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** From what we hear of Jeremiah's folk music song, "The Amulet of the Weeping Maze", it appears to be [[StylisticSuck hilariously godawful.]] Bonus points go to the line [[{{Narcissist}} declaring himself]] a "righteous man whose heart was full of love." [[SarcasmMode Sure, absolutely.]]
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** From what we hear of Jeremiah's folk music song, "The Amulet of the Weeping Maze", it appears to be [[StylisticSuck hilariously godawful.]] Bonus points go to the line [[{{Narcissist}} declaring himself]] a "righteous "[[BlatantLies righteous man whose heart was full of love.love]]." [[SarcasmMode Sure, absolutely.]]
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-->'''Jeremiah:''' Oh ... hi.
* Jeremiah realizing he's cornered, and being reduced to a whimpering mess. It's satisfying to watch him deflate, but he makes an ... unexpected offer to Red:
* Jeremiah realizing he's cornered, and being reduced to a whimpering mess. It's satisfying to watch him deflate, but he makes an ... unexpected offer to Red:
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-->'''Jeremiah:''' Oh ... hi.
[[MoodWhiplash Oh... hi]].
* Jeremiah realizing he's cornered, and being reduced to a whimpering mess. It's satisfying to watch him deflate, but he makesan ...an... unexpected offer to Red:
* Jeremiah realizing he's cornered, and being reduced to a whimpering mess. It's satisfying to watch him deflate, but he makes
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** Then there's the one he made to her later, right before snapping her neck. The sheer hamminess with which it's delivered is very much classic Creator/NicolasCage fare, and additionally, strongly showcases Red's SkewedPriorities (although considering his shirt was also the last thing Mandy wore it's also actually kinda sad).
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** Then there's the one he made to her later, right before snapping her neck. The sheer hamminess with which it's delivered is very much classic Creator/NicolasCage fare, and additionally, strongly showcases Red's SkewedPriorities (although considering his shirt was also the last thing Mandy wore, and was also the same shirt she wore when they first met, it's also actually kinda sad).
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** Then there's the one he made to Fuck Pig later, right before slicing open his neck (With a box cutter, no less). The sheer hamminess with which it's delivered is very much classic Creator/NicolasCage fare, and additionally, strongly showcases Red's SkewedPriorities (although considering his shirt was also the last thing Mandy wore it's also actually kinda sad).
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** Then there's the one he made to Fuck Pig her later, right before slicing open his neck (With a box cutter, no less).snapping her neck. The sheer hamminess with which it's delivered is very much classic Creator/NicolasCage fare, and additionally, strongly showcases Red's SkewedPriorities (although considering his shirt was also the last thing Mandy wore it's also actually kinda sad).
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** Then there's the one he made to Fuck Pig later, right before snapping his neck. The sheer hamminess with which it's delivered is very much classic Creator/NicolasCage fare, and additionally, strongly showcases Red's SkewedPriorities (although considering his shirt was also the last thing Mandy wore it's also actually kinda sad).
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** Then there's the one he made to Fuck Pig later, right before snapping slicing open his neck.neck (With a box cutter, no less). The sheer hamminess with which it's delivered is very much classic Creator/NicolasCage fare, and additionally, strongly showcases Red's SkewedPriorities (although considering his shirt was also the last thing Mandy wore it's also actually kinda sad).
