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* Chapter 23: Hermione is about to cast a warming charm on Ginny at Platform 9 3/4, but is told off for using magic outside of school by Ron. Harry is weirded out by Ron being the one to tell Hermione to follow the rules.
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* Chapter 23: Hermione is about to cast a warming charm on Ginny at Platform 9 3/4, 9¾, but is told off for using magic outside of school by Ron. Harry is weirded out by Ron being the one to tell Hermione to follow the rules.
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* From Chapter 27, "This ponce is Voldemort?" What makes this even more hilarious is that it's Ron who says it. Then the exchange after that:
-->'''Harry:''' This is a memory of him when he was Head Boy. At least he's somewhat presentable. Later, he looked like something that escaped from one of Snape's preserving jars.\\
'''Neville:''' That's pretty bad, Harry.\\
-->'''Harry:''' This is a memory of him when he was Head Boy. At least he's somewhat presentable. Later, he looked like something that escaped from one of Snape's preserving jars.\\
'''Neville:''' That's pretty bad, Harry.\\
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* From Chapter 27, 27:
** Despite all the changes, Lockhart is still hit by his own Memory Charm. Harry's reaction is to decide that "Fate can have him."
** Once Ron figures out who Tom Riddle is, his first reaction is to incredulously ask "This ponce isVoldemort?" What makes this even more hilarious is Voldemort?"
** Harry says thatit's Ron who says it. Then the exchange after that:
-->'''Harry:''' This is amemory of him Tom Riddle actually looks presentable, as opposed to later in life when he was Head Boy. At least he's somewhat presentable. Later, he looked "looked like something that escaped from one of Snape's preserving jars.\\
'''Neville:'''"
-->'''Neville:''' That's pretty bad, Harry.\\
** Despite all the changes, Lockhart is still hit by his own Memory Charm. Harry's reaction is to decide that "Fate can have him."
** Once Ron figures out who Tom Riddle is, his first reaction is to incredulously ask "This ponce is
** Harry says that
-->'''Harry:''' This is a
'''Neville:'''
-->'''Neville:''' That's pretty bad, Harry.\\
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** Harry uses his prototype flash-bang spell to great effect in fighting off Slytherins who don't want him playing in the next Quidditch match. it isn't until they're all knocked out that Harry realizes the spell also broke several of the windows facing the courtyard the brawl took place in.
--->'''Harry:''' [[ThisIsGonnaSuck Bugger.]]
--->'''Harry:''' [[ThisIsGonnaSuck Bugger.]]
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** Harry announces his success in his soul merger to Hedwig... only to get no response, as he hasn't actually named his owl yet in the new timeline.
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** Harry announces his success in his successful soul merger to Hedwig... only to get no response, as he hasn't actually named his owl yet in the new timeline.
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* Chapter 6: After receiving initialed sweaters as Christmas presents, Fred and George take to nicknaming themselves Gred and Forge. The narration follows suit and occasionally refers to them by the nicknames afterwards.
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* Chapter 1:
** Harry announces his success in his soul merger to Hedwig... only to get no response, as he hasn't actually named his owl yet in the new timeline.
** Harry reintroduces himself (from his perspective) to Fred and George Weasley by tricking them into thinking his Hogwarts letter warned him about them specifically.
** The canon joke about the twins sending Ginny a Hogwarts toilet seat is escalated here by Fred claiming they'll get Harry to sign it.
* Chapter 2: This time around, Snape grilling Harry on potion ingredients includes him asking what ginger root's used for. Harry annoys him by mentioning that in addition to its magical uses, it tastes good in stir-fry.
* Chapter 3: Apparently, the reason Neville's toad kept escaping was because he was hungry.
* Chapter 5: Harry thinks that attributing his having a supposedly forbidden broomstick to Malfoy's actions when the latter complains about it is just as great a response as the first time he used it.
** Harry announces his success in his soul merger to Hedwig... only to get no response, as he hasn't actually named his owl yet in the new timeline.
** Harry reintroduces himself (from his perspective) to Fred and George Weasley by tricking them into thinking his Hogwarts letter warned him about them specifically.
** The canon joke about the twins sending Ginny a Hogwarts toilet seat is escalated here by Fred claiming they'll get Harry to sign it.
* Chapter 2: This time around, Snape grilling Harry on potion ingredients includes him asking what ginger root's used for. Harry annoys him by mentioning that in addition to its magical uses, it tastes good in stir-fry.
* Chapter 3: Apparently, the reason Neville's toad kept escaping was because he was hungry.
* Chapter 5: Harry thinks that attributing his having a supposedly forbidden broomstick to Malfoy's actions when the latter complains about it is just as great a response as the first time he used it.
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* Meta: While somewhat infuriating, the reason the story was removed is rather funny. Specifically, it was removed for containing song lyrics. Lyrics written for the story.
** The lyrics in question were when Harry sings "Weasley is our King" for Ron.
** The lyrics in question were when Harry sings "Weasley is our King" for Ron.
