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** And just before she says this, Adam seems to genuinely ask her "So what did you do this weekend?", like their meeting was [[GoKartingWithBowser just a casual casual catch-up between the Princess of Hell, and the General of the Exorcists.]]
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** And just before she says this, Adam seems to genuinely ask her "So what did you do this weekend?", like their meeting was [[GoKartingWithBowser just a casual casual catch-up between the Princess of Hell, and the General of the Exorcists.]]
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** While the chorus of the song is quite moving and inspirational, the actual verses are modified old-timey WW1/2 recruitment drive slogans, complete with period-appropriate musical accompaniment.
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-->'''Adam:''' Uh, we don't ''have'' "hard days"? It's fuckin' ''Heaven,'' bitch.
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-->'''Adam:''' Uh, we don't ''have'' "hard days"? days?" It's fuckin' ''Heaven,'' bitch.
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Charlie sounds excited here.
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-->'''Charlie:''' ''Fuck, yes.'' ''[after realizing what she said]'' I mean, thank you.
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-->'''Charlie:''' ''Fuck, yes.'' yes!'' ''[after realizing what she said]'' I mean, thank you.
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Adam's "hard days" comment sounds more like it could end with a question mark, and the word "bitch" was missing.
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-->'''Adam:''' Uh, we don't ''have'' "hard days". It's fuckin' ''Heaven.''
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-->'''Adam:''' Uh, we don't ''have'' "hard days". days"? It's fuckin' ''Heaven.''''Heaven,'' bitch.
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** He tries to offer her a drink, but loses his nerve and offers drinks to the whole bar. Twice.
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** He tries to offer her a drink, but loses his nerve and offers drinks to the whole bar. Twice.
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** Twice.
--->'''Pentious:''' Cherri, I bought you a shot.\\
(Cherri looks at him unamusingly)\\
'''Pentious:''' Uh, because I bought ''everyone another shot!'' Hooray, ha-ha-ha!\\
'''Patrons:''' Yeah, more drinks! I love alcohol!
--->'''Pentious:''' Cherri, I bought you a shot.\\
(Cherri looks at him unamusingly)\\
'''Pentious:''' Uh, because I bought ''everyone another shot!'' Hooray, ha-ha-ha!\\
'''Patrons:''' Yeah, more drinks! I love alcohol!
