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* Weiss's alias at Beacon is Wren, pronounced the same way as Ren. HilarityEnsues when the two start running in the same social circles.
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->'''Blake''': [[HorrifyingTheHorror What... what are you?]]\\
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'''Glynda''' And her ''inappropriate language''!\\language''!
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Despite all the dark elements of Grimm Academy and their purpose of subverting human civilization on Remnant, this fic does have it's moments where you can't help but chuckle.
* Chapter 23: [[NightmareFetishist Blake]] meets [[ThePollyanna Sun]]. No matter what Blake does to get under Sun's skin, he unknowingly denies her any satisfaction, leaving Blake horrified at Sun's demeanor. Jaune takes this moment to gloat over Blake, especially for all the trouble she caused him.
* Chapter 23: [[NightmareFetishist Blake]] meets [[ThePollyanna Sun]]. No matter what Blake does to get under Sun's skin, he unknowingly denies her any satisfaction, leaving Blake horrified at Sun's demeanor. Jaune takes this moment to gloat over Blake, especially for all the trouble she caused him.
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Despite all the dark elements of Grimm Academy and their purpose of subverting human civilization on Remnant, this fic does have it's its fair share of moments where you can't help but chuckle.
* Cinder's horror at realizing she needs to give Weiss TheTalk. She promptly decides to pass the hot potato down the totem pole and orders Emerald and Mercury to do it.
* Weiss' PregnancyScare. Due to her MissConception status, Weiss thinks she's pregnant with Jaune's child and starts to ''build a nest'' while waiting for the [[DeliveryStork Delivery Snipe]] to arrive (MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext) and behaves fiercely protective of it. Jaune ''very'' awkwardly has to explain her that she can't get pregnant from oral sex.
* Chapter 23: [[NightmareFetishist Blake]] meets [[ThePollyanna Sun]]. No matter what Blake does to get under Sun's skin, he unknowingly denies her any satisfaction, leaving Blake horrified at Sun's demeanor. Jaune takes this moment to gloat over Blake, especially for all the trouble she caused him.
* Cinder's horror at realizing she needs to give Weiss TheTalk. She promptly decides to pass the hot potato down the totem pole and orders Emerald and Mercury to do it.
* Weiss' PregnancyScare. Due to her MissConception status, Weiss thinks she's pregnant with Jaune's child and starts to ''build a nest'' while waiting for the [[DeliveryStork Delivery Snipe]] to arrive (MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext) and behaves fiercely protective of it. Jaune ''very'' awkwardly has to explain her that she can't get pregnant from oral sex.
* Chapter 23: [[NightmareFetishist Blake]] meets [[ThePollyanna Sun]]. No matter what Blake does to get under Sun's skin, he unknowingly denies her any satisfaction, leaving Blake horrified at Sun's demeanor.
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'''Sun''': [[SincerityMode I'm Sun. Faunus, huntsman, and all-around nice guy at your service.]]
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'''Sun''': [[SincerityMode I'm Sun. Faunus, huntsman, and all-around nice guy at your service.]]]]
** Jaune trying to explain away Blake's behavior:
--->'''Sun:''' I... kinda get the feeling she doesn't like me.\\
'''Jaune:''' Oh don't read too much into that. She's just playing hard to get. She's, uh, really, really {{goth}}.\\
'''Blake:''' Jaune, I will hollow out your skull and use it as a drinking chalice to wash down your entrails.\\
'''Jaune:''' ''[forced laugh]'' You see? Look at that terrible, dark poetry. Goth as goth can be.
** Jaune takes this moment to gloat over Blake at finding a way to get back at her for all the trouble she caused him. Alas it was not to last:
--->'''Blake:''' ''[snarls]'' I will make you suffer for this.\\
'''Jaune:''' Not so funny when you're on the receiving end, is it?\\
'''Blake:''' ''[face twitches in annoyance until shifting into something more ineffable]'' My innocent little fly has started spinning webs of his own. I find this... strangely arousing.\\
'''Jaune:''' ''[sighs]'' Of course you do.
* KnowNothingKnowItAll LovableSexManiac Weiss meets straitlaced SternTeacher Glynda Goodwitch. HilarityEnsues like you wouldn't believe it.
** Weiss goes to Beacon's famous library and very politely asks Glynda where their "pornography documentaries" are shelved. The teacher goes into TranquilFury and tells her to follow her to her office, making Weiss wonder aloud if that's where the porn is stored or whether they're "living one in this very moment", naturally making Glynda even angrier.
** Glynda completely fails to make Weiss understand she did anything wrong and decides to pass the problem to Ozpin. Weiss again misreads the situation and drops this gem of a line:
--->'''Weiss:''' I'm flattered you wish to engage in fornication with me, Headmaster Ozpin. However, I already have a m- partner. I have not been a naughty student who needs to be spanked, nor do I wish to exchange a favor with you so that I may improve my grades.
** The above makes Glynda so furious that she instinctively goes for her weapon. Weiss notices the teacher's hand on her riding crop and ''again'' applies porn logic to it:
--->'''Weiss:''' Or perhaps it is Miss Goodwitch here who intends to punish me while I am busy servicing you? Regardless, I am simply not interested. Jaune is my one and only partner, and though you may possess experience which would teach me more on the subject of intimacy, I must ask that this scenario end before it goes any further.
** This exchange:
--->'''Glynda:''' ''[to Ozpin]'' For now, however, what do you intend to do about this girl and her mouth?\\
'''Weiss:''' My mouth is for Jaune only!\\
'''Glynda''' And her ''inappropriate language''!\\
** Glynda's eyes almost pop out of their orbits when Weiss casually [[CallBack mentions]] her PregnancyScare.
** Weiss' mix of impeccable manners and utterly shameless LovableSexManiac talk actually ''gets her out of trouble'' in a hilariously unwitting example of RefugeInAudacity. Glynda is just too angry and tired to keep dealing with Weiss' antics and Ozpin wisely decides against interacting too much with the girl and instead just strongly advices her to keep private matters private. Weiss of course has no idea of this and keeps pushing her luck:
--->'''Weiss:''' Speaking of which, does Beacon Academy happen to possess beds large enough for three people?\\
'''Glynda:''' ''[gets a EyeTwitch at the [[AThreesomeIsHot obvious implication]] of just why Weiss would ask that]''\\
'''Ozpin:''' I'm afraid not. You must make do with the beds that the school provides.\\
'''Weiss:''' ''[sighs in disappointment]'' Oh well. It simply means tighter cuddling, I suppose.
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** Jaune trying to explain away Blake's behavior:
--->'''Sun:''' I... kinda get the feeling she doesn't like me.\\
'''Jaune:''' Oh don't read too much into that. She's just playing hard to get. She's, uh, really, really {{goth}}.\\
'''Blake:''' Jaune, I will hollow out your skull and use it as a drinking chalice to wash down your entrails.\\
'''Jaune:''' ''[forced laugh]'' You see? Look at that terrible, dark poetry. Goth as goth can be.
** Jaune takes this moment to gloat over Blake at finding a way to get back at her for all the trouble she caused him. Alas it was not to last:
--->'''Blake:''' ''[snarls]'' I will make you suffer for this.\\
'''Jaune:''' Not so funny when you're on the receiving end, is it?\\
'''Blake:''' ''[face twitches in annoyance until shifting into something more ineffable]'' My innocent little fly has started spinning webs of his own. I find this... strangely arousing.\\
'''Jaune:''' ''[sighs]'' Of course you do.
* KnowNothingKnowItAll LovableSexManiac Weiss meets straitlaced SternTeacher Glynda Goodwitch. HilarityEnsues like you wouldn't believe it.
** Weiss goes to Beacon's famous library and very politely asks Glynda where their "pornography documentaries" are shelved. The teacher goes into TranquilFury and tells her to follow her to her office, making Weiss wonder aloud if that's where the porn is stored or whether they're "living one in this very moment", naturally making Glynda even angrier.
** Glynda completely fails to make Weiss understand she did anything wrong and decides to pass the problem to Ozpin. Weiss again misreads the situation and drops this gem of a line:
--->'''Weiss:''' I'm flattered you wish to engage in fornication with me, Headmaster Ozpin. However, I already have a m- partner. I have not been a naughty student who needs to be spanked, nor do I wish to exchange a favor with you so that I may improve my grades.
** The above makes Glynda so furious that she instinctively goes for her weapon. Weiss notices the teacher's hand on her riding crop and ''again'' applies porn logic to it:
--->'''Weiss:''' Or perhaps it is Miss Goodwitch here who intends to punish me while I am busy servicing you? Regardless, I am simply not interested. Jaune is my one and only partner, and though you may possess experience which would teach me more on the subject of intimacy, I must ask that this scenario end before it goes any further.
** This exchange:
--->'''Glynda:''' ''[to Ozpin]'' For now, however, what do you intend to do about this girl and her mouth?\\
'''Weiss:''' My mouth is for Jaune only!\\
'''Glynda''' And her ''inappropriate language''!\\
** Glynda's eyes almost pop out of their orbits when Weiss casually [[CallBack mentions]] her PregnancyScare.
** Weiss' mix of impeccable manners and utterly shameless LovableSexManiac talk actually ''gets her out of trouble'' in a hilariously unwitting example of RefugeInAudacity. Glynda is just too angry and tired to keep dealing with Weiss' antics and Ozpin wisely decides against interacting too much with the girl and instead just strongly advices her to keep private matters private. Weiss of course has no idea of this and keeps pushing her luck:
--->'''Weiss:''' Speaking of which, does Beacon Academy happen to possess beds large enough for three people?\\
'''Glynda:''' ''[gets a EyeTwitch at the [[AThreesomeIsHot obvious implication]] of just why Weiss would ask that]''\\
'''Ozpin:''' I'm afraid not. You must make do with the beds that the school provides.\\
'''Weiss:''' ''[sighs in disappointment]'' Oh well. It simply means tighter cuddling, I suppose.
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* Chapter 23: [[NightmareFetishist Blake]] meets [[ThePollyana Sun]]. No matter what Blake does to get under Sun's skin, he unknowingly denies her any satisfaction, leaving Blake horrified at Sun's demeanor. Jaune takes this moment to gloat over Blake, especially for all the trouble she caused him.
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* Chapter 23: [[NightmareFetishist Blake]] meets [[ThePollyana [[ThePollyanna Sun]]. No matter what Blake does to get under Sun's skin, he unknowingly denies her any satisfaction, leaving Blake horrified at Sun's demeanor. Jaune takes this moment to gloat over Blake, especially for all the trouble she caused him.him.
->'''Blake''': [[HorrifyingTheHorror What... what are you?]]\\
'''Sun'': [[SincerityMode I'm Sun. Faunus, huntsman, and all-around nice guy at your service.]]
->'''Blake''': [[HorrifyingTheHorror What... what are you?]]\\
'''Sun'': [[SincerityMode I'm Sun. Faunus, huntsman, and all-around nice guy at your service.]]
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Despite all the dark elements of Grimm Academy and their purpose of subverting human civilization on Remnant, this fic does have it's moments where you can't help but chuckle.chuckle.
*Chapter 23: [[NightmareFetishist Blake]] meets [[ThePollyana Sun]]. No matter what Blake does to get under Sun's skin, he unknowingly denies her any satisfaction, leaving Blake horrified at Sun's demeanor. Jaune takes this moment to gloat over Blake, especially for all the trouble she caused him.
*Chapter 23: [[NightmareFetishist Blake]] meets [[ThePollyana Sun]]. No matter what Blake does to get under Sun's skin, he unknowingly denies her any satisfaction, leaving Blake horrified at Sun's demeanor. Jaune takes this moment to gloat over Blake, especially for all the trouble she caused him.
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