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* Kevin's good-byes to Russell, Carl, and Dug. Russell gets an affectionate head-hug (which some parrots will do with people they really like), Carl gets his head gently patted (as she saw Russell doing earlier), [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers and Dug gets an avian obscenity rasped at him]] -- [[ObliviousToHatred which he doesn't react to in the least]].
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* Kevin's good-byes to Russell, Carl, and Dug. Russell gets an affectionate head-hug (which some parrots will do with people they really like), Carl gets his head gently patted (as she saw Russell doing earlier), [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking and Dug gets an avian obscenity rasped at him]] -- [[ObliviousToHatred which he doesn't react to in the least]].
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--->'''Gamma:''' None of your mailman friends can help you now.
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--->'''Gamma:''' ''(smugly, to Russell)'' Scream all you want, small mailman! None of your mailman friends can help you now.
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--->'''Gamma:''' None of your mailman friends can help you now.
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-->'''Gamma:''' Your mailman friends can't hear you now!
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* Ellie to Carl: "Y'know, you don't talk much... I like you!"
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* Ellie to Carl: "Y'know, you don't talk very much... I like you!"
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* Carl's DaydreamSurprise, figuring how he'll get rid of Russell. Namely, he imagines lowering him down with a string.
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* Carl's DaydreamSurprise, figuring how he'll get rid of Russell. Namely, he imagines lowering him down with a string.BedsheetLadder. And dropping him.
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* The "WTF?!" face of the frog after a sleep-drunk Carl hits it upon waking up, a la alarm clock. When it hops of, you can almost see it thinking "Well, I never!"
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* The "WTF?!" face of the frog after a sleep-drunk Carl hits it upon waking up, a la alarm clock. When it hops of, off, you can almost see it thinking "Well, I never!"
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* Muntz makes the mistake of saying having tests is a real treat, making his dogs go nuts.
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* Muntz makes the mistake of saying having tests guests is a real treat, making his dogs go nuts.
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* [[Art/DogsPlayingPoker Dogs. Playing Poker. (Who are you calling an art history nerd?)
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* [[Art/DogsPlayingPoker Dogs. Playing Poker. ]] (Who are you calling an art history nerd?)
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'''Russell:''' I followed the snipe under your porch, but it had a long tail and it looked more like a large mouse...\\
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'''Russell:''' I found the snipe, and I followed the snipe it under your porch, but it porch. But this snipe had a long tail and it looked more like a large mouse...\\
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* After Carl has sent his house into the air, he sits back and prepares for a rest when the door knocks. Startled, he opens the door and finds Russell on the front porch, holding on for dear life:
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* After Carl has sent his house into the air, he sits back and prepares for a rest when the door knocks. Startled, and more than a little bewildered considering he's miles in the air, he opens the door and finds Russell on the front porch, holding on for dear life:life. The fact he and the camera do a DoubleTake is just gravy:
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-->'''Carl:''' ''(back from the ImagineSpot)'' Well, that's not gonna work.
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-->'''Carl:''' ''(back from the ImagineSpot)'' ImagineSpot and in disappointed deadpan)'' Well, that's not gonna work.work.
** The look of horror on his face when his imaginary self drops Russell, his FutileHandReach and Russell's brief scream add to the sheer macabre hilarity.
** One can only imagine the reaction of first-time viewers, because the ImagineSpot is so seamless and probable, for a moment they probably '''did''' believe Carl blundered Russell to his doom.
** The look of horror on his face when his imaginary self drops Russell, his FutileHandReach and Russell's brief scream add to the sheer macabre hilarity.
** One can only imagine the reaction of first-time viewers, because the ImagineSpot is so seamless and probable, for a moment they probably '''did''' believe Carl blundered Russell to his doom.
* Carl ''barely'' stops the house from floating out beyond a cliff and he is stretched out over the drop himself. His blood-curled yell is exactly how one would react.
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* Carl's attempt to get rid of Kevin and Dug.
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* Carl's attempt to get rid of Kevin and Dug. He's run a considerable distance whilst dragging Russell behind him and when he thinks he's in the clear, sits down for a rest. Then he turns around and is greeted by;
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''(Dug spits it out the ball onto Carl's hand, still covered in drool)''
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''(Dug spits it out the ball onto Carl's hand, still covered in drool)''drool. Carl then turns the other way, and Kevin is also back.)''
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* When Carl realizes Muntz has gone way off the deep end, he glances through the window and see's the target of the crazed explorer; '''Kevin'''! He snaps his attention back around and tries to casually leave, and as Muntz advances, Kevin picks the perfect making to vocalize to her chips. Carl's slow cringing sells it as he realizes the jig is up.
* Muntz makes the mistake of saying having tests is a real treat, making his dogs go nuts.
-->'''Muntz''': ''(Muttering)'' I should never use that word.
* Muntz makes the mistake of saying having tests is a real treat, making his dogs go nuts.
-->'''Muntz''': ''(Muttering)'' I should never use that word.
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!![[AC: Novelisation]]
* Stuck with an overeager junior ranger, a giant multi-coloured bird and a talking dog, Carl laments that at this point, he expects a giant dancing hippo to join them.
* Stuck with an overeager junior ranger, a giant multi-coloured bird and a talking dog, Carl laments that at this point, he expects a giant dancing hippo to join them.
