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* Syok has another one depending on your interpretation of him. After [[spoiler:Elvin is attacked by Teivel, who is a vampire]], Syok is the first one to run and check on him.
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* Syok has another one depending on your interpretation of him. After [[spoiler:Elvin Elvin is attacked by Teivel, who is a vampire]], vampire, Syok is the first one to run and check on him.
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* [[spoiler:After Empress Sarai nearly kills Elvin, he becomes hysterical]], and Andraste, who is definitely uncomfortable with sharing feelings, tries to comfort him.
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* [[spoiler:After After Empress Sarai nearly kills Elvin, he becomes hysterical]], hysterical, and Andraste, who is definitely uncomfortable with sharing feelings, tries to comfort him.
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* [[WarriorPrince Andraste]], [[CuteBookworm Clare]], [[CuteButTroubled Elvin]], and [[TheDitz Radiance]] split up to find allies to help them fight. Andraste and Clare go to Latla, a former enemy's country, and Radiance, worrying, wants to follow them and see if they're both alright. Elvin doesn't want to go, for reasons Radiance doesn't quite understand. However, since she's a duchess, she outranks him and could force him to go with her. She doesn't, leading to a truly heartwarming scene where she holds Elvin's hand and tells him that he's her friend, not just a servant.
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* [[WarriorPrince Andraste]], [[CuteBookworm Clare]], [[CuteButTroubled Elvin]], and [[TheDitz Radiance]] split up to find allies to help them fight. Andraste and Clare go to Latla, a former enemy's country, and Radiance, worrying, wants to follow them and see if they're both alright. Elvin doesn't want to go, for reasons Radiance doesn't quite understand. However, since she's a duchess, she outranks him and could force him to go with her. She doesn't, leading to a truly heartwarming scene where she holds Elvin's hand and tells him that he's her friend, not just a servant.
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* When [[WarriorPrince Xandrina]] meets Elvin, the son of [[CompleteMonster General Syok]] and [[TheVamp a siren]], she has every reason to hate him or at least be suspicious of him. Instead, she treats him politely and is genuinely angry when she discovers he's been ordered [[MindRape to interrogate prisoners all night]]. She sternly tells [[AristocratsAreEvil Prince Wildfire]] to leave him be, so he could sleep.
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* When [[WarriorPrince Xandrina]] meets Elvin, the son of [[CompleteMonster General Syok]] Syok and [[TheVamp a siren]], she has every reason to hate him or at least be suspicious of him. Instead, she treats him politely and is genuinely angry when she discovers he's been ordered [[MindRape to interrogate prisoners all night]]. She sternly tells [[AristocratsAreEvil Prince Wildfire]] to leave him be, so he could sleep.
