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* Any time Judai is not in Ninja Mode and instead being an OverprotectiveDad. A standout is his whole talk with Sakumo in Chapter 42, where [[spoiler: he finds out that Tomoko has a crush on Kakashi. It didn't go well.]]
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* Any time Judai is not in Ninja Mode and instead being an OverprotectiveDad.a BoyfriendBlockingDad. A standout is his whole talk with Sakumo in Chapter 42, where [[spoiler: he finds out that Tomoko has a crush on Kakashi. It didn't go well.]]
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* The beginning of Chapter 50 and how Sakumo [[spoiler:is proven to be NotSoStoic, unlike his son, when attempting to give the Sex Talk to Kakashi and Tomoko.]]
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* The beginning of Chapter 50 and how Sakumo [[spoiler:is proven to be NotSoStoic, unlike his son, [[StrongFamilyResemblance son]], when attempting to give the Sex Talk to Kakashi and Tomoko.]]
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* The beginning of Chapter 50 and how Sakumo [[is proven to be NotSoStoic, unlike his son, when attempting to give the Sex Talk to Kakashi and Tomoko.]]
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* The beginning of Chapter 50 and how Sakumo [[is [[spoiler:is proven to be NotSoStoic, unlike his son, when attempting to give the Sex Talk to Kakashi and Tomoko.]]
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* Any time Judai is not in Ninja Mode and instead being an OverprotectiveDad. A standout is his whole talk with Sakumo in Chapter 42, where [[spoiler: he finds out that Tomoko has a crush on Kakashi. It didn't go well.]]
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* Any time Judai is not in Ninja Mode and instead being an OverprotectiveDad. A standout is his whole talk with Sakumo in Chapter 42, where [[spoiler: he finds out that Tomoko has a crush on Kakashi. It didn't go well.]]
* The beginning of Chapter 50 and how Sakumo [[is proven to be NotSoStoic, unlike his son, when attempting to give the Sex Talk to Kakashi and Tomoko.]]
* The beginning of Chapter 50 and how Sakumo [[is proven to be NotSoStoic, unlike his son, when attempting to give the Sex Talk to Kakashi and Tomoko.]]
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* Chapter 41: Double. [[DynamicEntry Dynamic. Entry.]]
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* Chapter 41: Double. [[DynamicEntry Dynamic. Entry.]]
* Any time Judai is not in Ninja Mode and instead being an OverprotectiveDad. A standout is his whole talk with Sakumo in Chapter 42, where [[spoiler: he finds out that Tomoko has a crush on Kakashi. It didn't go well.]]
* Any time Judai is not in Ninja Mode and instead being an OverprotectiveDad. A standout is his whole talk with Sakumo in Chapter 42, where [[spoiler: he finds out that Tomoko has a crush on Kakashi. It didn't go well.]]
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* Chapter 41: Double. Dynamic. Entry.
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* Chapter 41: Double. [[DynamicEntry Dynamic. Entry.]]
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'''Rin''': "GUYS!"
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'''Rin''': "GUYS!""GUYS!"
* Chapter 41: Double. Dynamic. Entry.
* Chapter 41: Double. Dynamic. Entry.
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--> '''Obito''': "Hey Kakashi,"\\
'''Kakashi''': "Hey, is Rin not here yet?"\\
'''Kakashi''': "Hey, is Rin not here yet?"\\
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--> '''Obito''': "Hey Kakashi,"\\
Kakashi."\\
'''Kakashi''':"Hey, is "Hey. Is Rin not here yet?"\\
'''Kakashi''':
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'''Kakashi''': [chokes]
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'''Kakashi''': [chokes][chokes]
** Needless to say, Obito had to deal with quite a bit afterwards:
---> '''Kakashi''': "GET BACK HERE, UCHIHA!"\\
'''Obito''': "NEVER! GOTTA CATCH ME FIRST!"\\
'''Rin''': "G-Guys, aren't we supposed to be training?! C-Calm down already!"\\
'''Kakashi''': "LATER RIN! I NEED TO CATCH THIS IDIOT FIRST!"\\
'''Obito''': "AAH! WHY ARE YOU PULLING A KUNAI OUT?!"\\
'''Kakashi''': ""JUST STOP AND YOU'LL FIND OUT!"\\
'''Rin''': "GUYS!"
** Needless to say, Obito had to deal with quite a bit afterwards:
---> '''Kakashi''': "GET BACK HERE, UCHIHA!"\\
'''Obito''': "NEVER! GOTTA CATCH ME FIRST!"\\
'''Rin''': "G-Guys, aren't we supposed to be training?! C-Calm down already!"\\
'''Kakashi''': "LATER RIN! I NEED TO CATCH THIS IDIOT FIRST!"\\
'''Obito''': "AAH! WHY ARE YOU PULLING A KUNAI OUT?!"\\
'''Kakashi''': ""JUST STOP AND YOU'LL FIND OUT!"\\
'''Rin''': "GUYS!"
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'''Obito''': "So, Kakashi, do you like Tomoko-chan?"\\
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'''Obito''': "So, "[[ArmorPiercingQuestion So, Kakashi, do you like Tomoko-chan?"\\Tomoko-chan?]]"\\
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'''Obito''': "Wha-'''MMPH!'''" [''silenced by blueberry muffin'']
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'''Obito''': "Wha-'''MMPH!'''" [''silenced by blueberry muffin'']muffin'']
* Obito and Kakashi's 'talk' in Chapter 39.
--> '''Obito''': "Hey Kakashi,"\\
'''Kakashi''': "Hey, is Rin not here yet?"\\
'''Obito''': "No, last I checked, she was restocking up on some medical supplies. Since we're training and all."\\
'''Kakashi''': "Huh."\\
[...]\\
'''Obito''': "So, Kakashi, do you like Tomoko-chan?"\\
'''Kakashi''': [chokes]
* Obito and Kakashi's 'talk' in Chapter 39.
--> '''Obito''': "Hey Kakashi,"\\
'''Kakashi''': "Hey, is Rin not here yet?"\\
'''Obito''': "No, last I checked, she was restocking up on some medical supplies. Since we're training and all."\\
'''Kakashi''': "Huh."\\
[...]\\
'''Obito''': "So, Kakashi, do you like Tomoko-chan?"\\
'''Kakashi''': [chokes]
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[Courtesy of TheGlomp later]\\
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'''Kakashi''': '''Oh [[PrecisionFStrike FU-]]''' [TheGlomp]
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'''Kakashi''': '''Oh [[PrecisionFStrike FU-]]''' [TheGlomp][''TheGlomp'']
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'''Obito''': [points between Tomoko and Kakashi] "Y-You... know this asshole?"\\
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'''Obito''': [points [''points between Tomoko and Kakashi] Kakashi''] "Y-You... know this asshole?"\\
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---> [Narration] Without even thinking, I just unwrapped the blue bundle in my arms, taking out two blueberry muffins. One I decided to simply stuff into Obito's mouth, wrapper and all, while the other I just placed into Kakashi's open hand before turning around and pinching the masked ninja's cheek.\\
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---> [Narration] [''Narration''] Without even thinking, I just unwrapped the blue bundle in my arms, taking out two blueberry muffins. One I decided to simply stuff into Obito's mouth, wrapper and all, while the other I just placed into Kakashi's open hand before turning around and pinching the masked ninja's cheek.\\
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'''Obito''': "Wha-'''MMPH!'''" [silenced by blueberry muffin]
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'''Obito''': "Wha-'''MMPH!'''" [silenced [''silenced by blueberry muffin]muffin'']
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'''Obito''': "Wha-MMPH!" [silenced by blueberry muffin]
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'''Obito''': "Wha-MMPH!" "Wha-'''MMPH!'''" [silenced by blueberry muffin]
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'''Kakashi''': "[[DeadpanSnarker What was that]], Tomoko?"
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'''Kakashi''': "[[DeadpanSnarker What was that]], Tomoko?"Tomoko?"
** Once the misunderstanding babble is cleared up, Obito and Kakashi then get into a small spat a la canon, and Tomoko starts getting irritated.
---> [Narration] Without even thinking, I just unwrapped the blue bundle in my arms, taking out two blueberry muffins. One I decided to simply stuff into Obito's mouth, wrapper and all, while the other I just placed into Kakashi's open hand before turning around and pinching the masked ninja's cheek.\\
The reaction was instantaneous.\\
'''Obito''': "Wha-MMPH!" [silenced by blueberry muffin]
** Once the misunderstanding babble is cleared up, Obito and Kakashi then get into a small spat a la canon, and Tomoko starts getting irritated.
---> [Narration] Without even thinking, I just unwrapped the blue bundle in my arms, taking out two blueberry muffins. One I decided to simply stuff into Obito's mouth, wrapper and all, while the other I just placed into Kakashi's open hand before turning around and pinching the masked ninja's cheek.\\
The reaction was instantaneous.\\
'''Obito''': "Wha-MMPH!" [silenced by blueberry muffin]
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'''Obito''': "What?"\\
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'''Obito''': "What?"\\"[[BigWhat What?]]"\\
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'''Tomoko''': "Well, Obito-kun, um… how should I word this? Um...Obito-kun,thisisKakashi-kun,mybestfriendwho'snotanasshole!"\\
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'''Tomoko''': "Well, Obito-kun, um… how should I word this? Um...Obito-kun,thisisKakashi-kun,mybestfriendwho'snotanasshole!"\\ [[InaneBlabbering Obito-kun,thisisKakashi-kun,mybestfriendwho'snotanasshole!]]"\\
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'''Kakashi''': "[DeadpanSnarker What was that], Tomoko?"
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'''Kakashi''': "[DeadpanSnarker "[[DeadpanSnarker What was that], that]], Tomoko?"
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[StunnedSilence ...]\\
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* Obito's reaction to finding out WHO Tomoko's best friend was in Chapter 15. Tomoko keeps ComiciallyMissingThePoint until he spells it out for her.
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* Obito's reaction to finding out WHO Tomoko's best friend was in Chapter 15. Tomoko keeps ComiciallyMissingThePoint ComicallyMissingThePoint until he spells it out for her.
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'''Kakashi''': "[DeadpanSnarker What was that], Tomoko?"\\
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'''Kakashi''': "[DeadpanSnarker What was that], Tomoko?"\\Tomoko?"
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'''Kakashi''': '''Oh [[PrecisionFStrike FU-]]''' [TheGlomp]
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'''Kakashi''': '''Oh [[PrecisionFStrike FU-]]''' [TheGlomp][TheGlomp]
* Obito's reaction to finding out WHO Tomoko's best friend was in Chapter 15. Tomoko keeps ComiciallyMissingThePoint until he spells it out for her.
--> '''Obito''': "...Tomoko-chan? Y-y-you..."\\
'''Tomoko''': "I what, Obito-kun?"\\
'''Obito''': [points between Tomoko and Kakashi] "Y-You... know this asshole?"\\
'''Tomoko''': "Well, Obito-kun, um… how should I word this? Um...Obito-kun,thisisKakashi-kun,mybestfriendwho'snotanasshole!"\\
[StunnedSilence ...]\\
'''Obito''': "What?"\\
'''Rin''': "What?"\\
'''Minato''': "What?"\\
'''Kakashi''': "[DeadpanSnarker What was that], Tomoko?"\\
* Obito's reaction to finding out WHO Tomoko's best friend was in Chapter 15. Tomoko keeps ComiciallyMissingThePoint until he spells it out for her.
--> '''Obito''': "...Tomoko-chan? Y-y-you..."\\
'''Tomoko''': "I what, Obito-kun?"\\
'''Obito''': [points between Tomoko and Kakashi] "Y-You... know this asshole?"\\
'''Tomoko''': "Well, Obito-kun, um… how should I word this? Um...Obito-kun,thisisKakashi-kun,mybestfriendwho'snotanasshole!"\\
[StunnedSilence ...]\\
'''Obito''': "What?"\\
'''Rin''': "What?"\\
'''Minato''': "What?"\\
'''Kakashi''': "[DeadpanSnarker What was that], Tomoko?"\\
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'''Kakashi''': [[DeadpanSnarker '''Ow.''']]
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'''Kakashi''': [[DeadpanSnarker '''Ow.''']]'''[[DeadpanSnarker Ow.]]'''
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'''Kakashi''': '''Oh FU-''' [TheGlomp]
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'''Kakashi''': '''Oh FU-''' [[PrecisionFStrike FU-]]''' [TheGlomp]
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'''Kakashi''': '''Ow.'''
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'''Kakashi''': [[DeadpanSnarker '''Ow.'''''']]
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'''Kakashi''': '''Oh FU-''' [TheGlomp]]
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'''Kakashi''': '''Oh FU-''' [TheGlomp]][TheGlomp]
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[[One Glomp later]]\\
'''Kakashi''': '''Ow.'''
'''Kakashi''': '''Ow.'''
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'''Kakashi''': '''Ow.
** The second time she does it results in a similar reaction.
---> '''Kakashi''': '''Oh no.''' "W-Wait, now?!" '''Don't tell me she's going to tackle-hug me again?!'''\\
'''Tomoko''': "Yes now! It's a hug for good luck!"\\
'''Kakashi''': "I don't need good luck!" ''Please don't jump me,'' '''please don't jump me.'''\\
'''Tomoko''': "Too bad - I've giving it anyway!"\\
'''Kakashi''': '''Oh FU-''' [TheGlomp]]
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[[One Glomp later]]
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[[One Glomp later]]later]]\\
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* The first time Tomoko tackle-hugs Kakashi. His reaction in his Interlude really sells it.
--> '''Kakashi''': "[[BigWhat W-What?!]] W-Wait a second -"\\
[[One Glomp later]]
'''Kakashi''': '''Ow.'''
--> '''Kakashi''': "[[BigWhat W-What?!]] W-Wait a second -"\\
[[One Glomp later]]
'''Kakashi''': '''Ow.'''
