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** He's intensely jealous of Hitch: "What does he have anyway? Sure, he has a perfect mane, shredded abs, [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers a paid-off mortgage]]!"
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** He's intensely jealous of Hitch: "What does he have anyway? Sure, he has a perfect mane, shredded abs, [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers a paid-off mortgage]]!"mortgage!"
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** The '''one order''' Hitch gave Sprout as he left was ''"...just try not to start a war while I'm gone, okay?"'' The next time Hitch sees Sprout, his deputy is preparing to start a war.
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** The '''one order''' Hitch gave Sprout as he left was ''"...just ''"Just try not to start a war while I'm gone, okay?"'' The next time Hitch sees Sprout, his deputy is preparing to start a war.
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** His VillainSong has him proclaim that ''“it's all gonna work out painlessly... if you follow my orders brainlessly!”''. The punchline here is that most of Maretime Bay ''did'' decided to march lockstep with him after the song.
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** His VillainSong has him proclaim that ''“it's all gonna work out painlessly... if you follow my orders brainlessly!”''. The punchline here is that most of Maretime Bay ''did'' decided decide to march lockstep with him after the song.
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---> '''Sunny''': There's a unicorn... in my house. THIS IS SO COOL! Wait, no, it's bad, very very bad! What have I done?\\
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** During the confrontation with the pegasi and unicorns, Sunny says that nopony has any magic, and a unicorn says "Bing-bong" (as "magic" is one of the words).
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** There's also something hilarious about the fact that Sunny's smile is shown to widen as he screams. You can just tell she's thinking "Yeah, there's a lot of explaining to do..."
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** And [[BrickJoke his return in the very last scene]] before the credits, landing face to face with [[LockedOutOfTheLoop the three pony tribes now getting along, and turning around to see Sunny (who is now an alicorn) and her friends (including a unicorn and two pegasi]]). After taking a [[{{Beat}} second]] to [[DelayedReaction process this]], he screams as the film [[SmashCut cuts]] to the credits.
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** And [[BrickJoke his return in the very last scene]] before the credits, landing face to face with [[LockedOutOfTheLoop the three pony tribes now getting along, and turning around to see Sunny (who is now an alicorn) and her friends (including a unicorn and two pegasi]]).pegasi)]]. After taking a [[{{Beat}} second]] to [[DelayedReaction process this]], he screams as the film [[SmashCut cuts]] to the credits.
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** And [[BrickJoke his return in the very last scene]] before the credits, landing face to face with [[LockedOutOfTheLoop the three pony tribes now getting along, and turning around to see Sunny (who is now an alicorn) and her friends (including a unicorn and two pegasi]]. After taking a [[{{Beat}} second]] to [[DelayedReaction process this]], he screams as the film [[SmashCut cuts]] to the credits.
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** And [[BrickJoke his return in the very last scene]] before the credits, landing face to face with [[LockedOutOfTheLoop the three pony tribes now getting along, and turning around to see Sunny (who is now an alicorn) and her friends (including a unicorn and two pegasi]].pegasi]]). After taking a [[{{Beat}} second]] to [[DelayedReaction process this]], he screams as the film [[SmashCut cuts]] to the credits.
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** And [[BrickJoke his return in the very last scene]] before the credits, landing face to face with [[LockedOutOfTheLoop the three pony tribes now getting along, and turning around to see Sunny (who is now an alicorn)]] and her friends. After taking a [[{{Beat}} second]] to [[DelayedReaction process this]], he screams as the film [[SmashCut cuts]] to the credits.
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** And [[BrickJoke his return in the very last scene]] before the credits, landing face to face with [[LockedOutOfTheLoop the three pony tribes now getting along, and turning around to see Sunny (who is now an alicorn)]] alicorn) and her friends.friends (including a unicorn and two pegasi]]. After taking a [[{{Beat}} second]] to [[DelayedReaction process this]], he screams as the film [[SmashCut cuts]] to the credits.
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** A FreezeFrameBonus of Sprout's desk shows he doesn't even have a proper name plate, just a folded piece of paper with "DEPOOTY" spelled on it.
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** A FreezeFrameBonus of Sprout's desk shows he doesn't even have a proper name plate, just a folded piece of paper with "DEPOOTY" spelled written on it.
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** And [[BrickJoke his return in the very last scene]] before the credits, landing face to face with [[LockedOutOfTheLoop the three ponies tribes now getting along, one of whom is an earth pony as an alicorn]]. He screams as film [[SmashCut cuts]] to the credits.
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** And [[BrickJoke his return in the very last scene]] before the credits, landing face to face with [[LockedOutOfTheLoop the three ponies pony tribes now getting along, one of whom and turning around to see Sunny (who is now an earth pony as an alicorn]]. He alicorn)]] and her friends. After taking a [[{{Beat}} second]] to [[DelayedReaction process this]], he screams as the film [[SmashCut cuts]] to the credits.
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* The RunningGag of Hitch instantly gaining the UndyingLoyalty of every animal that sees him, whether he wants them to or not. Fluttershy would be so proud of him.
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* The RunningGag of Hitch instantly gaining the UndyingLoyalty of every animal that sees him, whether no matter how hard he wants tries to shoo them to or not.off. Birds, crabs, bunnies, Cloudpuff the dog, even a freaking ''rat'' in a back alley of Zephyr Heights. Fluttershy would be so proud of him.
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* Even after being overthrown for deceiving her subjects over the whole 'royals being able to fly' thing, Queen Haven herself is still so obsessed over her image that she stops to pose gorgeously like a model while being perp-walked out of the castle and having her own mug shot taken.
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* Even after being overthrown for deceiving her subjects over the whole 'royals "royals not being able to fly' fly" thing, Queen Haven herself is still so obsessed over her image that she stops to pose gorgeously like a model while being perp-walked out of the castle and having her own mug shot taken.
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* The fact that the giant robot that Sprout has built looks like a giant him. A ''literal'' monument to his ego. And the first thing he did upon getting in and activating it? ''Honking'' it like a glorified truck driver.
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* The fact that the giant robot that Sprout has built looks like a giant version of him. A ''literal'' monument to his ego. And the first thing he did upon getting in and activating it? ''Honking'' it ''Honking its horn'' like a glorified truck driver.
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** The best part is how it's built up. Zoom walks menacingly into the camera with her wings spread, Sunny and Izzy doing nothing to stop her... and then you a cartoony "pop!" and we cut to the elevator, where Izzy is staring at the ball in fascination while Sunny is consulting her journal for her list of pegasus questions.
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** The best part is how it's built up. Zoom walks menacingly into the camera with her wings spread, Sunny and Izzy doing nothing to stop her... and then you we hear a cartoony "pop!" and we cut Cut to the elevator, where Izzy is staring at the ball in fascination while Sunny is consulting her journal for her list of pegasus questions.
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** Izzy at first thinks that they are running because they are playing hide and seek. Even after Sunny explains the situation, she treats the whole thing as a funny game, from smiling to a scared pony, to avoiding the traps by pronking around them like Pinkie Pie would.
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** Izzy at first thinks that they are running because they are playing hide and seek. Even after Sunny explains the situation, she treats the whole thing as a funny game, from smiling to waving at a scared pony, pony (who freaks out and dives into the bay to get away from her!), to avoiding the traps by pronking around them like Pinkie Pie would.
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-->'''Hitch:''' Your son is safe now ma'am.\\
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-->'''Hitch:''' Your son is safe now now, ma'am.\\
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* The bit where the pegasus guards hurl a tennis ball at Alphabittle is already a masterpiece of comedic timing, but what makes it especially amusing is the ActorAllusion. His voice actor, Creator/PhilLaMarr, is perhaps the most famous BoomHeadshot in cinema history -- the titular "Marvin" in IJustShotMarvinInTheFace.
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* The bit where the pegasus guards hurl a tennis ball at Alphabittle and bean him right between the eyes is already a masterpiece of comedic timing, but what makes it especially amusing is the ActorAllusion. His voice actor, Creator/PhilLaMarr, is perhaps the most famous BoomHeadshot in cinema history -- the titular "Marvin" in IJustShotMarvinInTheFace.
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* The bit where the pegasus guards hurl a tennis ball at Alphabittle is already a masterpiece of comedic timing, but what makes it especially amusing is the ActorAllusion. His voice actor, Creator/PhilLaMarr, is perhaps the most famous BoomHeadshot in cinema history -- the titular "Marvin" in IJustShotMarvinInTheFace.
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--->'''Mare:''' I don't have a kid!\\
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--->'''Mare:''' I don't have a kid!\\
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** The '''one order''' Hitch gave Sprout as he left was ''"...just try not to start a war while I'm gone, OK?"'' The next time Hitch sees Sprout, his deputy is preparing to start a war.
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** The '''one order''' Hitch gave Sprout as he left was ''"...just try not to start a war while I'm gone, OK?"'' okay?"'' The next time Hitch sees Sprout, his deputy is preparing to start a war.
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-->'''Mare:''' I don't have a kid!\\
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-->'''Sprout:''' Who are we?!\\
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-->'''Phyllis:''' [[LookBehindYou Oh, look, a flying dog.]] ''[runs away]''
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-->'''Announcer:''' This princess smells....
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* It is even funnier in the Greek version.
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*** It is even funnier in the Greek version.
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-->'''Mare:''' I don't have a kid!\\
-->'''Mare:''' I don't have a kid!\\
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* Izzy’s introduction. At first we see a bunch of ponies running away from a big shadow with tentacle-like hair, only to reveal said shadow belongs to an excited unicorn who greets Sunny.
** While the Earth Ponies are panicking, Sunny is the only who stays chill (albeit incredulous) at the first sight of a unicorn.
** Izzy at first thinks that they are running because they are playing hide and seek. Even after Sunny explains the situation, she treats the whole thing as a funny game, from smiling to a scared pony, to avoiding the traps by pronking around them like Pinkie Pie would.
** While the Earth Ponies are panicking, Sunny is the only who stays chill (albeit incredulous) at the first sight of a unicorn.
** Izzy at first thinks that they are running because they are playing hide and seek. Even after Sunny explains the situation, she treats the whole thing as a funny game, from smiling to a scared pony, to avoiding the traps by pronking around them like Pinkie Pie would.
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* Izzy’s introduction. At first we see a bunch of ponies running away from a big shadow with tentacle-like hair, only to reveal said shadow belongs to an excited unicorn who greets Sunny.
** While the Earth Ponies are panicking, Sunny is the only who stays chill (albeit incredulous) at the first sight of a unicorn.
** Izzy at first thinks that they are running because they are playing hide and seek. Even after Sunny explains the situation, she treats the whole thing as a funny game, from smiling to a scared pony, to avoiding the traps by pronking around them like Pinkie Pie would.
** While the Earth Ponies are panicking, Sunny is the only who stays chill (albeit incredulous) at the first sight of a unicorn.
** Izzy at first thinks that they are running because they are playing hide and seek. Even after Sunny explains the situation, she treats the whole thing as a funny game, from smiling to a scared pony, to avoiding the traps by pronking around them like Pinkie Pie would.
* During "Looking Out For You", Izzy keeps getting distracted by a butterfly, with Sunny forced to rein her in no less than twice before they get on with their journey.
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* After Queen Haven sees that some of her guards found an earth pony and a unicorn outside the city, [[TemptingFate she declares that nopony else should know about this]]. [[SocialMediaBeforeReason That's when Pipp starts a livestream showing the citizens Sunny and Izzy]], who happily wave for the camera while Zoom and Thunder shoot “YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe” looks at Pipp. An irritated Haven grabs Pipp's phone and quickly reassures Zephyr Heights that the "nasty little ponies" have been captured to prevent a mass panic.
* The sheer absurdity of having an ''enormous'' display screen running an arty, pretentious, black-and-white commercial mounted on the outside wall of the castle dungeon. Followed immediately by the revelation that the cells are actually very comfortable.
* During "Looking Out For You", Izzy keeps getting distracted by a butterfly, with Sunny forced to rein her in no less than twice before they get on with their journey.
* The sheer absurdity of having an ''enormous'' display screen running an arty, pretentious, black-and-white commercial mounted on the outside wall of the castle dungeon. Followed immediately by the revelation that the cells are actually very comfortable.
* During "Looking Out For You", Izzy keeps getting distracted by a butterfly, with Sunny forced to rein her in no less than twice before they get on with their journey.
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* Izzy bowing to the royal family's pet dog, whom she initially mistakes as the ruler of the pegasi.
** In the same scene, Izzy (almost literally) zipping her lips and nodding in perfect sync with Sunny when Zipp indicates that they shouldn't address her.
* After Queen Haven sees that some of her guards found an earth pony and a unicorn outside the city, [[TemptingFate she declares that nopony else should know about this]]. [[SocialMediaBeforeReason That's when Pipp starts a livestream showing the citizens Sunny and Izzy]], who happily wave for the camera while Zoom and Thunder shoot “YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe” looks at Pipp. An irritated Haven grabs Pipp's phone and quickly reassures Zephyr Heights that the "nasty little ponies" have been captured to prevent a masspanic.
panic.
* Sunny and Izzy's mugshot when they are arrested in Zephyr Heights. Sunny has an annoyed expression on her face, while Izzy is her usual cheerful self.
* The sheer absurdity of having an ''enormous'' display screen running an arty, pretentious, black-and-white commercial mounted on the outside wall of the castledungeon. dungeon.
** Followed immediately by the revelation that the cells are actually verycomfortable.
* During "Looking Out For You",comfortable, for some reason including such luxuries as a bowl of fruit, mud packs and eye cucumbers, and a ''massage chair''. Izzy keeps getting distracted by lampshades the fact that it isn't "[[BuffySpeak dungeon-y]]" at all.
** The ad itself uses some... interesting wording.
-->'''Announcer:''' This princess smells....
* As Pipp comes down to the dungeon to see Zipp, Sunny, and Izzy, she has her guards play her abutterfly, fanfare... ''on their phones.'' And also has them unrolling a carpet for her to walk down (and rolling it back ''up'' as she leaves).
** When Pipp first shows up at the dungeons, she asks Zipp what she’s doing there since their mom told them to stay away from Sunny and Izzy. [[HypocriticalHumor Zipp then asks why Pipp is there]], with Pipp matter-of-factly replying “for the content” and taking some selfies with Sunnyforced to rein her and Izzy in the background. Izzy then pulls Sunny in a crushing sideway hug while posing for the selfies while Sunny asks Pipp why nopony else is flying.
* Hitch gives himself a fake mustache when infiltrating Zephyr Heights for noless apparent reason other than twice before they get on with their journey.he wanted it.
* The RunningGag of Hitch instantly gaining the UndyingLoyalty of every animal that sees him, whether he wants them to or not. Fluttershy would be so proud of him.
** In the same scene, Izzy (almost literally) zipping her lips and nodding in perfect sync with Sunny when Zipp indicates that they shouldn't address her.
* After Queen Haven sees that some of her guards found an earth pony and a unicorn outside the city, [[TemptingFate she declares that nopony else should know about this]]. [[SocialMediaBeforeReason That's when Pipp starts a livestream showing the citizens Sunny and Izzy]], who happily wave for the camera while Zoom and Thunder shoot “YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe” looks at Pipp. An irritated Haven grabs Pipp's phone and quickly reassures Zephyr Heights that the "nasty little ponies" have been captured to prevent a mass
* Sunny and Izzy's mugshot when they are arrested in Zephyr Heights. Sunny has an annoyed expression on her face, while Izzy is her usual cheerful self.
* The sheer absurdity of having an ''enormous'' display screen running an arty, pretentious, black-and-white commercial mounted on the outside wall of the castle
** Followed immediately by the revelation that the cells are actually very
* During "Looking Out For You",
** The ad itself uses some... interesting wording.
-->'''Announcer:''' This princess smells....
* As Pipp comes down to the dungeon to see Zipp, Sunny, and Izzy, she has her guards play her a
** When Pipp first shows up at the dungeons, she asks Zipp what she’s doing there since their mom told them to stay away from Sunny and Izzy. [[HypocriticalHumor Zipp then asks why Pipp is there]], with Pipp matter-of-factly replying “for the content” and taking some selfies with Sunny
* Hitch gives himself a fake mustache when infiltrating Zephyr Heights for no
* The RunningGag of Hitch instantly gaining the UndyingLoyalty of every animal that sees him, whether he wants them to or not. Fluttershy would be so proud of him.
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** Hitch explaining the spooky stories told to earth ponies about unicorns, including grinding hooves into food... while Izzy presents a box of Grinded Pony Hooves and cheerfully gorges herself on them. [[FreezeFrameBonus According to the box]], Grinded Pony Hooves contain 100% Whole Grain as their first ingredient and are an excellent source of vitamins and fiber.
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** Hitch explaining the spooky stories told to earth ponies about unicorns, including grinding hooves into food... while Izzy presents a box of Grinded "Grinded Pony Hooves Hooves" and cheerfully gorges herself on them. [[FreezeFrameBonus According to the box]], Grinded Pony Hooves contain 100% Whole Grain as their first ingredient and are an excellent source of vitamins and fiber.
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* Sunny and Izzy's mugshot when they are arrested in Zephyr Heights. Sunny has an annoyed expression on her face, while Izzy is her usual cheerful self.
* As Pipp comes down to the dungeon to see Zipp, Sunny, and Izzy, she has her guards play her a fanfare... ''on their phones.'' And also has them unrolling a carpet for her to walk down (and rolling it back ''up'' as she leaves).
** When Pipp first shows up at the dungeons, she asks Zipp what she’s doing there since their mom told them to stay away from Sunny and Izzy. [[HypocriticalHumor Zipp then asks why Pipp is there]], with Pipp matter-of-factly replying “for the content” and taking some selfies with Sunny and Izzy in the background. Izzy then pulls Sunny in a crushing sideway hug while posing for the selfies while Sunny asks Pipp why nopony else is flying.
* Izzy bowing to the royal family pet dog, whom she initially mistakes as the ruler of the pegasi.
** In the same scene, Izzy (almost literally) zipping her lips and nodding in perfect sync with Sunny when Zipp indicates that they shouldn't address her.
* Hitch gives himself a fake mustache when infiltrating Zephyr Heights for no apparent reason other than he wanted it.
* The RunningGag of Hitch instantly gaining the UndyingLoyalty of every animal that sees him, whether he wants them to or not. Fluttershy would be so proud of him.
* As Pipp comes down to the dungeon to see Zipp, Sunny, and Izzy, she has her guards play her a fanfare... ''on their phones.'' And also has them unrolling a carpet for her to walk down (and rolling it back ''up'' as she leaves).
** When Pipp first shows up at the dungeons, she asks Zipp what she’s doing there since their mom told them to stay away from Sunny and Izzy. [[HypocriticalHumor Zipp then asks why Pipp is there]], with Pipp matter-of-factly replying “for the content” and taking some selfies with Sunny and Izzy in the background. Izzy then pulls Sunny in a crushing sideway hug while posing for the selfies while Sunny asks Pipp why nopony else is flying.
* Izzy bowing to the royal family pet dog, whom she initially mistakes as the ruler of the pegasi.
** In the same scene, Izzy (almost literally) zipping her lips and nodding in perfect sync with Sunny when Zipp indicates that they shouldn't address her.
* Hitch gives himself a fake mustache when infiltrating Zephyr Heights for no apparent reason other than he wanted it.
* The RunningGag of Hitch instantly gaining the UndyingLoyalty of every animal that sees him, whether he wants them to or not. Fluttershy would be so proud of him.
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* The fact that the giant robot that Sprout has built looks like a giant him. A literal monument to his ego. And the first thing he did upon getting in and activating it? ''Honking'' it like a glorified truck driver.
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* The fact that the giant robot that Sprout has built looks like a giant him. A literal ''literal'' monument to his ego. And the first thing he did upon getting in and activating it? ''Honking'' it like a glorified truck driver.
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-->'''Sprout:''' What Who are we?!\\
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** The AngryMobSong, while definitely Sprout's VillainSong, and treated by the narrative as a sign that the DarkestHour is upon us, is also plain ridiculous because Sprout has the other ponies sing increasingly stupid lyrics, and at one point it turns nonsensical and just becomes about finding rhymes for the word "mob."
-->'''Sprout:''' What are we?!\\
'''Ponies:''' We're an angry mob!\\
'''Sprout:''' What are we?!\\
'''Ponies:''' We're an angry mob!\\
'''Sprout:''' Look at that corn!\\
'''Ponies:''' It's on the cob!\\
'''Sprout:''' Look at that guy!\\
'''Single Pony:''' Uh, my name's Rob?
-->'''Sprout:''' What are we?!\\
'''Ponies:''' We're an angry mob!\\
'''Sprout:''' What are we?!\\
'''Ponies:''' We're an angry mob!\\
'''Sprout:''' Look at that corn!\\
'''Ponies:''' It's on the cob!\\
'''Sprout:''' Look at that guy!\\
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** And [[BrickJoke his return in the very last scene]] before the credits, landing face to face with [[LockedOutOfTheLoop an earth pony, two pegasi, a unicorn, and an earth pony-turned-alicorn]]. He screams as film [[SmashCut cuts]] to the credits.
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** And [[BrickJoke his return in the very last scene]] before the credits, landing face to face with [[LockedOutOfTheLoop the three ponies tribes now getting along, one of whom is an earth pony, two pegasi, a unicorn, and pony as an earth pony-turned-alicorn]].alicorn]]. He screams as film [[SmashCut cuts]] to the credits.
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** His VillainSong has him proclaim that ''“everything will work out painlessly... if you follow my orders brainlessly!”''. The punchline here is that most of Maretime Bay ''did'' decided to march lockstep with him after the song.
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** His VillainSong has him proclaim that ''“everything will ''“it's all gonna work out painlessly... if you follow my orders brainlessly!”''. The punchline here is that most of Maretime Bay ''did'' decided to march lockstep with him after the song.
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** The one order Hitch gave Sprout as he left was ''"...just try not to start a war while I'm gone, OK."'' The next time Hitch sees Sprout, his deputy is preparing to start a war.
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** The one order '''one order''' Hitch gave Sprout as he left was ''"...just try not to start a war while I'm gone, OK."'' OK?"'' The next time Hitch sees Sprout, his deputy is preparing to start a war.