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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MOvYStu-LPs Katie and Michael are having a moment]], and she's all ready for him to kiss her, but he second-guesses himself and turns away. At first she blusters with fury and embarrassment, but then she runs up to him and initiates the kiss herself.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MOvYStu-LPs Katie and Michael are having a moment]], and she's all ready for him to kiss her, but he second-guesses himself and turns away. At first first, she blusters with fury and embarrassment, but then she runs up to him and initiates the kiss herself.
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** Later that night, a furious King Brian storms into Darby’s house. Darby [[{{Troll}} politely asks King Brian how the fox hunt went,]] and Brian snarks back, “We were chasing the wrong fox!”
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* Katie and Michael are having a moment, and she's all ready for him to kiss her, but he second-guesses himself and turns away. At first she shows the greatest mixture of fury and embarrassment, but then she runs up to him and initiates the kiss herself.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MOvYStu-LPs Katie and Michael are having a moment, moment]], and she's all ready for him to kiss her, but he second-guesses himself and turns away. At first she shows the greatest mixture of blusters with fury and embarrassment, but then she runs up to him and initiates the kiss herself.
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--> '''Brian''': You wished he should see me, and see me he does. (''smug smile'') He sees me ''as a rabbit!''
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--> '''Brian''': You wished he should see me, and see me he does. (''smug smile'') [[ExactWords He sees me me]] ''as a rabbit!''
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* When Darby wishes that Michael could be able to see King Brian, the king grants the wish. So Michael now sees Brian... as a rabbit.
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* When Darby muses that he wishes that Michael could be able to see King Brian, the king grants the wish. Brian.
-->'''Brian:''' That's your ''second'' wish.
-->'''Darby:''' [[{{Angrish}} Why, you tricky, deceivin', connivin', double-dealin', high-handed...!]]
** So Michael now sees Brian... as a rabbit.
-->'''Brian:''' That's your ''second'' wish.
-->'''Darby:''' [[{{Angrish}} Why, you tricky, deceivin', connivin', double-dealin', high-handed...!]]
** So Michael now sees Brian... as a rabbit.
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* When Pony is being especially obnoxious at the Rathcullen Arms, the bartender cuts him off. "Cutting him off" just means he has to drink stout instead of whiskey for a little while!
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--> '''Brian''': You wished he should see me, and see me does. (''smug smile'') He sees me ''as a rabbit!''
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--> '''Brian''': You wished he should see me, and see me he does. (''smug smile'') He sees me ''as a rabbit!''
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* When Darby wishes that Michael could be able to see King Brian, the king grants the wish. So Michael now sees Brian... as a rabbit!
** "You wished he should see me, and see me does." (smug smile) "He sees me ''as a rabbit!''"
** "You wished he should see me, and see me does." (smug smile) "He sees me ''as a rabbit!''"
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* When Darby wishes that Michael could be able to see King Brian, the king grants the wish. So Michael now sees Brian... as a rabbit!
** "Yourabbit.
--> '''Brian''': You wished he should see me, and see medoes." (smug smile) "He does. (''smug smile'') He sees me ''as a rabbit!''"rabbit!''
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--> '''Brian''': You wished he should see me, and see me
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* When Darby sics his cat on King Brian.
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* Katie and Michael are having a moment, and she's all ready for him to kiss her, but he second-guesses himself and turns away. At first she shows the greatest mixture of fury and embarrassment, but then she runs up to him and initiates the kiss herself.
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** "You wished he should see me, and see me does." (smug smile) "He sees me ''as a rabbit!''"
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** "You wished he should see me, and see me does." (smug smile) "He sees me ''as a rabbit!''"rabbit!''"
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* During their song and dance, Darby gets Brian and the little people so exited about fox hunting that they all get mounted up and head out. While not one of them stays to make sure Darby wont escape.
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* During their song and dance, Darby gets Brian and the little people so exited excited about fox hunting that they all get mounted up and head out. While not one of them stays to make sure Darby wont won't escape.
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* When Darby sicks his cat on King Brian.
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* When Darby sicks sics his cat on King Brian.
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* When Darby wishes that Michael could be able to see King Brian, the king grants the wish. So Michael now sees Brian... as a rabbit!
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* When Darby wishes that Michael could be able to see King Brian, the king grants the wish. So Michael now sees Brian... as a rabbit!rabbit!
** "You wished he should see me, and see me does." (smug smile) "He sees me ''as a rabbit!''"
** "You wished he should see me, and see me does." (smug smile) "He sees me ''as a rabbit!''"
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* During their song and dance, Darby gets Brian and the little so exited about fox hunting that they all get mounted up and head out. While not one of them stays to make sure Darby wont escape.
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* During their song and dance, Darby gets Brian and the little people so exited about fox hunting that they all get mounted up and head out. While not one of them stays to make sure Darby wont escape.
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* When Darby wishes that Michael could be able to see King Brian, the king grants the wish. So Michael now sees Brain... as a rabbit!
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* When Darby wishes that Michael could be able to see King Brian, the king grants the wish. So Michael now sees Brain...Brian... as a rabbit!
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* During there song and dance, Darby gets Brian and the little so exited about fox hunting that they all get mounted up and head out. While not one of them stays to make sure Darby wont escape.
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* During there their song and dance, Darby gets Brian and the little so exited about fox hunting that they all get mounted up and head out. While not one of them stays to make sure Darby wont escape.
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* During there song and dance, Darby gets Brian and the little so exited about fox hunting that they all get mounted up and head out. While not one of them stays to make sure Darby wont escape.
* When Darby wishes that Michael could be able to see King Brian, the king grants the wish. So Michael now sees Brain... as a rabbit!
* When Darby wishes that Michael could be able to see King Brian, the king grants the wish. So Michael now sees Brain... as a rabbit!
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* When Darby sicks his cat on King Brian.
