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** And he gives a ''very'' exaggerated {{double take}} to it.
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** And he gives a ''very'' exaggerated {{double take}} DoubleTake to it.
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** And shortly beforehand, Jack tries electrolysis on a candy cane and ends up with a limp candy cane with no stripes, and his reaction is much the same as with the snowflake.
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** And shortly beforehand, Jack tries electrolysis on a candy cane and ends up with a limp candy cane with no stripes, and his reaction is much the same as with the snowflake.he looks visibly puzzled and disappointed.
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* The NightmareFuel presents the kids receive from good-natured Jack, both horrifying and hilarious. There's a reason it was in a lot of the trailers.
-->"So what did Santa bring you, honey?" "[[TheScream AAAAAAAAAAAGGGGHHHHH!!!]]"
-->"So what did Santa bring you, honey?" "[[TheScream AAAAAAAAAAAGGGGHHHHH!!!]]"
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* The NightmareFuel presents the kids receive from good-natured Jack, Jack are both horrifying and hilarious. There's a reason it was in a lot of the trailers.
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* "WHAT. IS THIS?" *walks face-first into sign and falls backward into snow*
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* "WHAT. IS THIS?" "[[PunctuatedForEmphasis WHAT! IS! THIS?!]]" *walks face-first into sign and falls backward into snow*
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** Later when she goes back to him because he still has her arm, the detached arm gives a sheepish wave.
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** For that matter, Jack's initial return home from Christmas town. He's wearing a pair of snow goggles, grinning doofily, bearing a giant bag of stolen Christmas trinkets and driving a little snow cart that he obviously also stole.
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** For that matter, Jack's initial return home from Christmas town. He's wearing a pair of snow goggles, grinning doofily, bearing a giant bag of stolen Christmas trinkets and driving a little snow cart that he obviously also stole. What's more, the vehicle has big, ugly gouges where the edges of the Christmas-tree door scraped against the metal bodywork!
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** The fact that Tim Burton supposedly hated this scene so much, he punched a hole in the wall.
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** The fact that Tim Burton supposedly hated this scene ending so much, he punched kicked a hole in the wall.
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** The fact that Tim Burton supposedly hated this scene so much, he punched a hole in the wall.
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** And shortly before, Jack tries electrolysis on a candy cane and ends up with a limp candy cane with no stripes, and his reaction is much the same as with the snowflake.
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** And shortly before, beforehand, Jack tries electrolysis on a candy cane and ends up with a limp candy cane with no stripes, and his reaction is much the same as with the snowflake.
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** And he give a ''very'' exaggerated {{double take}} to it.
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** And he give gives a ''very'' exaggerated {{double take}} to it.
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** Jack's choice of bedtime reading material, which spans the spectrum from A Christmas Carol to The Scientific Method to something called "Bobo Gets a Firetruck." For some reason, the latter is several times thicker than A Christmas Carol.
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** Jack's choice of bedtime reading material, which spans the spectrum from A ''A Christmas Carol Carol'' to The ''The Scientific Method Method'' to something called "Bobo ''Bobo Gets a Firetruck." For Firetruck'', which, for some reason, the latter is several times thicker than A ''A Christmas Carol.Carol''.
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They don't know what the Easter Bunny looks like or is at that point, only that they're supposed to kidnap someone behind a door.
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** Now [[RewatchBonus go back and watch the "Kidnap The Sandy Claws" scene again]] and imagine that they're thinking about the Easter Bunny the whole time.
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* The deliberately un-magical, boring voice Jack speaks with when he's alone and/or depressed, juxtaposed with the posh, boisterous voice he sings or addresses his citizens with. Chris Sarandon does a great job sounding like they literally pulled some guy off the street to read those lines.
* When [[TerribleTrio Lock, Shock, and Barrel]] accidentally bring in the Easter Bunny, from the first "That's not Sandy Claws..." to "BUNNY!" Sure, [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment it has no relevance to the plot]], but ''damn'' was it funny.
* When [[TerribleTrio Lock, Shock, and Barrel]] accidentally bring in the Easter Bunny, from the first "That's not Sandy Claws..." to "BUNNY!" Sure, [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment it has no relevance to the plot]], but ''damn'' was it funny.
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* The deliberately un-magical, boring voice Jack speaks with when he's alone and/or depressed, juxtaposed with the posh, boisterous voice he sings or addresses his citizens with. Chris Sarandon does a great job sounding like they literally pulled some random guy with no acting experience off the street to read those lines.
* When [[TerribleTrio Lock, Shock, and Barrel]] accidentally bring in the Easter Bunny, from the first "That's not Sandy Claws..." to "BUNNY!" Sure, [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment it has no relevance to the plot]], but ''damn''was is it funny.
* When [[TerribleTrio Lock, Shock, and Barrel]] accidentally bring in the Easter Bunny, from the first "That's not Sandy Claws..." to "BUNNY!" Sure, [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment it has no relevance to the plot]], but ''damn''
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-->'''Oogie Boogie:''' WHAT?! ''Snake eyes?!'' (bangs table, flipping the dice to 11.) EEEEEEEEEEE-LEVEN!
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* The deliberately un-magical, boring voice Jack speaks with when he's alone and/or depressed, juxtaposed with the posh, boisterous voice he sings or addresses his citizens with. Chris Sarandon does a great job sounding like they literally pulled some guy off the street to read those lines.
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* A brief one, but Jack's expression when Santa Claus flies out of Oogie's lair when all is said and done. You can practically hear him saying "I didn't know he could do that."
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* A brief one, but Jack's expression when Santa Claus flies out of Oogie's lair when all is said and done. You can practically [[FacialDialogue hear him saying thinking "I didn't know he could do that.""]]
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** Now [[RewatchBonus go back and watch the "Kidnap The Sandy Claws" scene again]] and imagine that they're thinking about the Easter Bunny the whole time.
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** When Oogie comes up to the detached leg, he calls it lovely before taking off Sally's shoe and tickling it. Pretty funny since it's clearly the only act he could do in a family friendly film.
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** And also right after they first shove him in the opening of the pipe and realize he is stuck we get a shot of Santa's mistletoe underwear. How humiliating for Santa.
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** And also right after they first shove him in the opening of the pipe and realize he is stuck we get a shot of Santa's mistletoe holly underwear. How humiliating for Santa.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Wait, that’s not right...]]
[[caption-width-right:350:Wait, that’s not right...]]
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* When Sally goes to free Santa from Oogie's lair, she distracts the villain by taking off one of her legs to lure him over in a typical [[BuffySpeak cartoon-dame-looking-for-a-ride-into-town]] way. Oogie comments on this admiringly, elbowing Santa in a way that says, "Hey, would'ja look at that hottie?" Then he spits in his hand with an audible ''ptooey'' sound and slicks back hair ''that he doesn't even have''.
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-> '''Santa:''' Haven't you heard of peace on earth, and good will toward men?
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---> '''Santa:''' Haven't you heard of peace on earth, and good will toward men?
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---> '''Santa:''' Haven't you heard of peace on earth, and good will toward men?
---> '''Lock, Shock, and, Barrel:''' NO!
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** The sheer size of Santa's rear end is massive. It's so big I'm surprised the trick or treaters could get him to fit down the pipe.
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** The sheer size of Santa's rear end is massive. It's so big I'm surprised it's a wonder the trick or treaters could get him to fit down the pipe.
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-->'''Jack, with sincere and unabashed glee:''' Fantastic!
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** Jack's choice of bedtime reading material, which spans the spectrum from A Christmas Story to The Scientific Method to something called "Bobo Gets a Firetruck." For some reason, the latter is several times thicker than A Christmas Story.
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** Jack's choice of bedtime reading material, which spans the spectrum from A Christmas Story Carol to The Scientific Method to something called "Bobo Gets a Firetruck." For some reason, the latter is several times thicker than A Christmas Story.Carol.
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** Jack's choice of bedtime reading material, which spans the spectrum from A Christmas Story to The Scientific Method to something called "Bobo Gets a Firetruck."
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** Jack's choice of bedtime reading material, which spans the spectrum from A Christmas Story to The Scientific Method to something called "Bobo Gets a Firetruck."" For some reason, the latter is several times thicker than A Christmas Story.
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** Jack's choice of bedtime reading material, which spans the spectrum from A Christmas Story to The Scientific Method to something called "Bobo Gets a Firetruck."
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** For that matter, Jack's initial return home from Christmas town. He's wearing a pair of snow goggles, grinning doofily, bearing a giant bag of stolen Christmas trinkets and driving a little snow cart that he obviously also stole.
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** The Mayor is standing on a rafter, controlling a spotlight. At one point, he gets so excited that he briefly loses his balance and almost falls off. The way he shouts his line when this happens is great:
---> "I fully endorse it, let's (almost falls off) TRY it at once!"
---> "I fully endorse it, let's (almost falls off) TRY it at once!"
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** The Mayor is standing on a rafter, controlling a spotlight. At one point, he gets so excited that he briefly loses his balance and almost falls off. The way he shouts his line when this happens is great:
great (but changed in the album version):
---> "I fully endorse it, let's (almost falls off) TRY it atonce!"once!"
---> "I fully endorse it, let's (almost falls off) TRY it at
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"If you ''please...''"
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** "A pox? How delightful, a pox!" "If you ''please...''"
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** "A pox? How delightful, a pox!" pox!"
"If you ''please...''"
"If you ''please...''"
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* One of the witches uses her hat as an ear trumpet.
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* One of the witches uses using her hat as an ear trumpet.
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* When Oogie Boogie rolls the dice to see how many cranks he'll get [[spoiler: to lower Santa and Sally into the furnace,]] his anger at getting "snake eyes"[[note]] A pair of ones [[/note]] is pretty funny, if only for [[LargeHam how annoyed he sounds.]] Him ''[[SoreLoser banging the table so that the vibration causes the dice to flip to a more favorable number]]'' is even funnier.
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* When Oogie Boogie rolls the dice to see [[spoiler: how many cranks he'll get [[spoiler: to lower Santa and Sally into the furnace,]] his anger at getting "snake eyes"[[note]] A pair of ones [[/note]] is pretty funny, if only for [[LargeHam how annoyed he sounds.]] Him ''[[SoreLoser banging the table so that the vibration causes the dice to flip to a more favorable number]]'' is even funnier.
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* One of the witches uses her hat as a witch an ear trumpet.