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* In Chapter 17, the voice of the shrine tells Wiess she must face the trial with her wits and whatever she can scavenge. Wiess starts to ask what the voice means by that...and then looks down to see she's only in her bra and panties. Cue TheScream.
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You need to always put e before i in Weiss’s name
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* Chapter 16 has Winter asking "...What the hell just happened?" after Wiess activates a shrine and casually walks in while Winter was solemnly saying that she and Wiess can only look at the shrine and if Ruby couldn't activate them, then how could...
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* Chapter 16 has Winter asking "...What the hell just happened?" after Wiess Weiss activates a shrine and casually walks in while Winter was solemnly saying that she and Wiess Weiss can only look at the shrine and if Ruby couldn't activate them, then how could...
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* Chapter 16 has Winter asking "...What the hell just happened?" after Wiess activates a shrine and casually walks in while Winter was solemnly saying that she and Wiess can only look at the shrine and if Ruby couldn't activate them, then how could...
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* In Chapter 10, Weiss uses her Boulder Breaker and Stasis to fix a minecart...and accidentally turns it into a really fast rollercoaster.
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** Weiss uses her Boulder Breaker and Stasis to fix a minecart...and accidentally turns it into a really fastrollercoaster.rollercoaster.
** Daruk helps a tired Goron mine while giving the latter Rock Roast for a boost of energy. The Goron didn't seem to mind Daruk being a ghost.
** Weiss uses her Boulder Breaker and Stasis to fix a minecart...and accidentally turns it into a really fast
** Daruk helps a tired Goron mine while giving the latter Rock Roast for a boost of energy. The Goron didn't seem to mind Daruk being a ghost.
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'''Purah''': Huh?!
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'''Purah''': Huh?!Huh?!
* In Chapter 10, Weiss uses her Boulder Breaker and Stasis to fix a minecart...and accidentally turns it into a really fast rollercoaster.
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* In Chapter 10, Weiss uses her Boulder Breaker and Stasis to fix a minecart...and accidentally turns it into a really fast rollercoaster.
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'''Rhoam''': ...I think you've lost her. ''Willow looks up to see Weiss having a massive ''WTF" expression on her face.''\\
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'''Rhoam''': ...I think you've lost her. ''Willow looks up to see Weiss having a massive ''WTF" ''WTF'' expression on her face.''\\
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'''Willow''':...Where did I lose you?"\\
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'''Willow''':...Where did I lose you?"\\you?\\
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'''Rhoam''': ...I think you've lost her. ''Willow looks up to see Weiss having a massive 'WTF" expression on her face.''\\
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'''Rhoam''': ...I think you've lost her. ''Willow looks up to see Weiss having a massive 'WTF" ''WTF" expression on her face.''\\
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'''Rhoam''': ...I think you've lost her." ''Willow looks up to see Weiss having a massive 'WTF" expression on her face.''\\
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'''Rhoam''': ...I think you've lost her." ''Willow looks up to see Weiss having a massive 'WTF" expression on her face.''\\
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'''Weiss''' ''jokingly'': "Uh-huh. What's next, I can put a small boat in there? ''Willow awkwardly rubs her arm.'' Oh come on, I was joking!
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'''Weiss''' ''jokingly'': "Uh-huh.Uh-huh. What's next, I can put a small boat in there? ''Willow awkwardly rubs her arm.'' Oh come on, I was joking!
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'''Weiss''' ''jokingly'': "Uh-huh. What's next, I can put a small boat in there? ''Willow awkwardly rubs her arm.'' Oh come on, I was joking!
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'''Weiss''' ''jokingly'': "Uh-huh. What's next, I can put a small boat in there? ''Willow awkwardly rubs her arm.'' Oh come on, I was joking!joking!
* In Chapter 4, after Weiss has a memory of her, Ruby, Impa and Purah, we get this exchange:
--> '''Weiss''' ''opens her eyes'': ...Oh my Hylia…\\
'''Impa''': You remembered something?\\
'''Weiss''': Impa… you… you aged horribly!\\
'''''SMACK!'''''\\
'''Weiss''': Ow! ''rubs her head as Impa had smacked her with a staff''\\
'''Impa''': I believe the words you were looking for are "Aged gracefully".\\
'''Weiss''': Who.. was that woman who took our picture?\\
'''Impa''': That would be Purah.\\
'''Weiss''': Wait… THAT was Purah?! But she was so small when I met her.\\
'''Impa''': Oh? So she went through with that experiment, I see…\\
'''Weiss''': What did she do?\\
'''Impa''': She didn't tell you? Well, that's just like her. You see, Purah-\\
''One explanation later…''\\
''Knock knock knock!''\\
'''Purah''': Coming~! ''opens the door'' Oh hi Weiss-y~!\\
'''Weiss''': Why didn't you tell me you were drop dead gorgeous back then?!\\
'''Purah''': Huh?!
* In Chapter 4, after Weiss has a memory of her, Ruby, Impa and Purah, we get this exchange:
--> '''Weiss''' ''opens her eyes'': ...Oh my Hylia…\\
'''Impa''': You remembered something?\\
'''Weiss''': Impa… you… you aged horribly!\\
'''''SMACK!'''''\\
'''Weiss''': Ow! ''rubs her head as Impa had smacked her with a staff''\\
'''Impa''': I believe the words you were looking for are "Aged gracefully".\\
'''Weiss''': Who.. was that woman who took our picture?\\
'''Impa''': That would be Purah.\\
'''Weiss''': Wait… THAT was Purah?! But she was so small when I met her.\\
'''Impa''': Oh? So she went through with that experiment, I see…\\
'''Weiss''': What did she do?\\
'''Impa''': She didn't tell you? Well, that's just like her. You see, Purah-\\
''One explanation later…''\\
''Knock knock knock!''\\
'''Purah''': Coming~! ''opens the door'' Oh hi Weiss-y~!\\
'''Weiss''': Why didn't you tell me you were drop dead gorgeous back then?!\\
'''Purah''': Huh?!
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* In Chapter 2, Willow enchants Weiss's bag to be completely bottomless and can give her anything she thinks of, followed by this exchange:
--> '''Weiss''': Okay… now when you say "anything"...\\
'''Willow''': Oh, you know, the usual… like potions, books, food, weapons, shields, staffs, tents, cauldrons, bikes, picnic tables, absurdly huge weapons-\\
'''Rhoam''': ...I think you've lost her." ''Willow looks up to see Weiss having a massive 'WTF" expression on her face.''\\
'''Willow''':...Where did I lose you?"\\
'''Weiss''': Can you repeat that last bit after staffs? I swear I heard things that are unbelievable.\\
'''Willow''': Trust me, Weiss… it's just the tip of the iceberg.\\
'''Weiss''' ''jokingly'': "Uh-huh. What's next, I can put a small boat in there? ''Willow awkwardly rubs her arm.'' Oh come on, I was joking!
--> '''Weiss''': Okay… now when you say "anything"...\\
'''Willow''': Oh, you know, the usual… like potions, books, food, weapons, shields, staffs, tents, cauldrons, bikes, picnic tables, absurdly huge weapons-\\
'''Rhoam''': ...I think you've lost her." ''Willow looks up to see Weiss having a massive 'WTF" expression on her face.''\\
'''Willow''':...Where did I lose you?"\\
'''Weiss''': Can you repeat that last bit after staffs? I swear I heard things that are unbelievable.\\
'''Willow''': Trust me, Weiss… it's just the tip of the iceberg.\\
'''Weiss''' ''jokingly'': "Uh-huh. What's next, I can put a small boat in there? ''Willow awkwardly rubs her arm.'' Oh come on, I was joking!
