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* Harry sees Etri laying down an ultimatum to Ebenezar, and is impressed, noting that only a fool angers his grandfather. This immediately after telling Eb that he's responsible for his own daughter being raped and murdered, and his grandson being raised by an abusive monster. Harry promptly lampshades this.
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* Bonea is the Spirit of Intellect daughter of Harry and Lash, possessing the accumulated knowledge of him and a fallen angel. The very first scene of her is helping Maggie, her pseudo-half-sister, make pancakes for their dad and uncle. Doubles as heartwarming.
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* Bonea is the Spirit of Intellect daughter of Harry and Lash, possessing the accumulated knowledge of him and a fallen angel. The very first scene of her her, in Chapter Two, is helping Maggie, her pseudo-half-sister, make pancakes for their dad and uncle. Doubles as heartwarming.
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* Poor Harry has contacted the conjurities to which according to Lara, it was supposed to only occur with the wizard children. But in his case, well...
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* Poor Harry has contacted the conjurities to which according to Lara, it was is supposed to only occur with the in wizard children. But in his case, well...
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'''Evanna:''' ''[[[WhatAnIdiot shuts her eyes for a moment]]]'' Not that.
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'''Evanna:''' ''[[[WhatAnIdiot shuts ''[shuts her eyes for a moment]]]'' moment]'' Not that.
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* Bonea is the Spirit of Intellect lovechild of Harry and Lash, possessing the accumulated knowledge of him and a fallen angel. The very first scene of her is helping Maggie, her pseudo-half-sister, make pancakes for their dad and uncle. Doubles as heartwarming.
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* Bonea is the Spirit of Intellect lovechild daughter of Harry and Lash, possessing the accumulated knowledge of him and a fallen angel. The very first scene of her is helping Maggie, her pseudo-half-sister, make pancakes for their dad and uncle. Doubles as heartwarming.
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'''Evanna:''' ''[[[WhatAnIdiot shuts her eyes for a moment]]]'' Not that.
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'''Evanna:''' ''[[[WhatAnIdiot shuts her eyes for a moment]]]'' Not that.that.
* Harry sees Etri laying down an ultimatum to Ebenezar, and is impressed, noting that only a fool angers his grandfather. This immediately after telling Eb that he's responsible for his own daughter being raped and murdered, and his grandson being raised by an abusive monster. Harry promptly lampshades this.
* Harry sees Etri laying down an ultimatum to Ebenezar, and is impressed, noting that only a fool angers his grandfather. This immediately after telling Eb that he's responsible for his own daughter being raped and murdered, and his grandson being raised by an abusive monster. Harry promptly lampshades this.
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-->'''Harry:''' ''[freaking out]'' Oh, wow, we were warned and we did not listen. [[Franchise/StarWars How many hands did we see flying off?]]
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-->'''Harry:''' ''[freaking out]'' Oh, wow, we were warned and we did not didn’t listen. [[Franchise/StarWars How many hands did we see flying off?]]
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** The fact that he found a way to use it ''in battle''. (And even then he considered the noise a bit overpowering. Wonder what he would think about using it in an enclosed space, like Butter's apartment....)
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--> "Once they realized they could use it to drop their towels right next to the laundry room in the basement, instead of carrying them down in hampers, there was no stopping it,” Freydis said. “They just knocked holes in the wall with the dumbbells and started dropping towels down the shaft. Marcone had to give in with grace and installed dumbwaiter doors.”
* Sanya spars with Butters with live weapons. Sanya misses a parry and takes [[LaserBlade Fidelacchius]] to the wrist and falls screaming clutching the arm uninjured, that he slipped into his sleeve to mess with Butters.
-->'''Harry:''' (freaking out) Damnit, we were warned and we did not listen! [[Franchise/StarWars How many hands did we see flying off!?]]
* Sanya spars with Butters with live weapons. Sanya misses a parry and takes [[LaserBlade Fidelacchius]] to the wrist and falls screaming clutching the arm uninjured, that he slipped into his sleeve to mess with Butters.
-->'''Harry:''' (freaking out) Damnit, we were warned and we did not listen! [[Franchise/StarWars How many hands did we see flying off!?]]
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* Sanya spars with Butters with live weapons. Sanya misses a parry and takes
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* Harry had a prank ready for Butter's birthday: a spell that makes the sound of a ''Tyrannosaurus Rex'' roaring the tune of Happy Birthday. It finishes with Harry himself crooning "and many mooooore!"
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* Harry had a prank ready for Butter's birthday: a spell that makes the sound of a ''Tyrannosaurus Rex'' rex'' roaring the tune of Happy Birthday. It finishes with Harry himself crooning "and many mooooore!"
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'''Evanna:''' ''([[WhatAnIdiot shuts her eyes for a moment]])'' Not that.
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'''Evanna:''' ''([[WhatAnIdiot ''[[[WhatAnIdiot shuts her eyes for a moment]])'' moment]]]'' Not that.
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** Usually, the mystical items Harry uses have occult significance. In this case, he includes snacks seemingly just for her to nosh on.
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** Usually, the mystical items Harry uses have occult significance. In this case, he includes snacks seemingly just for her to nosh on. (It turns out he planned well-- Apparently Molly hadn't eaten in 'a couple of days', and was ''hungry''.)
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* Harry notes that only a fool would dare mess with Ebenezar. This after having spent the last several minutes arguing with him and jumping up and down on his {{Berserk Button}}s.
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* Harry notes that only a fool would dare mess with Ebenezar. This after having spent the last several minutes arguing with him and jumping up and down on his {{Berserk Button}}s. (And yes, he does see the {{irony}}.)
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* Harry runs into a svartalf security guard who considers his job extremely SeriousBusiness. After he finally passes all the security questions... they have a casual chat about poker night and a play date for their respective daughters (and Mouse.)
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* Harry runs into a svartalf security guard who considers his job extremely SeriousBusiness. After he finally passes all the security questions... they have a casual chat about poker night and a play date for their respective daughters (and Mouse.)Mouse).
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* Harry notes that "it never hurts to be polite." Sanya asks if he read that in a book somewhere. Maybe a long time ago?
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* Harry notes that "it never hurts to be polite." Sanya asks if he read that in a book somewhere. Maybe a long time ago?ago?
* This exchange, after Harry blurts out that he doesn't know anything about the embassy fire because he was at his girlfriend's all night:
-->'''Evanna:''' Say that again.\\
'''Harry:''' [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Why is everyone so shocked that I have a girlfriend?]]\\
'''Evanna:''' ''([[WhatAnIdiot shuts her eyes for a moment]])'' Not that.
* This exchange, after Harry blurts out that he doesn't know anything about the embassy fire because he was at his girlfriend's all night:
-->'''Evanna:''' Say that again.\\
'''Harry:''' [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Why is everyone so shocked that I have a girlfriend?]]\\
'''Evanna:''' ''([[WhatAnIdiot shuts her eyes for a moment]])'' Not that.
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* Poor Harry has contacted the conjurities to which according to Lara, it was supposed to only occur the wizard children. But in his case, well...
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* Poor Harry has contacted the conjurities to which according to Lara, it was supposed to only occur with the wizard children. But in his case, well...
