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--> '''Bluestar''': There have been fewer kits recently. Why?
--> '''Spottedleaf''': Because Willowpelt has gone through all the toms?
--> '''Bluestar''': Even Ravenpaw?
--> '''Spottedleaf''': Ravenpaw twice.
--> '''Spottedleaf''': Because Willowpelt has gone through all the toms?
--> '''Bluestar''': Even Ravenpaw?
--> '''Spottedleaf''': Ravenpaw twice.
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'''Spottedleaf''': Because Willowpelt has gone through all the
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'''Spottedleaf''': Ravenpaw twice.
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--> '''Graypaw''': (Reads script) Wait, [=ThunderClan=] has a metal hopscotch?
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--> '''Graypaw''': (Reads script) ''(reads script)'' Wait, [=ThunderClan=] has a metal hopscotch?
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'''Feathertail:''' No, I don't mind for some reason. He's great isn't he?
'''Leafpool:''' Yeah... I mean... Shut up!
'''Leafpool:''' Yeah... I mean... Shut up!
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* That was about the time survival instincts, which had been lazing somewhere in the back of his mind thinking they had plenty of time, finally bothered to glance at a metaphorical clock and realized they were late for a metaphorical appointment with Rusty's body. Snarling and swearing, they charged half-prepared out the metaphorical door, forgetting their metaphorical hat and coat along the way.
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* That was about the time survival instincts, which had been lazing somewhere in the back of his mind thinking they had plenty of time, finally bothered to glance at a metaphorical clock and realized they were late for a metaphorical appointment with Rusty's body. Snarling and swearing, they charged half-prepared out the metaphorical door, forgetting their metaphorical hat and coat along the way.way.
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* This exchange in ''Twilight'':
-->'''Leafpool:''' Great [=StarClan=]! It's Feathertail, back from the dead to haunt me about having impure thoughts about Crowfeather!
'''Feathertail:''' No, I don't mind for some reason. He's great isn't he?
'''Leafpool:''' Yeah... I mean... Shut up!
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* This exchange in ''Twilight'':
-->'''Leafpool:''' Great [=StarClan=]! It's Feathertail, back from the dead to haunt me about having impure thoughts about Crowfeather!
'''Feathertail:''' No, I don't mind for some reason. He's great isn't he?
'''Leafpool:''' Yeah... I mean... Shut up!
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* The LevenThumps reference.
* The {{Redwall}} refernece.
* The {{Redwall}} refernece.
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* The LevenThumps ''Literature/LevenThumps'' reference.
* The{{Redwall}} ''Literature/{{Redwall}}'' refernece.
* The
