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It's very hard to take the quicksand, mire mud scene seriously when accompanied with rather goofy, cartoony illustrations! Thanks Riddle!
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* Twig eating a wood pear from the garbage! And his reaction! [[spoiler:Long story short, he gets caught wandering about the Gyle Colony kitchen by the monstrous Grossmother and not knowing what to do with him, throws him down the rubbish chute with the rotten fruit! So in a way he is eating garbage even if that wood pear wasn't even mouldy yet.]]
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* Twig eating a wood pear from the garbage! And his reaction! [[spoiler:Long story short, he gets caught wandering about the Gyle Colony kitchen by the monstrous Grossmother and not knowing what to do with him, throws him down the rubbish chute with the rotten fruit! So in a way he is eating garbage even if that wood pear wasn't even mouldy yet.]]]]
* Any ButtMonkey moment for poor Twig, reading about him getting thrown away with the garbage, nearly drowning in the Mire quicksand etc. alongside the goofy illustrations is enough to make anyone crack up!
* Any ButtMonkey moment for poor Twig, reading about him getting thrown away with the garbage, nearly drowning in the Mire quicksand etc. alongside the goofy illustrations is enough to make anyone crack up!
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* Twig eating a wood pear from the garbage! And his reaction!reaction! [[spoiler:Long story short, he gets caught wandering about the Gyle Colony kitchen by the monstrous Grossmother and not knowing what to do with him, throws him down the rubbish chute with the rotten fruit! So in a way he is eating garbage even if that wood pear wasn't even mouldy yet.]]
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* Twig eating a wood pear from the garbage! And his reaction!
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Twig after being thrown away with the rotten fruit by the Gyre Goblin Grossmother decides to eat a pear from the garbage.
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Literally a disaster of a page. It looked like it was written by a six year old.
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* No Twig do not eat that Woodpear, it's been in the garbage! Why did you eat it?!
* Twig Can't seem to avoid being a butt monkey throughout the DeepWoods...
** oh goody, a giant goblin just threw Twig down a garbage chute, is Veruca Salt down there?
** Twig, now's not the time to have a mud bath...
** Twig becoming a Trog's pet, I'm Dying XD.
* The art style does make some of the characters look cartoony...
* Twig Can't seem to avoid being a butt monkey throughout the DeepWoods...
** oh goody, a giant goblin just threw Twig down a garbage chute, is Veruca Salt down there?
** Twig, now's not the time to have a mud bath...
** Twig becoming a Trog's pet, I'm Dying XD.
* The art style does make some of the characters look cartoony...
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* No Twig do not eat that Woodpear, it's been in the garbage! Why did you eat it?!
*Twig Can't seem to avoid being a butt monkey throughout the DeepWoods...
**oh goody, a giant goblin just threw Twig down a garbage chute, is Veruca Salt down there?
**Twig, now's not the time to have a mud bath...
** Twig becoming a Trog's pet, I'm Dying XD.
*The art style does make some of the characters look cartoony...
*Twig Can't seem to avoid being a butt monkey throughout the DeepWoods...
**oh goody, a giant goblin just threw Twig down a garbage chute, is Veruca Salt down there?
**Twig, now's not the time to have a mud bath...
** Twig becoming a Trog's pet, I'm Dying XD.
*The art style does make some of the characters look cartoony...
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Wait tropes don\'t go there face palm
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* BizarreTasteinFood Twig eats a moldy Woodpear from a pile of garbage!
* ButtMonkey Twigs gets eaten, slimed, nearly drowns in a bog and forced to be a Trog's pet... He's not having a good day.
* ButtMonkey Twigs gets eaten, slimed, nearly drowns in a bog and forced to be a Trog's pet... He's not having a good day.
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* BizarreTasteinFood Twig eats a moldy Woodpear from a pile of garbage!garbage!
*ButtMonkey Twigs gets eaten, slimed, nearly drowns in a bog and forced to be a Trog's pet... He's not having a good day.
*ButtMonkey Twigs gets eaten, slimed, nearly drowns in a bog and forced to be a Trog's pet... He's not having a good day.
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*BizarreTasteinFood Twig eats a moldy Woodpear from a pile of garbage!
