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* While the big, noodly, stretched-out humans look horrifying when they're still in the holes, just try to think about what they'll be like when they get out. Big, floopy things that can't walk, so they just fall flat on their face and twitch around.
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* While the big, noodly, stretched-out humans look horrifying when they're still in the holes, just try to think about what they'll be like when they get out. Big, floopy floppy things that can't walk, so they just fall flat on their face and twitch around.
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*** Realistically, I wouldn't expect them to be able to walk because of the fact that they have severely deformed, elongated, and asymmetrical bodies and that they have been stuck in a hole for '''months'''. (But again, we don't know either way because we only see one at the very end and he wasn't out of the hole yet. [[NightmareRetardant Personally, I prefer to think they can't walk.]])
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*** Realistically, I wouldn't expect it would be physically impossible for them to be able to walk because of the fact that they have severely deformed, elongated, and asymmetrical bodies and that they have been stuck in a hole for '''months'''. (But again, we don't it is impossible to know either way because we only see one is ever seen and even then it's at the very end and he wasn't out of the hole yet. [[NightmareRetardant Personally, I prefer to think But regardless, let's all hope they can't walk.]])
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*** Realistically, I wouldn't expect them to be able to walk because of the fact that they have severely deformed, elongated, annd asymmetrical bodies and that they have been stuck in a hole for '''months'''. (But again, we don't know either way because we only see one at the very end and he wasn't out of the hole yet.)
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*** Realistically, I wouldn't expect them to be able to walk because of the fact that they have severely deformed, elongated, annd and asymmetrical bodies and that they have been stuck in a hole for '''months'''. (But again, we don't know either way because we only see one at the very end and he wasn't out of the hole yet.) [[NightmareRetardant Personally, I prefer to think they can't walk.]])
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*** Realistically, I wouldn't expect them to be able to walk because of the fact that they have been severely deformed after being stuck in a hole for months. (But again, we don't know either way because we only see one at the very end and he wasn't out of the hole yet.)
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*** Realistically, I wouldn't expect them to be able to walk because of the fact that they have been severely deformed after being deformed, elongated, annd asymmetrical bodies and that they have been stuck in a hole for months.'''months'''. (But again, we don't know either way because we only see one at the very end and he wasn't out of the hole yet.)
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"Gashunk" is actually from Gyo
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* "Th-this [X]! It was meant for me!" along with '''GASHUNK''', "DRR... DRR... DRR..." and "It's slowly coming this way!" have all become memes, despite the fact that their source material is meant to be anything but intentionally humorous.
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* "Th-this [X]! It was meant for me!" along with '''GASHUNK''', "DRR... DRR... DRR..." and "It's slowly coming this way!" have all become memes, despite the fact that their source material is meant to be anything but intentionally humorous.
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*** Realistically, I wouldn't expect them to be able to walk because of the fact that they have been severely deformed after being stuck in the cave for months. (But again, we don't know either way because we only see one and he was just about to come out of the hole.)
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*** Realistically, I wouldn't expect them to be able to walk because of the fact that they have been severely deformed after being stuck in the cave a hole for months. (But again, we don't know either way because we only see one at the very end and he was just about to come wasn't out of the hole.hole yet.)
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** Realistically, I wouldn't expect them to be able to walk because of the fact that they have been severely deformed after being stuck in the cave for months. (But again, we don't know either way because we only see one and he was just about to come out of the hole.)
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** Realistically, I wouldn't expect them to be able to walk because of the fact that they have been severely deformed after being stuck in the cave for months. (But again, we don't know either way because we only see one and he was just about to come out of the hole.)
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* "Th-this [X]! It was meant for me!" along with '''GASHUNK''', "DRR... DRR... DRR..." and "It's slowly coming this way!" have all become memes, despite the fact that their source material is meant to be anything but intentionally humorous.
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* "Th-this [X]! It was meant for me!" along with '''GASHUNK''', "DRR... DRR... DRR..." and "It's slowly coming this way!" have all become memes, despite the fact that their source material is meant to be anything but intentionally humorous.humorous.
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* There are quite a few times where [[AccidentalInnuendo "finding your hole" or "entering your hole"]] or similar are mentioned.
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*** The horror doesn't really come from the idea that they might have somehow become dangerous. It comes from the fact that they used to be normal people, and now they've been twisted and contorted into nightmarish shapes while still alive. So, it doesn't really improve if they can't move much after coming out. If anything, it just turns into an example of AndIMustScream. Of course if they can move, [[http://i2.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/original/000/001/480/AmigaraDDR.jpg they might be able to play a mad game of DDR]].
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*** The horror doesn't really come from the idea that they might have somehow become dangerous. It comes from the fact that they used to be normal people, and now they've been twisted and contorted into nightmarish shapes while still alive. So, it doesn't really improve if they can't move much after coming out. If anything, it just turns into an example of AndIMustScream. Of course if they can move, [[http://i2.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/original/000/001/480/AmigaraDDR.[[https://40.media.tumblr.com/2bb0e81556cd0cbd22c20a49c9dc527d/tumblr_n1vs4oFfYn1sht10qo1_500.jpg they might be able to play a mad game of DDR]].
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* "Th-this [X]! It was meant for me!" along with ''GASHUNK'', "DRR...DRR...DRR..." and "It's slowly coming this way!" have all become memes, despite the fact that their source material is meant to be anything but intentionally humorous.
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* "Th-this [X]! It was meant for me!" along with ''GASHUNK'', "DRR...'''GASHUNK''', "DRR... DRR... DRR...DRR..." and "It's slowly coming this way!" have all become memes, despite the fact that their source material is meant to be anything but intentionally humorous.
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* "Si-sir! It's ''slowly'' coming this way!"
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* "Si-sir! It's ''slowly'' coming this way!"way!"
* "Th-this [X]! It was meant for me!" along with ''GASHUNK'', "DRR...DRR...DRR..." and "It's slowly coming this way!" have all become memes, despite the fact that their source material is meant to be anything but intentionally humorous.
* "Th-this [X]! It was meant for me!" along with ''GASHUNK'', "DRR...DRR...DRR..." and "It's slowly coming this way!" have all become memes, despite the fact that their source material is meant to be anything but intentionally humorous.
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** The horror doesn't really come from the idea that they might have somehow become dangerous. It comes from the fact that they used to be normal people, and now they've been twisted and contorted into nightmarish shapes while still alive. So, it doesn't really improve if they can't move much after coming out. If anything, it just turns into an example of AndIMustScream. Of course if they can move, [[http://i2.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/original/000/001/480/AmigaraDDR.jpg they might be able to play a mad game of DDR]].
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** The horror doesn't really come from the idea that they might have somehow become dangerous. It comes from the fact that they used to be normal people, and now they've been twisted and contorted into nightmarish shapes while still alive. So, it doesn't really improve if they can't move much after coming out. If anything, it just turns into an example of AndIMustScream. Of course if they can move, [[http://i2.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/original/000/001/480/AmigaraDDR.jpg they might be able to play a mad game of DDR]].
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** Kinda reminds you of those old cartoons where a character would fall off a cliff and make a hole in their shape (hair included).
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* "Si-sir! It's ''slowly'' coming this way!"
** This somewhat brings to mind the scientists kind of awkwardly standing around, checking their watches and eating sandwiches, before this horribly noodly man-thing plops out the end and twitches on the ground.
---> '''Scientist:''' Well, gentlemen. Ain't that some shit.
** This somewhat brings to mind the scientists kind of awkwardly standing around, checking their watches and eating sandwiches, before this horribly noodly man-thing plops out the end and twitches on the ground.
---> '''Scientist:''' Well, gentlemen. Ain't that some shit.
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* "Si-sir! It's ''slowly'' coming this way!"
** This somewhat brings to mind the scientists kind of awkwardly standing around, checking their watches and eating sandwiches, before this horribly noodly man-thing plops out the end and twitches on the ground.
---> '''Scientist:''' Well, gentlemen. Ain't that some shit.way!"
** This somewhat brings to mind the scientists kind of awkwardly standing around, checking their watches and eating sandwiches, before this horribly noodly man-thing plops out the end and twitches on the ground.
---> '''Scientist:''' Well, gentlemen. Ain't that some shit.
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--> '''Scientist:''' Well, gentlemen. Ain't that some shit.
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** Kinda reminds you of those old cartoons where a character would fall off a cliff and make a hole in their shape (hair included).
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** Kinda reminds you of those old cartoons where a character would fall off a cliff and make a hole in their shape (hair included).included).
* "Si-sir! It's ''slowly'' coming this way!"
** This somewhat brings to mind the scientists kind of awkwardly standing around, checking their watches and eating sandwiches, before this horribly noodly man-thing plops out the end and twitches on the ground.
--> '''Scientist:''' Well, gentlemen. Ain't that some shit.
* "Si-sir! It's ''slowly'' coming this way!"
** This somewhat brings to mind the scientists kind of awkwardly standing around, checking their watches and eating sandwiches, before this horribly noodly man-thing plops out the end and twitches on the ground.
--> '''Scientist:''' Well, gentlemen. Ain't that some shit.
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* The holes were even shaped to accommodate people's ''hair!''
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* The holes were even shaped to accommodate people's ''hair!''''hair!''
** Kinda reminds you of those old cartoons where a character would fall off a cliff and make a hole in their shape (hair included).
** Kinda reminds you of those old cartoons where a character would fall off a cliff and make a hole in their shape (hair included).
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* The holes were even shaped to accommodate people's [italic|hair!]
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* The holes were even shaped to accommodate people's [italic|hair!]''hair!''
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** Unless they actually can walk. In that case, it's absolutely horrifying.
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** Unless they actually can walk. In that case, it's absolutely horrifying.horrifying.
* The holes were even shaped to accommodate people's [italic|hair!]
* The holes were even shaped to accommodate people's [italic|hair!]
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** Unless they actually can walk. In which case, it's absolutely horrifying.
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** Unless they actually can walk. In which that case, it's absolutely horrifying.
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* Some potential FridgeHumor: while the big, noodly, stretched-out humans look horrifying when they're still in the holes, just try to think about what they'll be like when they get out. Big, floopy things that can't walk, so they just fall flat on their face and twitch around.
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* Some potential FridgeHumor: while While the big, noodly, stretched-out humans look horrifying when they're still in the holes, just try to think about what they'll be like when they get out. Big, floopy things that can't walk, so they just fall flat on their face and twitch around.around.
** Unless they actually can walk. In which case, it's absolutely horrifying.
** Unless they actually can walk. In which case, it's absolutely horrifying.
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When you think about it the stretched out humans would fall to the ground twitching the moment they actually left their holes so once you got past their appearance they would be Hilarius.
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When you think about it the stretched out humans would fall to the ground twitching the moment they actually left their holes so once you got past their appearance they would be Hilarius.