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* While Jake's ex-fiancee has a motive for wanting to kill him, why does she want to kill Elwood as well, who didn't even know her? And it's not like he just got caught in the crossfire, she specifically says "So for my father, for my mother, my grandmother and for the common good! ... I must now kill you, and your brother."
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* While Jake's ex-fiancee has a motive for wanting to kill him, why does she want to kill Elwood as well, who didn't even know her? And it's not like he just got caught in the crossfire, she specifically says "So for my father, for my mother, my grandmother and for the common good! ... I must now kill you, and your brother.""
** Revenge and obsession often make little sense in real life, why shouldn't fiction reflect that?
** Revenge and obsession often make little sense in real life, why shouldn't fiction reflect that?
