotland, starving and outnumbered, charged the Fields of Bannockburn... They fought like Warrior Poets... They fought like Scotsmen, and won Their Freedom."''"''
* Home Alone: The archery tournament is about the only time we get an honest smile out of Prince Edward, and the only time we see him doing something he seems to enjoy and is good at. Doubles with tearjerker, as it seems to be one of the few happy moments in his life, and is about to be broken up by Longshanks.
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Bannockburn was in E2's time


* Years after the execution of Wallace, on the fields of Bannockburn, Robert the Bruce is about to be humiliatingly "granted the right" to rule his own land by mere dignitaries of Edward III. He regards Murron's handkerchief mournfully, remembering the love its owner's husband felt for her and Their Land... And turning to his army of William's friends and warriors, declares:

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* Years after the execution of Wallace, on the fields of Bannockburn, Robert the Bruce is about to be humiliatingly "granted the right" to rule his own land by mere dignitaries of Edward III.II. He regards Murron's handkerchief mournfully, remembering the love its owner's husband felt for her and Their Land... And turning to his army of William's friends and warriors, declares:
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'''Robert the Bruce:''' ''[[SillyRabbitCynicismIsForLoser I don't want to lose heart]]''! I want to ''believe'' -- as he does... I will never be on the wrong side again.

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'''Robert the Bruce:''' ''[[SillyRabbitCynicismIsForLoser ''[[SillyRabbitCynicismIsForLosers I don't want to lose heart]]''! I want to ''believe'' -- as he does... I will never be on the wrong side again.
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'''Robert the Bruce:''' I have ''nothing''. Men fight for me because if they do not, I throw them off my land and I starve their wives and children. Those men who bled the ground red at Falkirk fought for William Wallace. He fights for something that I never had. And I ''took'' it from him when I betrayed him. I saw it in his face on the battlefield and it's tearing me apart!\\
'''Robert the Elder:''' All men betray, all men lose heart...\\
'''Robert the Bruce:''' ''I DON'T WANT TO LOSE HEART''! I want to ''believe'' -- as he does... I will never be on the wrong side again.

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'''Robert the Bruce:''' I have ''nothing''. Men fight for me because if they do not, I throw them off my land and I starve their wives and children. Those men who bled the ground red at Falkirk fought for William Wallace. He fights for something that I never had. And I ''took'' it from him when I betrayed him. I saw it in his face on the battlefield battlefield... and it's tearing me apart!\\
'''Robert the Elder:''' [[TheCynic All men betray, all men lose heart...heart]]...\\
'''Robert the Bruce:''' ''I DON'T WANT TO LOSE HEART''! ''[[SillyRabbitCynicismIsForLoser I don't want to lose heart]]''! I want to ''believe'' -- as he does... I will never be on the wrong side again.
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* Years after the execution of Wallace, on the fields of Bannockburn, Robert the Bruce is about to be humiliatingly "granted the right" to rule his own land by mere dignitaries of Edward III. He regards Murron's handkerchief mournfully, remembering the love of its owner's husband felt for her and Their Land... And turning to his army of William's friends and warriors, declares:

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* Years after the execution of Wallace, on the fields of Bannockburn, Robert the Bruce is about to be humiliatingly "granted the right" to rule his own land by mere dignitaries of Edward III. He regards Murron's handkerchief mournfully, remembering the love of its owner's husband felt for her and Their Land... And turning to his army of William's friends and warriors, declares:

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** After riding with Murron, Wallace gives her a gift: the same thistle she gave him as a child at his father and brother's funeral.

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** After riding with Murron, Wallace gives her a gift: the same thistle she gave him as a child at his father and brother's funeral.years ago.



* Wallace to Bruce: "Unite us. Unite the clans." [[spoiler: It doesn't last long.]]
** In the end [[spoiler: he does]].

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* Wallace to Bruce: "Unite us. Unite the clans." [[spoiler: It doesn't last long.]]
**
long, at first. In the end [[spoiler: end, he does]].does.



-->'''Robert the Elder:''' I'm the one who's rotting, but I think your face looks graver than mine. Son, we must have alliance with England to prevail here. You achieved that. You saved your family; increased your land. In time you will have all the power in Scotland.
-->'''Robert the Bruce:''' Lands, titles, men, power... Nothing.
-->'''Robert the Elder:''' Nothing?
-->'''Robert the Bruce:''' I have ''nothing''. Men fight for me because if they do not, I throw them off my land and I starve their wives and children. Those men who bled the ground red at Falkirk fought for William Wallace. He fights for something that I never had. And I ''took'' it from him when I betrayed him. I saw it in his face on the battlefield and it's tearing me apart!
-->'''Robert the Elder:''' All men betray, all men lose heart...
-->'''Robert the Bruce:''' ''I DON'T WANT TO LOSE HEART''! I want to ''believe'' -- as he does... I will never be on the wrong side again.

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-->'''Robert the Elder:''' I'm the one who's rotting, but I think your face looks graver than mine. Son, we must have alliance with England to prevail here. You achieved that. You saved your family; increased your land. In time you will have all the power in Scotland.
-->'''Robert
Scotland.\\
'''Robert
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-->'''Robert
Nothing.\\
'''Robert
the Elder:''' Nothing?
-->'''Robert
Nothing?\\
'''Robert
the Bruce:''' I have ''nothing''. Men fight for me because if they do not, I throw them off my land and I starve their wives and children. Those men who bled the ground red at Falkirk fought for William Wallace. He fights for something that I never had. And I ''took'' it from him when I betrayed him. I saw it in his face on the battlefield and it's tearing me apart!
-->'''Robert
apart!\\
'''Robert
the Elder:''' All men betray, all men lose heart...
-->'''Robert
heart...\\
'''Robert
the Bruce:''' ''I DON'T WANT TO LOSE HEART''! I want to ''believe'' -- as he does... I will never be on the wrong side again.



--> '''Wallace's Spirit, as his sword proudly stood in the windy plains:''' ''"In the Year of Our Lord 1314... Patriots of Scotland, starving and outnumbered, charged the Fields of Bannockburn... They fought like Warrior Poets... They fought like Scotsmen, and Won Their Freedom."''

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--> '''Wallace's Spirit, '''[[PosthumousNarration Wallace's Spirit]], as his sword proudly stood in the windy plains:''' ''"In the Year of Our Lord 1314... Patriots of Scotland, starving and outnumbered, charged the Fields of Bannockburn... They fought like Warrior Poets... They fought like Scotsmen, and Won won Their Freedom."''
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-->'''Robert The Bruce:''' ''"You have bled with '''Wallace...''' Now bleed with '''Me."''

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-->'''Robert The Bruce:''' ''"You have bled with '''Wallace...''' Now bleed with '''Me."'''''"
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** To this Hamish, with a mighty roar, hurls Wallace's Sword across forth, as both the Blade and James Horner's majestic anthem to his bravery soars across the skies and plants his soul into the fields of Bannockburn. And charging forth with Robert, it was '''Wallace's''' name and not their King's that The Warriors of Scotland triumphantly chanted in love and honor for their friend. ManlyTears '''will''' be shed.

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** To this Hamish, with a mighty roar, hurls Wallace's Sword across forth, as both the Blade and James Horner's majestic anthem to his bravery soars across the skies and plants his soul into the fields of Bannockburn. And charging forth with Robert, it was '''Wallace's''' name and not their King's that The Warriors of Scotland triumphantly chanted in love and honor for their friend. ManlyTears '''will''' be shed.
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** To this Hamish, with a mighty bellow, hurls Wallace's Sword across forth, as both the Blade and James Horner's majestic anthem to his bravery soars across the skies and plants his soul into the fields of Bannockburn. And charging forth with Robert, it was '''Wallace's''' name and not their King's that they triumphantly chant in love and honor for their friend. ManlyTears '''shall''' be shed.

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** To this Hamish, with a mighty bellow, roar, hurls Wallace's Sword across forth, as both the Blade and James Horner's majestic anthem to his bravery soars across the skies and plants his soul into the fields of Bannockburn. And charging forth with Robert, it was '''Wallace's''' name and not their King's that they The Warriors of Scotland triumphantly chant chanted in love and honor for their friend. ManlyTears '''shall''' '''will''' be shed.
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-->''"You have bled with '''Wallace...''' Now bleed with '''Me."'''''

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-->''"You -->'''Robert The Bruce:''' ''"You have bled with '''Wallace...''' Now bleed with '''Me."'''''"''
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-->'''Robert the Bruce:''' ''I DON'T WANT TO LOSE HEART''! I want to ''believe'' -- as he does... I will never be on the wrong side again.

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-->'''Robert the Bruce:''' ''I DON'T WANT TO LOSE HEART''! I want to ''believe'' -- as he does... I will never be on the wrong side again.again.
* Years after the execution of Wallace, on the fields of Bannockburn, Robert the Bruce is about to be humiliatingly "granted the right" to rule his own land by mere dignitaries of Edward III. He regards Murron's handkerchief mournfully, remembering the love of its owner's husband felt for her and Their Land... And turning to his army of William's friends and warriors, declares:
-->''"You have bled with '''Wallace...''' Now bleed with '''Me."'''''
** To this Hamish, with a mighty bellow, hurls Wallace's Sword across forth, as both the Blade and James Horner's majestic anthem to his bravery soars across the skies and plants his soul into the fields of Bannockburn. And charging forth with Robert, it was '''Wallace's''' name and not their King's that they triumphantly chant in love and honor for their friend. ManlyTears '''shall''' be shed.
--> '''Wallace's Spirit, as his sword proudly stood in the windy plains:''' ''"In the Year of Our Lord 1314... Patriots of Scotland, starving and outnumbered, charged the Fields of Bannockburn... They fought like Warrior Poets... They fought like Scotsmen, and Won Their Freedom."''
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==>'''Robert the Bruce:''' ''I DON'T WANT TO LOSE HEART''! I want to ''believe'' -- as he does... I will never be on the wrong side again.

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==>'''Robert -->'''Robert the Bruce:''' ''I DON'T WANT TO LOSE HEART''! I want to ''believe'' -- as he does... I will never be on the wrong side again.

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* This exchange:
-->'''Robert the Elder''': "All men betray, all men lose heart...
-->'''Robert the Bruce''': "'''I don't want to lose heart!''' I want to ''believe.'' As he [Wallace] does."

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* This exchange:
The exchange when Robert the Bruce realises his folly after his father betrays Wallace to the English.
-->'''Robert the Elder''': "All men betray, Elder:''' I'm the one who's rotting, but I think your face looks graver than mine. Son, we must have alliance with England to prevail here. You achieved that. You saved your family; increased your land. In time you will have all men lose heart...
the power in Scotland.
-->'''Robert the Bruce''': "'''I don't want to Bruce:''' Lands, titles, men, power... Nothing.
-->'''Robert the Elder:''' Nothing?
-->'''Robert the Bruce:''' I have ''nothing''. Men fight for me because if they do not, I throw them off my land and I starve their wives and children. Those men who bled the ground red at Falkirk fought for William Wallace. He fights for something that I never had. And I ''took'' it from him when I betrayed him. I saw it in his face on the battlefield and it's tearing me apart!
-->'''Robert the Elder:''' All men betray, all men
lose heart!''' heart...
==>'''Robert the Bruce:''' ''I DON'T WANT TO LOSE HEART''!
I want to ''believe.'' As ''believe'' -- as he [Wallace] does."does... I will never be on the wrong side again.
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** In the end [[spoiler: he does]].

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** In the end [[spoiler: he does]].does]].
*This exchange:
-->'''Robert the Elder''': "All men betray, all men lose heart...
-->'''Robert the Bruce''': "'''I don't want to lose heart!''' I want to ''believe.'' As he [Wallace] does."
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* Wallace to Bruce: "Unite us. Unite the clans." [[spoiler: It doesn't last long.]]

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* Wallace to Bruce: "Unite us. Unite the clans." [[spoiler: It doesn't last long.]]]]
** In the end [[spoiler: he does]].
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* [=MacClannough=] disapproves of Wallace's courtship of his daughter, and so they marry in secret, without his knowledge. Much later, at her funeral, Wallace presents himself to [=MacClannough=] and kneels for his blessing. After some clear internal struggle, [=MacClannough=] grants it. Wallace has earned his respect.

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* [=MacClannough=] disapproves of Wallace's courtship of his daughter, and so they marry in secret, without his knowledge. Much later, at her funeral, Wallace presents himself to [=MacClannough=] and kneels for his blessing. After some clear internal struggle, [=MacClannough=] grants it. Wallace has earned his respect.respect.
* Wallace to Bruce: "Unite us. Unite the clans." [[spoiler: It doesn't last long.]]

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* After riding with Murron, Wallace gives her a gift: the same thistle she gave him as a child after his father and brother's deaths.

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* At his father and brother's funeral, young William is given a thistle by a young Murron.
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After riding with Murron, Wallace gives her a gift: the same thistle she gave him as a child after at his father and brother's deaths.funeral.
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* [=MacClannough=] disapproves of Wallace's courtship of his daughter, and so they marry in secret, without his knowledge. At her funeral, Wallace presents himself to [=MacClannough=] and kneels for his blessing. After some clear internal struggle, [=MacClannough=] grants it. Wallace has earned his respect.

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* [=MacClannough=] disapproves of Wallace's courtship of his daughter, and so they marry in secret, without his knowledge. At Much later, at her funeral, Wallace presents himself to [=MacClannough=] and kneels for his blessing. After some clear internal struggle, [=MacClannough=] grants it. Wallace has earned his respect.
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* [=MacClannough] disapproves of Wallace's courtship of his daughter, and so they marry in secret, without his knowledge. At her funeral, Wallace presents himself to [=MacClannough=] and kneels for his blessing. After some clear internal struggle, [=MacClannough=] grants it. Wallace has earned his respect.

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* [=MacClannough] [=MacClannough=] disapproves of Wallace's courtship of his daughter, and so they marry in secret, without his knowledge. At her funeral, Wallace presents himself to [=MacClannough=] and kneels for his blessing. After some clear internal struggle, [=MacClannough=] grants it. Wallace has earned his respect.
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* After riding with Murron, Wallace gives her a gift: the same thistle she gave him as a child after his father and brother's deaths.

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* After riding with Murron, Wallace gives her a gift: the same thistle she gave him as a child after his father and brother's deaths.deaths.
* [=MacClannough] disapproves of Wallace's courtship of his daughter, and so they marry in secret, without his knowledge. At her funeral, Wallace presents himself to [=MacClannough=] and kneels for his blessing. After some clear internal struggle, [=MacClannough=] grants it. Wallace has earned his respect.
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* After riding with Murron, Wallace gives her a gift: the same thistle she gave him as a child after his father and brother's deaths.

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