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* The moment where a maddened Paulie bursts back into Bernie's house, shoots his corpse multiple times and only then realizes that the protagonists are standing right there.
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* The moment where Gwen's [[FreakOut natural reaction]] to finding out Bernie's dead.
* Followed immediately by a maddened Pauliebursts bursting back into Bernie's house, shoots shooting his corpse multiple times and only then realizes realizing that the protagonists are standing right there.
* Followed immediately by a maddened Paulie
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* Gwen's [[FreakOut natural reaction]] to finding out Bernie's dead.
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* Gwen's [[FreakOut natural reaction]] to finding out And during the chase the dead Bernie's dead.foot manages to subject Paulie to a GroinAttack, prompting the latter to shoot him ''again''.
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* Some random guy tries mugging Richard and Larry at gunpoint for money. Richard complains he's not in the mood for that, it's too hot today. The mugger shrugs and walks away.
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* Some random guy tries mugging Richard and Larry at gunpoint for money. Richard Larry complains he's not in the mood for that, to deal with that as it's too hot today.hot, pushing the gun away like nothing happened, while Richard meekly looks at him and shuffles away. The mugger shrugs and walks away.
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* Using Bernie as a horse to pull a cart. The ride goes quite well until Larry reaches a steep incline and things go downhill from there.
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* Using Bernie as a horse to pull a cart. The ride goes quite well until Larry reaches a steep incline and things go downhill [[{{Pun}} downhill]] from there.
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-->'''Marty:''' Yeah. Yeah, maybe Paulie is rustier than we thought huh?
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-->'''Marty:''' Yeah. Yeah, maybe Paulie is rustier than we thought thought, huh?
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-->''(Richard and Larry observe as every party goer goes about their business and fail to take any notice)''
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-->''(Schwarzenegger accent)'' Hey dude, you need to pump some iron!
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-->''(Schwarzenegger accent)'' Hey dude, you need to pump some iron!
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-->''(Richard and Larry observe as every party goer goes about their business and fail to take any notice)''
-->'''Richard:''' ''(dumbfounded)'' Doesn't anyone realize he's dead?
-->'''Richard:''' ''(dumbfounded)'' Doesn't anyone realize he's dead?
