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* In early 2013, Grover updated the book for the modern age through a series of Tweets on the Sesame Street Twitter account. Creator/WilWheaton even got in on the fun! View all the tweets [[http://www.toughpigs.com/monster-end/ here]].
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* In early 2013, Grover updated the book for the modern age through a series of Tweets on the Sesame Street Twitter account. Creator/WilWheaton even got in on the fun! View all the tweets [[http://www.toughpigs.com/monster-end/ here]].here]].
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* In the story vision, ebook with highlights, app and new sound book, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uf6U9vH5ovI&t=2m45s Grover's scream]] when you turn another page after untying the ropes.
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* In the story vision, ebook with highlights, app highlights and new sound book, app, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uf6U9vH5ovI&t=2m45s Grover's scream]] when you turn another page after untying the ropes.
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* In the app, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uf6U9vH5ovI&t=2m45s Grover's scream]] when you turn another page after untying the ropes.
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* In the app, story vision, ebook with highlights, app and new sound book, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uf6U9vH5ovI&t=2m45s Grover's scream]] when you turn another page after untying the ropes.
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**"Did "Do you know that you are very strong?"
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* In the app, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uf6U9vH5ovI&t=2m45s Grover's scream]] when you turn another page after untying the ropes.
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* In early 2013, Grover updated the book for the modern age through a series of Tweets on the Sesame Street Twitter account. Creator/WilWheaton even got in on the fun! View all the tweets [[http://www.toughpigs.com/monster-end/ here]].
* In early 2013, Grover updated the book for the modern age through a series of Tweets on the Sesame Street Twitter account. Creator/WilWheaton even got in on the fun! View all the tweets [[http://www.toughpigs.com/monster-end/ here]].
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* Grover, on the last page, chiding the reader for being scared and denying that he ever had been, even though it's the complete opposite of what actually happened.
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* Grover, on the last page, chiding the reader for being scared and denying that he ever had been, even though it's the complete opposite of what actually happened.happened.
**"Oh, I am so embarrassed..."
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* When I was about five years old, the bit where Grover tells me how strong I am after turning the page "blocked" by the brick wall had me in stitches every single time.
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* When I was about five years old, the The bit where Grover tells me the reader how strong I am he or she is after turning the page "blocked" by the brick wall had me in stitches every single time.wall.
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* When I was about five years old, the bit where Grover tells me how strong I am after turning the page "blocked" by the brick wall had me in stitches every single time.
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* When I was about five years old, the bit where Grover tells me how strong I am after turning the page "blocked" by the brick wall had me in stitches every single time.time.
* Grover, on the last page, chiding the reader for being scared and denying that he ever had been, even though it's the complete opposite of what actually happened.
* Grover, on the last page, chiding the reader for being scared and denying that he ever had been, even though it's the complete opposite of what actually happened.
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* When I was about five years old, the bit where Grover tells me how strong I am after turning the page "blocked" by the brick wall had me in stitches every single time.
