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* In the second Berdly fight, Rudy urges Noelle to make her game self punch Berdly once. [[ScratchDamage This does about 22 damage.]]
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* In the second Berdly fight, Rudy urges Noelle to make her game self punch Berdly once. [[ScratchDamage This does about 22 damage.]][[labelnote:*]]In the "Light World", this is roughly the same amount of damage that someone with 10 attack would do against a 0 defense enemy, but is three times weaker than a 10 attack strike in the Dark World[[/labelnote]]
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* At the part where the $!$! squad gets drenched by tea, Noelle and Rudy reminisce on the days where Dess would throw off all of her clothes when she got home on a rainy day. Once, she did it while the Dreemurr family was visiting, resulting in some interesting reactions from Toriel, Mrs. Holiday, and Asriel, and the former covering... Asgore's eyes instead of either of her kids. Dess took it all in stride and sauntered off to the shower with no shame.
** WordOfGod says that Kris was originally going to make a deer pun during the incident and Toriel wouldn't be sure whether to scold Kris or laugh.
** WordOfGod says that Kris was originally going to make a deer pun during the incident and Toriel wouldn't be sure whether to scold Kris or laugh.
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-->Noelle: That's an... interesting choice of words?
-->Rudy: I'm not actually sure that IS a word.
-->Noelle: I think he was trying to imply "developed and successful," but it kinda makes us sound... [[CurvesInAllTheRightPlaces "thicc."]]
-->Rudy: I'm... not going to comment on that.
-->Rudy: I'm not actually sure that IS a word.
-->Noelle: I think he was trying to imply "developed and successful," but it kinda makes us sound... [[CurvesInAllTheRightPlaces "thicc."]]
-->Rudy: I'm... not going to comment on that.
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* In the second Berdly fight, Rudy urges Noelle to make her game self punch Berdly once. [[ScratchDamage This does about 22 damage.]]
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* Noelle describes her experience with Queen's butt as... confusing. She couldn't tell if Queen was wearing white leggings or if she was actually staring at her half bare cheeks.
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* Rudy's [[FlatWhat reaction]] to Queen's... hiding spot.
** Noelle describes her experience with Queen's butt as... confusing. She couldn't tell if Queen was wearing white leggings or if she was actually staring at her half bare cheeks.
** Noelle describes her experience with Queen's butt as... confusing. She couldn't tell if Queen was wearing white leggings or if she was actually staring at her half bare cheeks.
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* The part where Kris and Noelle reunite with the reset of the $!$! squad has a joke ending where Game!Noelle has her robes ''[[WardrobeMalnfunction snagged off of her along with the box]]'', resulting in [[BigWhat Big]], FlatWhat from the Noelle playing.
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* The part where Kris and Noelle reunite with the reset of the $!$! squad has a joke ending where Game!Noelle has her robes ''[[WardrobeMalnfunction ''[[WardrobeMalfunction snagged off of her along with the box]]'', resulting in [[BigWhat Big]], FlatWhat from the Noelle playing.
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* The part where Kris and Noelle reunite with the reset of the $!$! squad has a joke ending where Game!Noelle has her robes ''[[WardrobeMalnfunction snagged off of her along with the box]]'', resulting in [[BigWhat Big]], [[FlatWhat]] from the Noelle playing.
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* The part where Kris and Noelle reunite with the reset of the $!$! squad has a joke ending where Game!Noelle has her robes ''[[WardrobeMalnfunction snagged off of her along with the box]]'', resulting in [[BigWhat Big]], [[FlatWhat]] FlatWhat from the Noelle playing.
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* The part where Kris and Noelle reunite with the reset of the $!$! squad has a joke ending where Game!Noelle has her robes ''[[WardrobeMalnfunction snagged off of her along with the box]]'', resulting in [[BigWhat Big]], [[FlatWhat]] from the Noelle playing.
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* In the second Berdly fight, Rudy urges Noelle to make her game self punch Berdly once. This does about 22 damage.
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* Noelle describes her experience with Queens butt as... confusing. She couldn't tell if Queen was wearing white leggings or if she was actually staring at her half bare cheeks.
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* Noelle describes her experience with Queens butt as... confusing. She couldn't tell if Queen was wearing white leggings or if she was actually staring at her half bare cheeks.
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* When the gang lands in the Trash Zone after falling from the rollercoaster, Rudy snarks that they landed on Berdly's arguments.
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* After Berdly's "gazing distantly at Noelle and I's fruited figures." comment:
-->Noelle: That's an... interesting choice of words?
-->Rudy: I'm not actually sure that IS a word.
-->Noelle: I think he was trying to imply "developed and successful," but it kinda makes us sound... [[CurvesInAllTheRightPlaces "thicc."]]
-->Rudy: I'm... not going to comment on that.
-->Noelle: That's an... interesting choice of words?
-->Rudy: I'm not actually sure that IS a word.
-->Noelle: I think he was trying to imply "developed and successful," but it kinda makes us sound... [[CurvesInAllTheRightPlaces "thicc."]]
-->Rudy: I'm... not going to comment on that.
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* At the segment where they need to figure out which lift to take and collect balls on the way up, Rudy makes a joke about kicking ass, [[GroinAttack but from the front]].
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* Noelle is a bit disappointed that [[{{Tomboy}} Susie]] wasn't wearing the kind of nurse outfit she was expecting.
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'''Warning. This page contains [[Administrivia/SpoilersOff unmarked spoilers]] not only to ''VideoGame/{{Deltarune}}'', but also contains unmarked spoilers to original both''VideoGame/{{Deltarune}}'' and this story's lore.'''
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* Ha ha they picked bosom.
* Noelle remarks that the only thing closest to a swear that they can type on the keyboard is "[=AR2E=]". Rudy then tries to examine how they can type it.
* Noelle remarks that the only thing closest to a swear that they can type on the keyboard is "[=AR2E=]". Rudy then tries to examine how they can type it.
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** A later post in the Chapter 1 interlude shows that Axquirix found evidence that he remembers Dess when you examine an angel in Rudy's room in Chapter 1, effectively proving Axquirix wrong.
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** A later post in the Chapter 1 interlude shows that Axquirix found evidence that he remembers Dess when you examine an angel in Rudy's room in Chapter 1, effectively proving Axquirix wrong.wrong.
* In the post showing Noelle and Rudy meeting the Ruddin who tells them the town is called "[[HelloInsertNameHere [=NOELLE=]]]Town, a commenter mentioned that Noelle could theoretically figure out her game's player's name by finding out the name of the town.
* In the post showing Noelle and Rudy meeting the Ruddin who tells them the town is called "[[HelloInsertNameHere [=NOELLE=]]]Town, a commenter mentioned that Noelle could theoretically figure out her game's player's name by finding out the name of the town.
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* When Lancer "pronounces" the party "cookie and wife," Noelle is confused who he's referring to and imagines Kris in a wedding dress.
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* Noelle deliberately choosing certain dialogue branches that she knows weren't picked in her reality. During the Chapter 1 playthrough, this has Noelle and Rudy wonder how Kris would've known they would've thought that if they never said it. In Chapter 2, Noelle explains what the other dialogue option shows.
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* After choosing the "crime" dialogue option when Susie asks Kris to help come up with an excuse, Noelle tells Rudy that she thought the "hanging out in the closet" option where Susie says they're gonna be "touching brooms" meant [[AccidentialInnuendo something else]].
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* After choosing the "crime" dialogue option when Susie asks Kris to help come up with an excuse, Noelle tells Rudy that she thought the "hanging out in the closet" option where Susie says they're gonna be "touching brooms" meant [[AccidentialInnuendo [[AccidentalInnuendo something else]].
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* After choosing the "crime" dialogue option when Susie asks Kris to help come up with an excuse, Noelle tells Rudy that she thought the "hanging out in the closet" option where Susie says they're gonna be "touching brooms" meant [[{{Squick}} something else]].
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* After choosing the "crime" dialogue option when Susie asks Kris to help come up with an excuse, Noelle tells Rudy that she thought the "hanging out in the closet" option where Susie says they're gonna be "touching brooms" meant [[{{Squick}} [[AccidentialInnuendo something else]].
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!!Chapter 2
* After choosing the "crime" dialogue option when Susie asks Kris to help come up with an excuse, Noelle tells Rudy that she thought the "hanging out in the closet" option where Susie says they're gonna be "touching brooms" meant [[{{Squick}} something else]].
* After choosing the "crime" dialogue option when Susie asks Kris to help come up with an excuse, Noelle tells Rudy that she thought the "hanging out in the closet" option where Susie says they're gonna be "touching brooms" meant [[{{Squick}} something else]].
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* In the interlude between Chapter 1 and Chapter 2, after discovering that they're stuck in an empty void while the rest of TimeStandsStill, they go back to playing the game so that they would be freed. Rudy then remembers the ending with Kris pulling out a knife and hopes they didn't "do anything funny" with it. Heh heh, oh, they did something funny, alright...
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* In the interlude between Chapter 1 and Chapter 2, after discovering that they're stuck in an empty void while the rest of TimeStandsStill, they go back to playing the game so that they would be freed. Rudy then remembers the ending with Kris pulling out a knife and hopes they didn't "do anything funny" with it. Heh heh, oh, they did something funny, alright...alright...
!!Other/Meta
* In a Chapter 2 mockup teaser, we see Noelle in the section where she was crossing the roads with Kris. Her conversation with Rudy seems like a normal one where she told him that the game's events were real. Then she mentions Dess, and Rudy asks "Who's Dess?"
** A later post in the Chapter 1 interlude shows that Axquirix found evidence that he remembers Dess when you examine an angel in Rudy's room in Chapter 1, effectively proving Axquirix wrong.
!!Other/Meta
* In a Chapter 2 mockup teaser, we see Noelle in the section where she was crossing the roads with Kris. Her conversation with Rudy seems like a normal one where she told him that the game's events were real. Then she mentions Dess, and Rudy asks "Who's Dess?"
** A later post in the Chapter 1 interlude shows that Axquirix found evidence that he remembers Dess when you examine an angel in Rudy's room in Chapter 1, effectively proving Axquirix wrong.
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Being an AlternateContinuity where Noelle and Rudy somehow get their hands on a copy of VideoGame/{{Deltarune}}, hilarious reactions are almost a guarantee.
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!!In General
* Rudy's DissonantSerenity reactions to situations while Noelle is going OhCrap
!!Chapter 1 and Interlude
* When it's discovered that Kris is the player character of the game, Noelle doesn't want to invade their privacy since it starts with Kris in bed, with Rudy reassuring her that if Kris (assuming at the time that they made the game) wanted them to play the game, they wouldn't mind. Then Kris walks out of bed, fully clothed. Rudy says something along the lines of "See? Dignity preserved!"
* In the interlude between Chapter 1 and Chapter 2, after discovering that they're stuck in an empty void while the rest of TimeStandsStill, they go back to playing the game so that they would be freed. Rudy then remembers the ending with Kris pulling out a knife and hopes they didn't "do anything funny" with it. Heh heh, oh, they did something funny, alright...
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!!In General
* Rudy's DissonantSerenity reactions to situations while Noelle is going OhCrap
!!Chapter 1 and Interlude
* When it's discovered that Kris is the player character of the game, Noelle doesn't want to invade their privacy since it starts with Kris in bed, with Rudy reassuring her that if Kris (assuming at the time that they made the game) wanted them to play the game, they wouldn't mind. Then Kris walks out of bed, fully clothed. Rudy says something along the lines of "See? Dignity preserved!"
* In the interlude between Chapter 1 and Chapter 2, after discovering that they're stuck in an empty void while the rest of TimeStandsStill, they go back to playing the game so that they would be freed. Rudy then remembers the ending with Kris pulling out a knife and hopes they didn't "do anything funny" with it. Heh heh, oh, they did something funny, alright...
