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** This being an observation from Kobold, whose home universe has several different species, one of which is named Elves in a conincidence. As she's talking to a child Feanaro who has a raging inferiority complex and blames his existence for his mother's death, she is, of course, broadly correct.
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** This being an observation from Kobold, whose home universe has several different species, one of is based on ''VideoGame/DwarfFortress'' which is named Elves in a conincidence.has elves with notoriously BlueAndOrangeMorality. As she's talking to a child Feanaro who has a raging inferiority complex and blames his existence for his mother's death, she is, of course, broadly correct.
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* A plant fairy Bell around four years old is deposited in Amenta and adopted by that world's instances of Maitimo and Findekáno. Upon finding out she's an alien, they are understandably concerned:
--> '''Kan (Findekáno):''' She's our daughter.\\
--> '''Kan (Findekáno):''' She's our daughter.\\
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* A plant fairy Bell around four years old is deposited in Amenta and adopted by that world's instances of Maitimo and Findekáno. Upon finding out she's an alien, they are understandably concerned:
--> '''Kan (Findekáno):''' She's our daughter.\\
--> '''Kan (Findekáno):''' She's our daughter.\\
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'''Kan (Findekáno):''' Well, no one said parenting was easy.
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'''Kan (Findekáno):''' Well, no one said parenting was easy.easy.
** They continue to treat her like a normal blue baby, and give her books like ''Baby's First Tax Policy Guide''. Predictably, she is very happy.
** They continue to treat her like a normal blue baby, and give her books like ''Baby's First Tax Policy Guide''. Predictably, she is very happy.
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* A plant fairy Bell around four years old is deposited in Amenta and adopted by that world's instances of Maitimo and Findekáno. Upon finding out she's an alien, they are understandably concerned:
--> '''Kan (Findekáno):''' She's our daughter.\\
'''Aitim (Maitimo):''' Of course. She just might be a thousand-year-old alien spy daughter.\\
'''Kan (Findekáno):''' Well, no one said parenting was easy.
--> '''Kan (Findekáno):''' She's our daughter.\\
'''Aitim (Maitimo):''' Of course. She just might be a thousand-year-old alien spy daughter.\\
'''Kan (Findekáno):''' Well, no one said parenting was easy.
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* One of the less-worldly templates (an Anise) encounters porn for the first time in 'right to the heart'. Then she walk in on her host while he's naked, and the shock spurs her to blurt out a question as to the book's accuracy.
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* One of the less-worldly templates (an Anise) instances of an Anise encounters porn for the first time in 'right to the heart'. Then she walk in on her host while he's naked, and the shock spurs her to blurt out a question as to the book's accuracy.
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* One of the less-worldly Bells encounters porn for the first time in 'right to the heart'. Then she walk in on her host while he's naked, and the shock spurs her to blurt out a question as to the book's accuracy.
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* One of the less-worldly Bells templates (an Anise) encounters porn for the first time in 'right to the heart'. Then she walk in on her host while he's naked, and the shock spurs her to blurt out a question as to the book's accuracy.
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* One of the less-worldly Bells encounters porn for the first time in 'right to the heart'. Then she walk in on her host while he's naked, and the shock spurs her to blurt out a question as to the book's accuracy.
--> She hides her face with her hands and decides that the fact that she hasn't died of embarrassment is weak evidence in favor of the Valley having made her immortal.
--> She hides her face with her hands and decides that the fact that she hasn't died of embarrassment is weak evidence in favor of the Valley having made her immortal.
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* The sandbox where Edariel meets Shell Bell in Milliways, and every interaction between them is ''painfully'' cute. Yet they continue to not get together, even after Shell Bell literally leaves her world behind to move to his. Zevros' reactions start with [[FacePalm facepalming]], graduate up to requesting alcohol, and over the course of a a few months eventually mutate into luring the two out onto a balcony, locking the doors, going up onto the roof and ''flinging rose petals down on them''. When Edariel asks him what the hell he's doing, Zevros has to resort to screaming and threatening his brother with castration 'to have some mercy on that poor neglected dick of yours!' before Edariel gives in and kisses Shell Bell.
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* The sandbox where Edariel meets Shell Bell in Milliways, and every interaction between them is ''painfully'' cute. Yet they continue to not get together, even after Shell Bell literally leaves her world behind to move to his. Zevros' reactions start with [[FacePalm facepalming]], graduate up to requesting alcohol, and over the course of a a few months eventually mutate into luring the two out onto a balcony, locking the doors, going up onto the roof and ''flinging rose petals down on them''. When Edariel asks him what the hell he's doing, Zevros has to resort to screaming and threatening his brother with castration 'to have some mercy on that poor neglected dick of yours!' before Edariel gives in and kisses agrees to kiss Shell Bell.Bell. Zevros then dumps the rest of the rose petals on Edariel before giving the two some privacy.
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* The sandbox where Edariel meets Shell Bell in Milliways, and every interaction between them is ''painfully'' cute. Yet they continue to not get together, even after Shell Bell literally leaves her world behind to move to his. Zevros' reactions start with [[FacePalm facepalming]], graduate up to requesting alcohol, and over the course of a a few months eventually mutate into luring the two out onto a balcony, locking the doors, going up onto the roof and ''flinging rose petals down on them''. When Edariel asks him what the hell he's doing, Zevros has to resort screaming and threatening his brother with castration 'to have some mercy on that poor neglected dick of yours!' before Edariel gives in and kisses Shell Bell.
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* The sandbox where Edariel meets Shell Bell in Milliways, and every interaction between them is ''painfully'' cute. Yet they continue to not get together, even after Shell Bell literally leaves her world behind to move to his. Zevros' reactions start with [[FacePalm facepalming]], graduate up to requesting alcohol, and over the course of a a few months eventually mutate into luring the two out onto a balcony, locking the doors, going up onto the roof and ''flinging rose petals down on them''. When Edariel asks him what the hell he's doing, Zevros has to resort to screaming and threatening his brother with castration 'to have some mercy on that poor neglected dick of yours!' before Edariel gives in and kisses Shell Bell.
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* The sandbox where Edariel meets Shell Bell in Milliways, and every interaction between them is ''painfully'' cute. Yet they continue to not get together, even after Shell Bell literally leaves her world behind to move to his. Zevros' reactions start with [[FacePalm facepalming]], graduate up to requesting alcohol, and over the course of a a few months eventually mutate into luring the two out onto a balcony, locking the doors, going up onto the roof and ''flinging rose petals down on them''. When Edariel asks him what the hell he's doing, Zevros literally has to scream and threaten his brother with castration 'to have some mercy on that poor neglected dick of yours!' before Edariel gives in and kisses Shell Bell.
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* The sandbox where Edariel meets Shell Bell in Milliways, and every interaction between them is ''painfully'' cute. Yet they continue to not get together, even after Shell Bell literally leaves her world behind to move to his. Zevros' reactions start with [[FacePalm facepalming]], graduate up to requesting alcohol, and over the course of a a few months eventually mutate into luring the two out onto a balcony, locking the doors, going up onto the roof and ''flinging rose petals down on them''. When Edariel asks him what the hell he's doing, Zevros literally has to scream resort screaming and threaten threatening his brother with castration 'to have some mercy on that poor neglected dick of yours!' before Edariel gives in and kisses Shell Bell.
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* The sandbox where Edariel meets Shell Bell in Milliways, and every interaction between them is ''painfully'' cute. Yet they continue to not get together. Zevros' reactions start with [[FacePalm facepalming]], graduate up to requesting alcohol, and eventually mutate into luring the two out onto a balcony, locking the doors, going up onto the roof and ''flinging rose petals down on them''. When Edariel asks him what the hell he's doing, Zevros literally has to scream and threaten his brother with castration 'to have some mercy on that poor neglected dick of yours!' before Edariel gives in and kisses Shell Bell.
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* The sandbox where Edariel meets Shell Bell in Milliways, and every interaction between them is ''painfully'' cute. Yet they continue to not get together. together, even after Shell Bell literally leaves her world behind to move to his. Zevros' reactions start with [[FacePalm facepalming]], graduate up to requesting alcohol, and over the course of a a few months eventually mutate into luring the two out onto a balcony, locking the doors, going up onto the roof and ''flinging rose petals down on them''. When Edariel asks him what the hell he's doing, Zevros literally has to scream and threaten his brother with castration 'to have some mercy on that poor neglected dick of yours!' before Edariel gives in and kisses Shell Bell.
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* The sandbox where Edariel meets Shell Bell in Milliways, and every interaction between them is ''painfully'' cute. Yet they continue to not get together. Zevros' reactions start with [[FacePalm facepalming]], graduate up to requesting alcohol, and eventually mutate into luring the two out onto a balcony, locking the doors, going up onto the roof and ''flinging rose petals down on them''. When Edariel asks him what the hell he's doing, Zevros literally has to scream and threaten his brother with castration 'to have some mercy on that poor neglected dick of yours!' before Edariel gives in and kisses Shell Bell.
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* Maitimo can usually spin his and Findekáno's relationship into nonexistence whenever somebody asks about it, but Beka is just so obliviously, bluntly confident about knowing what she knows that he eventually breaks down and essentially goes 'ugh fine yes I do have a boyfriend are you happy'.
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* When Annabelline gets hit with six Artifacts and is teleports into another universe, more often than less she immediately gets hit with the necklace's effect which makes her fall in love with someone nearby. Her thoughts can be utterly hilarious as she tries to adjust to this.
--> Annabelline continues to hug Edie. This may have been poorly thought out. She is not sure how to stop.
--> Annabelline continues to hug Edie. This may have been poorly thought out. She is not sure how to stop.
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* ''Good grief these Quendi. At this rate she'd have an easier time going home and trying to reason with some elves.''
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* ''Good '' 'Good grief these Quendi. At this rate she'd have an easier time going home and trying to reason with some elves.' ''
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* ''Good grief these Quendi. At this rate she'd have an easier time going home and trying to reason with some elves.''
** This being an observation from Kobold, whose home universe has several different species, one of which is named Elves in a conincidence. As she's talking to a child Feanaro who has a raging inferiority complex and blames his existence for his mother's death, she is, of course, broadly correct.
** This being an observation from Kobold, whose home universe has several different species, one of which is named Elves in a conincidence. As she's talking to a child Feanaro who has a raging inferiority complex and blames his existence for his mother's death, she is, of course, broadly correct.
