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* Otachi's [[http://fav.me/d3eqeq7 lack of flaws]], not to mention he has EVERY good trait in the book, which doesn't make him a good character, needless to say. And the fact that [[WritersCantDoMath 14-0=13]].
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* Otachi's [[http://fav.me/d3eqeq7 lack of flaws]], not to mention he has EVERY good trait in the book, which doesn't make him a good character, needless to say. And the fact that [[WritersCantDoMath [[WritersCannotDoMath 14-0=13]].
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Removal of What An Idiot potholes
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* The bloodhaven left a note that said "hey I kidnapped ciel and will make him kill everyone so don't stop us! HAHA!" and otachi said "[[WhatAnIdiot what could this mean?]]" Waterfall looked at hom stupid and said "don't be stupid otachi-kun. It is plain obvious" and otachi felt embaroosed. Otachi said "right" but he didn't get it. Sorry
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* The bloodhaven left a note that said "hey I kidnapped ciel and will make him kill everyone so don't stop us! HAHA!" and otachi said "[[WhatAnIdiot what "what could this mean?]]" mean?" Waterfall looked at hom stupid and said "don't be stupid otachi-kun. It is plain obvious" and otachi felt embaroosed. Otachi said "right" but he didn't get it. Sorry
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** This means that Otachi [[WhatAnIdiot stopped in the middle of a fight to email Ryou]].
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** This means that Otachi [[WhatAnIdiot stopped in the middle of a fight to email Ryou]].Ryou.
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Critical Research Failure is a disambiguation page
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* Ryou said "you need space suits to survive in space except mint because she is a [[CriticalResearchFailure bird and can survive in space]]"
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* Ryou said "you need space suits to survive in space except mint because she is a [[CriticalResearchFailure bird and can survive in space]]"space"
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* A miko was there. [[CriticalResearchFailure he was old and had a long moustache]] and traditional clothes.
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* A miko was there. [[CriticalResearchFailure he was old and had a long moustache]] moustache and traditional clothes.
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* The big army man was riding and animal, it must be a man eating anima;. Otachi recognized it as a [[CriticalResearchFailure giraffe.]] It was large and grey and had tusks that were sharpened. Mint got scared when it blew air from its trunk and screamed.
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* The big army man was riding and animal, it must be a man eating anima;. Otachi recognized it as a [[CriticalResearchFailure giraffe.]] giraffe. It was large and grey and had tusks that were sharpened. Mint got scared when it blew air from its trunk and screamed.
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cut trope
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* Everyone was still they heard the distant cry of a whale. And zakuro rolled her eyes and said "it iss just a whale" [[MoralDissonance If only she had her harpoon]]
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* Everyone was still they heard the distant cry of a whale. And zakuro rolled her eyes and said "it iss just a whale" [[MoralDissonance If only she had her harpoon]] harpoon
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* What I really want to know is what vampire had sex with a moon crab to have Sebastian?
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* What I really want to know is what vampire had sex with a moon crab ''[[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gecarcinus_lateralis Gecarcinus lateralis]]'' to have Sebastian?
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* Otachi's [[http://fav.me/d3eqeq7 lack of flaws]], not to mention he has EVERY good trait in the book, which doesn't make him a [[MarySue good character]], needless to say. And the fact that [[WritersCantDoMath 14-0=13]].
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* Otachi's [[http://fav.me/d3eqeq7 lack of flaws]], not to mention he has EVERY good trait in the book, which doesn't make him a [[MarySue good character]], character, needless to say. And the fact that [[WritersCantDoMath 14-0=13]].
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* He was a good cook like long john sliver. He was part of the crew too helping them. He had hard time getting around because of [[Disney/TreasurePlanet cyborg leg]].
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* He was a good cook like long john sliver. He was part of the crew too helping them. He had hard time getting around because of [[Disney/TreasurePlanet [[WesternAnimation/TreasurePlanet cyborg leg]].
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* Vlad said "WHAT" and [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment opened and door opened and dopor opened. And the door opened]] "vlad are you in there" came the voice. "who do you think is in here stupid" said vlad and [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartmentthe door opened]] and it was his dad
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* Vlad said "WHAT" and [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment opened and door opened and dopor opened. And the door opened]] "vlad are you in there" came the voice. "who do you think is in here stupid" said vlad and [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartmentthe [[DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment the door opened]] and it was his dad
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* "Ahhhh" screamed waterfall and she kicked Vlad in the face "MY BEAUTIFUL! FACE!" screamed Vlad "YOU WILL PAY YOU WENCH THIS IS NOT DARLING!" [[CrowningMomentOfFunny and the yeti exploded]] and Vlad looked angry and dissapared.
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* "Ahhhh" screamed waterfall and she kicked Vlad in the face "MY BEAUTIFUL! FACE!" screamed Vlad "YOU WILL PAY YOU WENCH THIS IS NOT DARLING!" [[CrowningMomentOfFunny and the yeti exploded]] exploded and Vlad looked angry and dissapared.
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** Otachi said "he makes a good ichig to me" and ciel said [[CrowningMomentOfFunny "let me know when you stop being an idiot" and otachi said "ok will do :)"]]
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** Otachi said "he makes a good ichig to me" and ciel said [[CrowningMomentOfFunny "let me know when you stop being an idiot" and otachi said "ok will do :)"]]:)"
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* "nooo!" my harpooooon" said zakuro. Then she transformed and [[CrowningMomentOfFunny now she can't catch whales]]
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* "nooo!" my harpooooon" said zakuro. Then she transformed and [[CrowningMomentOfFunny now she can't catch whales]]whales
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* "Yes! He said! I am Sebastian and I am the demon vampire buttlerr and there are more vampires here there is a vampire cook and a vampite cleaning maid and a [[ComicallyMissingThePoint vampire chef and a vampire dog]] and a [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome vampire lamp1"]]
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* "Yes! He said! I am Sebastian and I am the demon vampire buttlerr and there are more vampires here there is a vampire cook and a vampite cleaning maid and a [[ComicallyMissingThePoint vampire chef and a vampire dog]] and a [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome vampire lamp1"]]
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* "i was never gone, [[CrowningMomentOfFunny i knew you were on a temper trantrum so i went low to lie low and all the vampires pretended to let you kill them.]] I revived them beacause i have the power, you would to if you let me train you so you van be proper vampire prince like you were meant to be."
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* "i was never gone, [[CrowningMomentOfFunny i knew you were on a temper trantrum so i went low to lie low and all the vampires pretended to let you kill them.]] them. I revived them beacause i have the power, you would to if you let me train you so you van be proper vampire prince like you were meant to be."
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* Ciel crosses arms and said "long hair is impractical and stupid. I look much better now mopre like a vampire prince like I am" Winthorpe said "[[CrowningMomentOfFunny don't you mean VAMPIRE PRINCE?!!!]]"
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* Ciel crosses arms and said "long hair is impractical and stupid. I look much better now mopre like a vampire prince like I am" Winthorpe said "[[CrowningMomentOfFunny don't "don't you mean VAMPIRE PRINCE?!!!]]"PRINCE?!!!"
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** And ciel said "Im going home. Im leaving this is" and otachi said "stay with us and be friends" and ciel said "this is really dumb. Im leaving the fanfic" and tony said "don't go" [[CrowningMomentOfFunny but it was too late and ciel stepped out of the fanfiction lol]]
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** And ciel said "Im going home. Im leaving this is" and otachi said "stay with us and be friends" and ciel said "this is really dumb. Im leaving the fanfic" and tony said "don't go" [[CrowningMomentOfFunny but it was too late and ciel stepped out of the fanfiction lol]]lol
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* "say hi to adam sandler for me" Whoops I meant to say [[OutOfCharacter um uh]] [[CrowningMomentOfFunny fuck robin Williams.]]
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* "say hi to adam sandler for me" Whoops I meant to say [[OutOfCharacter um uh]] [[CrowningMomentOfFunny fuck robin Williams.]]
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* "what is the problemo?" asked otachi and he took his wolfe sword and threw it over there because brain hurt. "shes going coocoo!" said mew bark the I mean mew ahcrunch [[CrowningMomentOfFunny "you silly" said Masaya "yes yous a silly you coocoo" and mew crunch agreed.]] "why aren't you helping" said ciel. So they did
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* "what is the problemo?" asked otachi and he took his wolfe sword and threw it over there because brain hurt. "shes going coocoo!" said mew bark the I mean mew ahcrunch [[CrowningMomentOfFunny "you silly" said Masaya "yes yous a silly you coocoo" and mew crunch agreed.]] agreed. "why aren't you helping" said ciel. So they did
