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* Tom randomly bursting into song and singing about a flag, with the others (minus Jackson) saluting alongside him when he finishes. [[spoiler: Becomes less funny when you realize he just passed a self-diagnosis for Lynks Disease and is crying about it.]]
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* Tom randomly bursting into song and singing about a flag, with the others (minus Jackson) saluting alongside him when he finishes. [[spoiler: Becomes less funny when you realize he just passed a self-diagnosis for Lynks Disease and is crying about it.]]
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* Before the tone an stakes of the original short really have a chance to be set, Madison inexplicably laying on the ground can be pretty funny. As she is put there without any context, it's possible to mistake her for a dead body and can suggest the short may veer closer to DarkComedy instead of surreal horror.
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* Before the tone an and stakes of the original short really have a chance to be set, Madison inexplicably laying on the ground can be pretty funny. As she is put there without any context, it's possible to mistake her for a dead body and can suggest the short may veer closer to DarkComedy instead of surreal horror.
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* Tom blaming his wife for Madison's situation. Because "you're a woman, women give each other pills all the time!"
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* Before the tone an stakes of the original short really have a chance to be set, Madison inexplicably laying on the ground can be pretty funny. As she is put there without any context, it's possible to mistake her for a dead body and can suggest the short may veer closer to DarkComedy instead of surreal horror.
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* Tom randomly bursting into song and singing about a flag, with the others (minus Jackson) saluting alongside him when he finishes. [[spoiler: Becomes less funny when you realize he just passed a self-diagnosis for Lynks Disease and is crying about it.]]]]
* "I can say 'Shit' three times...two. Two times. I said it when I was explaining what I could do."
* There are a few moments of NarmCharm, such as Tom's monologue, which is simultaneously a terrifying [[Film/TheShining Jack Torrance]]-esque ramble and a hilarious rant.
--> '''Tom:''' '''[[{{Narm}} FEEL MY HANDS! I'M ON FIRE!!]]'''
* "I can say 'Shit' three times...two. Two times. I said it when I was explaining what I could do."
* There are a few moments of NarmCharm, such as Tom's monologue, which is simultaneously a terrifying [[Film/TheShining Jack Torrance]]-esque ramble and a hilarious rant.
--> '''Tom:''' '''[[{{Narm}} FEEL MY HANDS! I'M ON FIRE!!]]'''
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* Tom randomly bursting into song and singing about a flag, with the others (minus Jackson) saluting alongside him when he finishes. [[spoiler: Becomes less funny when you realize he just passed a self-diagnosis for Lynks Disease and is crying about it.]]
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* THE FLAAAAAAAAAAAAG!
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* THE FLAAAAAAAAAAAAG!Tom randomly bursting into song and singing about a flag, with the others saluting alongside him when he finishes. [[spoiler: Becomes less funny when you realize he just passed a self-diagnosis for Lynks Disease and is crying about it.]]
