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* Jude has a ''literal'' AttentionDeficitOohShiny moment, running away after a shiny Pokemon while yelling "Shiny!", causing the protagonist to crack up.
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* Jude has a ''literal'' AttentionDeficitOohShiny moment, running away after a shiny Pokemon Pokémon while yelling "Shiny!", causing the protagonist to crack up.
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* The RunningGag of the protagonist ''never'' getting the Pokemon he wanted. Reaches hilarious levels with Swablu and Krabby. Also, he never gets to name them.
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* The RunningGag of the protagonist ''never'' getting the Pokemon Pokémon he wanted. Reaches hilarious levels with Swablu and Krabby. Also, he never gets to name them.
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* "Des, set the building on fire."
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* "Des, set the building on fire.""
* The RunningGag of the protagonist ''never'' getting the Pokemon he wanted. Reaches hilarious levels with Swablu and Krabby. Also, he never gets to name them.
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* The RunningGag of the protagonist ''never'' getting the Pokemon he wanted. Reaches hilarious levels with Swablu and Krabby. Also, he never gets to name them.
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* The protagonist's [[ParanoiaFuel reaction]] to watching the SlendermanMythos.
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* The protagonist's [[ParanoiaFuel reaction]] to watching the SlendermanMythos.Franchise/TheSlenderManMythos.
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* The protagonist's [[ParanoiaFuel reaction]] to watching the SlendermanMythos.
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* The protagonist's [[ParanoiaFuel reaction]] to watching the SlendermanMythos.SlendermanMythos.
* "Des, set the building on fire."
* "Des, set the building on fire."
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* While the protagonist is trying to think of a name for his Swablu, Jude starts humming songs in order to trick him into saying names. The protagonist's reactions are funny enough, but his downplayed OhCrap when he finally gets tricked is the greatest part.
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* While the protagonist is trying to think of a name for his Swablu, Jude starts humming songs in order to trick him into saying names. The protagonist's reactions are funny enough, but his downplayed OhCrap when he finally gets tricked is the greatest part.part.
* The protagonist's [[ParanoiaFuel reaction]] to watching the SlendermanMythos.
* The protagonist's [[ParanoiaFuel reaction]] to watching the SlendermanMythos.
