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--> '''David:''' Yes. I do.
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* As dire and dark the film's ending is, there's something hilarious about how loud and weird David's screams are, and how the soldiers behind him are understandably confused on why is he screaming.
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* Irene, when she chucks the can of peas at Mrs. Carmody just to shut her up. Doubles as a CrowningMomentOfAwesome.
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* Irene, when she chucks the can of peas at Mrs. Carmody just to shut her up. Doubles as a CrowningMomentOfAwesome.SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome.
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* As dire and dark the film's ending is, there's something hilarious about how loud and weird David's screams are, and how the soldiers behind him are understandably confused on why is he screaming.screaming.
* The scene where Ollie was shaken after killing Mrs. Carmody was tense and darkly funny when David thanks him for it, the original draft made it sound like he got over the trauma pretty quickly.
--> '''Ollie:''' I wouldn't have shot her, David. Not if there had been any other way. Do you believe me?
--> '''David:''' Yes. I do.
--> '''Ollie:''' Okay. Okay then. Let's go.
* The scene where Ollie was shaken after killing Mrs. Carmody was tense and darkly funny when David thanks him for it, the original draft made it sound like he got over the trauma pretty quickly.
--> '''Ollie:''' I wouldn't have shot her, David. Not if there had been any other way. Do you believe me?
--> '''David:''' Yes. I do.
--> '''Ollie:''' Okay. Okay then. Let's go.
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* In a very subtle way, when they tie the rope around the biker who goes out to get the shotgun, they mention "cutting the line" when he gets far enough. Ollie holds out a small paring knife, at which point the biker draws his great big Bowie knife.
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* In a very subtle way, when they tie the rope around the biker who goes out to get the shotgun, they mention "cutting the line" when he gets far enough. Ollie holds out a small paring knife, at which point the biker draws his great big Bowie knife.knife.
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* In a very subtle way, when they tie the rope around the biker who goes out to get the shotgun, they mention "cutting the line" when he gets far enough. Ollie holds out a small pearing paring knife, at which point the biker draws his great big Bowie knife.
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* In a very subtle way, when they tie the rope around the biker who goes out to get the shotgun, they mention "cutting the line" when he gets far enough. Ollie holds out a small pearing knife, at which point the biker draws his great big Bowie knife.
* In a very subtle way, when they tie the rope around the biker who goes out to get the shotgun, they mention "cutting the line" when he gets far enough. Ollie holds out a small pearing knife, at which point the biker draws his great big Bowie knife.
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