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-->'''Viviena:''' You're worried that I'll mess things up, aren't you?\\
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'''Viviena:''' Oh, please ''[walks away while rolling her eyes]''\\
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* In the scene of Lharimar finally yelling at Lightsong, one line is inadvertantly hilarious, just from the tone of exasperation:
-->'''Lharimar''':Nothing has changed. You become a god, and I ''still'' end up in prison!
-->'''Lharimar''':Nothing has changed. You become a god, and I ''still'' end up in prison!
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* In the scene of Lharimar Llarimar finally yelling at Lightsong, one line is inadvertantly hilarious, just from the tone of exasperation:
-->'''Lharimar''':Nothing -->'''Llarimar''':Nothing has changed. You become a god, and I ''still'' end up in prison!
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* "One of these days, someone in this Colors-cursed city is going to tell me the whole truth. I'll probably die of shock." - Vivenna getting fed up with events
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* "One of these days, someone in this Colors-cursed city is going to tell me the whole truth. I'll probably die of shock." - Vivenna getting fed up Vivenna, increasingly losing patience with eventsthe general GambitPileup.
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* Vasher and Vivenna get chuckle-worthy moment too.
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* Vasher and Vivenna get chuckle-worthy moment moments too.
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* "One of these days, someone in this Colors-cursed city is going to tell me the whole truth. I'll probably die of shock." - Vivenna getting fed up with events
