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--> ''[[BabyTalk Don't need know. Love.]]''
--> ''[[BabyTalk Don't need know. Love.]]''
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* [[TheCakeIsALie The cake]] ''[[SubvertedTrope isn't]]'' [[TheCakeIsALie a lie]]!
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* When Chell and Gilda face off, Gilda restores Chell's atrophied voice box, delightedly talks about how family roughhouses and is genuinely concerned when Chell breaks down in shock over how ''well'' things worked out in the places of her nightmares compared to [[WarIsHell the hellhole the world she escaped to was]].
* When Chell and Gilda face off, Gilda restores Chell's atrophied voice box, delightedly talks about how family roughhouses and is genuinely concerned when Chell breaks down in shock over how ''well'' things worked out in the places of her nightmares compared to [[WarIsHell the hellhole the world she escaped to was]].
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* Carmelita's reputation being tarnished by the Contessa [[TearJerker is sad]]. Her deciding to join the Cooper Gang permanently because of it? Deliciously heartwarming!
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* Muggshot and Mz. Ruby (make that Ms. Ruby) are dating!
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* This story offers proof of how awesome a big brother Shining is: even knowing that it's all fake and even knowing she knows that, everything he says to her when she chases off "Cadence" makes him feel sick to his stomach.
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* This story offers proof of how awesome a big brother Shining is: even knowing that it's all fake and even knowing she Twilight knows that, everything he says to her when she chases off "Cadence" makes him feel sick to his stomach.
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** Then he clarifies that as Mz. Ruby said in her fight, only Clockwerk had intended true harm on Conner Cooper ([[NotWhatISignedUpFor the other members of the Five were varying degrees of horrified when it turned out Clockwerk]] [[ImAHumanitarian intended to eat the elder raccoon]]) and that when he (The Panda King) realized A) Clockwerk's intentions and [[PapaWolf B) that Conner had a young child the same age as Jing, PapaWolf he shut and blocked the closet Conner had shoved Sly into. Further, after the tragedy, Panda King delivered Sly to the orphanage himself (after painstakingly researching to make sure it was the safest location he could possibly find) and even set the ball in motion for Sly meeting Bentley and Murray]] [[SoProudOfYou and is legitimately proud of everything Sly has accomplished since then]].
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** Then he clarifies that as Mz. Ruby said in her fight, only Clockwerk had intended true harm on Conner Cooper ([[NotWhatISignedUpFor the other members of the Five were varying degrees of horrified when it turned out Clockwerk]] [[ImAHumanitarian intended to eat the elder raccoon]]) and that when he (The Panda King) realized A) Clockwerk's intentions and [[PapaWolf B) that Conner had a young child the same age as Jing, PapaWolf he shut and blocked the closet Conner had shoved Sly into. Further, after the tragedy, Panda King delivered Sly to the orphanage himself (after painstakingly researching to make sure it was the safest location he could possibly find) and even set the ball in motion for Sly meeting Bentley and Murray]] [[SoProudOfYou and is legitimately proud of everything Sly has accomplished since then]].
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* Neftin and Vendra get a fair trial, only the amount of punishment they deserve...and are adopted into the Sparkle Clan. Both siblings are in TearsOfJoy by the end of the chapter.
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** Coco trusts the Pinkie Promise, which speaks volumes of her relationships before her deaging; since she's only met Pinkie a handful of time, she doesn't know her well but trusts her because Rarity does. Or alternately, if this is pre-meeting-Rarity Coco, Pinkie is such a force for good and truth that anyone evoking a Pinkie Promise holds honor as their most valuable possession.
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** Coco trusts the Pinkie Promise, which speaks volumes of her relationships before her deaging; since she's only met Pinkie a handful of time, she doesn't know her well but trusts her because Rarity does. Or alternately, if this is pre-meeting-Rarity Coco, Pinkie is such a force for good and truth in the multiverse that anyone evoking a Pinkie Promise holds honor as their most valuable possession.possession.
* The Panda King manages to be a man of honor, fighting fair when he wants Sly to prove himself as a Cooper and insisting that Coco not hear the AwfulTruth [[HarmfulToMinors about her grandparents' murder at her current age]].
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* Rarity averts the McGinnis divorce simply because she's fond of Terry and wants him to have a happy home.
* Rarity insists on Bruce reconciling with Dick because she wants to meet her older brother.
* While Changeling not telling Rarity that [[ExactWords the only reason he's never won a fight with Batman is because they never fought before Bruce retired]] is mostly [[CrowningMomentOfFunny funny]], the fact that he doesn't want to kill Rarity's admiration of her father is incredibly sweet.
* Why is Rarity interested in reforming Inque? Well, there are many reasons but the one that gets spotlighted is that she wants to give Deanna Clay her mother back.
* Rarity averts the McGinnis divorce simply because she's fond of Terry and wants him to have a happy home.
* Rarity insists on Bruce reconciling with Dick because she wants to meet her older brother.
* While Changeling not telling Rarity that [[ExactWords the only reason he's never won a fight with Batman is because they never fought before Bruce retired]] is mostly [[CrowningMomentOfFunny funny]], the fact that he doesn't want to kill Rarity's admiration of her father is incredibly sweet.
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** Coco trusts the Pinkie Promise, which speaks volumes of her relationships before her deaging; since she's only met Pinkie a handful of time, she doesn't know her well but trusts her because Rarity does. Or alternately, if this is pre-meeting-Rarity Coco, Pinkie is such a force for good and truth that anyone evoking a Pinkie Promise holds honor as their most valuable possession.
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* Even when Jackie is near blind with rage, he's still got enough control of himself to [[NotInFrontOfTheKid avoid killing in front of Sweetie and Scootaloo]] because he doesn't want them traumatized.
* Even though Jade is cleared of punishment for the fight with Marion, the original ending (Jade teaching him martial arts for discipline) is retained and even expanded on by having Jade and the CMC running an official club for the purpose of teaching martial arts.
* Even when Jackie is near blind with rage, he's still got enough control of himself to [[NotInFrontOfTheKid avoid killing in front of Sweetie and Scootaloo]] because he doesn't want them traumatized.
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** Carmelita also is legitimately pained when she realizes that the Cooper Gang were all orphans maltreated by the system and thinks on how her family has told her that the day she stops caring about things like that is the day she should stop being a cop.
* Muggshot proves that he WouldntHurtAChild, insisting that Coco get out of the way before facing Sly, even remarking that she reminds him of his past self and proving a man of honor when he's beaten fair andsquare.square.
* Mz. Ruby is ''horrified'' to discover that Sly [[HarmfulToMinors saw his father get murdered]], explaining that she, Raleigh, Muggshot, and the Panda King had only intended to disable Sly's father to take him out of the criminal game and shuddering in horror and disgust when she talks about [[NotWhatISignedUpFor what their employer did to the elder raccoon]], and graciously surrenders, even giving Coco her spell book so the little filly can train her magical skills and swearing a Pinkie Promise to keep her word that she'll be equally gracious and open with Carmelita.
** Carmelita also is legitimately pained when she realizes that the Cooper Gang were all orphans maltreated by the system and thinks on how her family has told her that the day she stops caring about things like that is the day she should stop being a cop.
* Muggshot proves that he WouldntHurtAChild, insisting that Coco get out of the way before facing Sly, even remarking that she reminds him of his past self and proving a man of honor when he's beaten fair and
* Mz. Ruby is ''horrified'' to discover that Sly [[HarmfulToMinors saw his father get murdered]], explaining that she, Raleigh, Muggshot, and the Panda King had only intended to disable Sly's father to take him out of the criminal game and shuddering in horror and disgust when she talks about [[NotWhatISignedUpFor what their employer did to the elder raccoon]], and graciously surrenders, even giving Coco her spell book so the little filly can train her magical skills and swearing a Pinkie Promise to keep her word that she'll be equally gracious and open with Carmelita.
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