Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1 (click to see context) from:
* That whole move Jake uses to defeat Ryan to counter that headlock. It's needlessly complicated and there are easier and more effective ways out of the hold, the simplest being Jake, who happens to be wearing shoes, could simply have ''stamped on Ryan's feet''.
to:
* That whole move Jake uses to defeat Ryan to counter that headlock. It's needlessly complicated and there are easier and more effective ways out of the hold, the simplest being Jake, who happens to be wearing shoes, could simply have ''stamped on Ryan's feet''.feet''.
* Roqua tells Jake that the one rule of his gym is "no fighting outside the gym." It even becomes a plot point when Jake breaks this rule. Meanwhile, Max's EstablishingCharacterMoment is him doing exactly that with no apparent repercussions from Roqua. Maybe he just didn't get caught?
* Roqua tells Jake that the one rule of his gym is "no fighting outside the gym." It even becomes a plot point when Jake breaks this rule. Meanwhile, Max's EstablishingCharacterMoment is him doing exactly that with no apparent repercussions from Roqua. Maybe he just didn't get caught?
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* That whole move Jake uses to defeat Ryan to counter that headlock. It's needlessly complicated and there are easier and more effective ways out of the hold, the simplest being Jake, who happens to be wearing shoes, could simply have ''stamped on Ryan's feet''.
