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* The reunion between Antonina and Belisarius after the former arrives with a fleet to pull the latter out of Charax after they've been separated for over a year. No one dares make a comment about the two senior military commanders on the scene sharing a passionate kiss.
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* The reunion between Antonina and Belisarius after the former arrives with a fleet to pull the latter out of Charax after they've been separated for over a year. No one dares make a comment about the two senior military commanders on the scene sharing a passionate kiss.kiss.
* Although the overall scene is a TearJerker, following [[spoiler: the death of Aide, Damodara]] ensures that no one disturbs Belisarius as he mourns, and in addition to Valentian and Anastasius taking their customary places guarding him, [[spoiler: Rana Sanga]] joins them. And the three stand there, silent, for hours, so Belisarius could grieve.
* Although the overall scene is a TearJerker, following [[spoiler: the death of Aide, Damodara]] ensures that no one disturbs Belisarius as he mourns, and in addition to Valentian and Anastasius taking their customary places guarding him, [[spoiler: Rana Sanga]] joins them. And the three stand there, silent, for hours, so Belisarius could grieve.
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* The reunion between Antonina and Belisarius after the former arrives with a fleet to pull the latter out of a besieged city after they've been separated for over a year. No one dares make a comment about the two senior military commanders on the scene sharing a passionate kiss.
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* The reunion between Antonina and Belisarius after the former arrives with a fleet to pull the latter out of a besieged city Charax after they've been separated for over a year. No one dares make a comment about the two senior military commanders on the scene sharing a passionate kiss.
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'''Bellisarius:''' I know. And I swear this, before God: ''I will never ask.''
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'''Bellisarius:''' I know. And I swear this, before God: ''I will never ask.''''
* The reunion between Antonina and Belisarius after the former arrives with a fleet to pull the latter out of a besieged city after they've been separated for over a year. No one dares make a comment about the two senior military commanders on the scene sharing a passionate kiss.
* The reunion between Antonina and Belisarius after the former arrives with a fleet to pull the latter out of a besieged city after they've been separated for over a year. No one dares make a comment about the two senior military commanders on the scene sharing a passionate kiss.
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* The discussion between Antonia and Belisarius about the cover story that will have her (supposedly) cuckolding him:
-->'''Antonia:''' There will never be any truth to the tales, Belisarius. I swear before God. Never. A month from now, a year from now, ten years from now. You will always be able to ask, and the answer will always be: no.\\
-->'''Antonia:''' There will never be any truth to the tales, Belisarius. I swear before God. Never. A month from now, a year from now, ten years from now. You will always be able to ask, and the answer will always be: no.\\
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* The discussion between Antonia Antonina and Belisarius about the cover story that will have her (supposedly) cuckolding him:
-->'''Antonia:''' -->'''Antonina:''' There will never be any truth to the tales, Belisarius. I swear before God. Never. A month from now, a year from now, ten years from now. You will always be able to ask, and the answer will always be: no.\\
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-->'''Rana Sanga:''' She is plump and plain-faced. Her hair was already gray by the time she was thirty.\\
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'''Rana Sanga:''' She is plump and plain-faced. Her hair was already gray by the time she was thirty.\\
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* The discussion between Antonia and Belisarius about the cover story that will have her (supposedly) cuckholding him:
-->'''Antonia:''' There will never be any truth to the tales, Belisarius. I swear before God. Never. A month from now, a year from now, ten years from now. You will always be able to ask, and the answer will always be: no."\\
-->'''Antonia:''' There will never be any truth to the tales, Belisarius. I swear before God. Never. A month from now, a year from now, ten years from now. You will always be able to ask, and the answer will always be: no."\\
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* The discussion between Antonia and Belisarius about the cover story that will have her (supposedly) cuckholding cuckolding him:
-->'''Antonia:''' There will never be any truth to the tales, Belisarius. I swear before God. Never. A month from now, a year from now, ten years from now. You will always be able to ask, and the answer will always be: no."\\\\
-->'''Antonia:''' There will never be any truth to the tales, Belisarius. I swear before God. Never. A month from now, a year from now, ten years from now. You will always be able to ask, and the answer will always be: no.
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'''Rana Sanga:''' She is my life. The mother of my children. The joy of my youth and the certainty of my manhood. Just as she will be the comfort of my old age. [...] I would not trade her for a goddess.
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'''Rana Sanga:''' She is my life. The mother of my children. The joy of my youth and the certainty of my manhood. Just as she will be the comfort of my old age. [...] I would not trade her for a goddess.goddess.
*The discussion between Antonia and Belisarius about the cover story that will have her (supposedly) cuckholding him:
-->'''Antonia:''' There will never be any truth to the tales, Belisarius. I swear before God. Never. A month from now, a year from now, ten years from now. You will always be able to ask, and the answer will always be: no."\\
'''Bellisarius:''' I know. And I swear this, before God: ''I will never ask.''
*The discussion between Antonia and Belisarius about the cover story that will have her (supposedly) cuckholding him:
-->'''Antonia:''' There will never be any truth to the tales, Belisarius. I swear before God. Never. A month from now, a year from now, ten years from now. You will always be able to ask, and the answer will always be: no."\\
'''Bellisarius:''' I know. And I swear this, before God: ''I will never ask.''
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* As much as the story emphasizes that Justinian and Theodora are not nice people, it also shows that their love for each other is genuine and unshakeable.
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* As much as the story emphasizes that Justinian and Theodora are not nice people, it also shows that their love for each other is genuine and unshakeable.unshakeable.
* Rana Sanga discussing his wife with Belisarius:
-->'''Rana Sanga:''' She is plump and plain-faced. Her hair was already gray by the time she was thirty.\\
'''Belisarius:''' Would you trade her, then, for my own?\\
'''Rana Sanga:''' She is my life. The mother of my children. The joy of my youth and the certainty of my manhood. Just as she will be the comfort of my old age. [...] I would not trade her for a goddess.
* Rana Sanga discussing his wife with Belisarius:
-->'''Rana Sanga:''' She is plump and plain-faced. Her hair was already gray by the time she was thirty.\\
'''Belisarius:''' Would you trade her, then, for my own?\\
'''Rana Sanga:''' She is my life. The mother of my children. The joy of my youth and the certainty of my manhood. Just as she will be the comfort of my old age. [...] I would not trade her for a goddess.
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* Dadaji Holkar reuniting with his wife
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* Dadaji Holkar reuniting with his wifewife
* As much as the story emphasizes that Justinian and Theodora are not nice people, it also shows that their love for each other is genuine and unshakeable.
* As much as the story emphasizes that Justinian and Theodora are not nice people, it also shows that their love for each other is genuine and unshakeable.
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The part at the end when Rana Sanga's son greets him as he rides through the city gate.
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* The part at the end when Rana Sanga's son greets him as he rides through the city gate.gate.
* The wedding between Shakuntala and Raghunath Rao
* Dadaji Holkar reuniting with his wife
* The wedding between Shakuntala and Raghunath Rao
* Dadaji Holkar reuniting with his wife
