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Dewicked trope
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* After Jolyne joins the group, Jonathan realizes [[BareYourMidriff how much skin she's showing]], and looks her in the eye out of respect.
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* After Jolyne joins the group, Jonathan realizes [[BareYourMidriff how much skin she's showing]], showing, and looks her in the eye out of respect.
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* During the scene where George talks about how worried he was about Jonathan, he takes a moment to comment on his son's... ''[[BareYourMidriff questionable]]'' fashion sense:
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* During the scene where George talks about how worried he was about Jonathan, he takes a moment to comment on his son's... ''[[BareYourMidriff questionable]]'' ''questionable'' fashion sense:
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* After a practice battle, Jonathan simply picks up Joesph and Caesar like kittens and carries them away.
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* After a practice battle, Jonathan simply picks up Joesph Joseph and Caesar like kittens and carries them away.
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--> '''Jonathan:''' ''(blinks, then touches his cheek)'' I assume that's a normal thing to do in this time?"
--> '''Jotaro:''' You mean the kiss? Yeah, why?"
--> '''Jotaro:''' You mean the kiss? Yeah, why?"
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--> '''Jonathan:''' ''(blinks, then touches his cheek)'' I assume that's a normal thing to do in this time?"
time?
--> '''Jotaro:''' You mean the kiss? Yeah,why?"why?
--> '''Jotaro:''' You mean the kiss? Yeah,
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Adult Fear was cut
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* During the scene where George talks about how [[AdultFear worried he was]] about Jonathan, he takes a moment to comment on his son's... ''[[BareYourMidriff questionable]]'' fashion sense:
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* During the scene where George talks about how [[AdultFear worried he was]] was about Jonathan, he takes a moment to comment on his son's... ''[[BareYourMidriff questionable]]'' fashion sense:
