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-->'''Dark Sakura:''' This world, Angra Mainyu's birthplace]], is my nursery. And every single person in it is my beloved child.\\
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-->'''Dark Sakura:''' This world, Angra Mainyu's birthplace]], birthplace, is my nursery. And every single person in it is my beloved child.\\
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'''Illya:''' I hate your [girlfriend.
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'''Illya:''' I hate your [girlfriend.girlfriend.
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-->''And though neither of them knew it at the time, they had just ensured that the plans of basically every single person in the conflict to come were going to go completely wrong. [[MyFriendsAndZoidberg Except Rin]]. Her plans went wrong just fine without any outside help.''
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-->''And though neither of them knew it at the time, they had just ensured that the plans of basically every single person in the conflict to come were going to go completely wrong. [[MyFriendsAndZoidberg Except Rin]]. [[TooCleverByHalf Her plans went wrong just fine without any outside help.help]].''
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* In Chapter 5, Berserker has made short work of [[spoiler:Rider]] and is prepared to do the same to Rin. Shirou won't have this and leaps in front, fully expecting to get skewered. And then Berserker... stops his descending sword, picks up Shirou "with the air of a gorilla lifting a kitten", and gently deposits him to the side. Everyone falls silent in shock (yes, even ''Shinji'')... Then Berserker [[MoodWhiplash resumes his assigned task]].
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* In Chapter 5, Berserker has made short work of [[spoiler:Rider]] Rider and is prepared to do the same to Rin. Shirou won't have this and leaps in front, fully expecting to get skewered. And then Berserker... stops his descending sword, picks up Shirou "with the air of a gorilla lifting a kitten", and gently deposits him to the side. Everyone falls silent in shock (yes, even ''Shinji'')... Then Berserker [[MoodWhiplash resumes his assigned task]].
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* Chapter 19, Saber makes a persuading explanation attempt to Shirou while leaving out important facts of [[spoiler:Illyasviel]] in order to [[LockedOutOfTheLoop not raise questions about it]]. And when she finishes a paragraph...
-->''There! Informative, and yet leaving out anything that might give away the [[spoiler:Lady Einzbern]]. Saber felt she was doing rather well at this subterfuge thing, and she didn't even have sunglasses.''
* Chapter 23 is a much-needed BreatherEpisode after the last series of events, which of course means plenty of humour. Bright spots include Archer's [[KnightInSourArmour world-weary]] [[DeadpanSnarker snark]], Illya's [[SitcomArchNemesis condescending to Rin about being from a "backwater" country]] (with the "peasant" Rin [[{{Troll}} rising to the bait]]), and, most of all, Shirou freaking out when he realises that he's been [[spoiler:taking Illya on dates]]. It only gets worse for him when he tries (and [[NotWhatItLooksLike fails]]) to explain what was happening to [[{{Tsundere}} Rin]] and [[KnightInShiningArmour Saber]]. Illya then [[NoSocialSkills voices her mistaken belief that]] he [[spoiler:''knew'' they were dates but didn't know she was 19]], oblivious to how that's [[DiggingYourselfDeeper making things worse]].
-->''There! Informative, and yet leaving out anything that might give away the [[spoiler:Lady Einzbern]]. Saber felt she was doing rather well at this subterfuge thing, and she didn't even have sunglasses.''
* Chapter 23 is a much-needed BreatherEpisode after the last series of events, which of course means plenty of humour. Bright spots include Archer's [[KnightInSourArmour world-weary]] [[DeadpanSnarker snark]], Illya's [[SitcomArchNemesis condescending to Rin about being from a "backwater" country]] (with the "peasant" Rin [[{{Troll}} rising to the bait]]), and, most of all, Shirou freaking out when he realises that he's been [[spoiler:taking Illya on dates]]. It only gets worse for him when he tries (and [[NotWhatItLooksLike fails]]) to explain what was happening to [[{{Tsundere}} Rin]] and [[KnightInShiningArmour Saber]]. Illya then [[NoSocialSkills voices her mistaken belief that]] he [[spoiler:''knew'' they were dates but didn't know she was 19]], oblivious to how that's [[DiggingYourselfDeeper making things worse]].
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* Chapter 19, Saber makes a persuading explanation attempt to Shirou while leaving out important facts of [[spoiler:Illyasviel]] Illyasviel in order to [[LockedOutOfTheLoop not raise questions about it]]. And when she finishes a paragraph...
-->''There! Informative, and yet leaving out anything that might give away the[[spoiler:Lady Einzbern]].Lady Einzbern. Saber felt she was doing rather well at this subterfuge thing, and she didn't even have sunglasses.''
* Chapter 23 is a much-needed BreatherEpisode after the last series of events, which of course means plenty of humour. Bright spots include Archer's [[KnightInSourArmour world-weary]] [[DeadpanSnarker snark]], Illya's [[SitcomArchNemesis condescending to Rin about being from a "backwater" country]] (with the "peasant" Rin [[{{Troll}} rising to the bait]]), and, most of all, Shirou freaking out when he realises that he's been[[spoiler:taking taking Illya on dates]].dates. It only gets worse for him when he tries (and [[NotWhatItLooksLike fails]]) to explain what was happening to [[{{Tsundere}} Rin]] and [[KnightInShiningArmour Saber]]. Illya then [[NoSocialSkills voices her mistaken belief that]] he [[spoiler:''knew'' ''knew'' they were dates but didn't know she was 19]], 19, oblivious to how that's [[DiggingYourselfDeeper making things worse]].
-->''There! Informative, and yet leaving out anything that might give away the
* Chapter 23 is a much-needed BreatherEpisode after the last series of events, which of course means plenty of humour. Bright spots include Archer's [[KnightInSourArmour world-weary]] [[DeadpanSnarker snark]], Illya's [[SitcomArchNemesis condescending to Rin about being from a "backwater" country]] (with the "peasant" Rin [[{{Troll}} rising to the bait]]), and, most of all, Shirou freaking out when he realises that he's been
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* Chapter 30: Kirei delivering the most sophisticated bit of BlackComedy to Sakura by casually revealing "in the interests of honesty" that he [[spoiler:killed her (and Rin's) birth father]].
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* Chapter 30: Kirei delivering the most sophisticated bit of BlackComedy to Sakura by casually revealing "in the interests of honesty" that he [[spoiler:killed killed her (and Rin's) birth father]].father.
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* [[DeadpanSnarker Archer's snarky response to]] [[spoiler:Dark Sakura]]'s philosophical declaration:
-->'''[[spoiler:Dark Sakura]]:''' This world, [[spoiler:Angra Mainyu's birthplace]], is my nursery. And every single person in it is my beloved child.\\
-->'''[[spoiler:Dark Sakura]]:''' This world, [[spoiler:Angra Mainyu's birthplace]], is my nursery. And every single person in it is my beloved child.\\
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* [[DeadpanSnarker Archer's snarky response to]] [[spoiler:Dark Sakura]]'s Dark Sakura's philosophical declaration:
-->'''[[spoiler:Dark Sakura]]:''' -->'''Dark Sakura:''' This world, [[spoiler:Angra Angra Mainyu's birthplace]], is my nursery. And every single person in it is my beloved child.\\
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* Near the end of Chapter 33: [[spoiler: Kid!Gilgamesh appears!]] And he gets the ball rolling by trolling the heck out of Rin without even noticing. What makes it especially funny is the way he speaks: [[spoiler:He's not a jerk, and is even polite, but he's still got Adult!Gilgamesh's arrogance, creating an odd mix of superiority and generosity]]. Every word out of his mouth is hilarious:
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* Near the end of Chapter 33: [[spoiler: Kid!Gilgamesh appears!]] appears! And he gets the ball rolling by trolling the heck out of Rin without even noticing. What makes it especially funny is the way he speaks: [[spoiler:He's He's not a jerk, and is even polite, but he's still got Adult!Gilgamesh's arrogance, creating an odd mix of superiority and generosity]].generosity. Every word out of his mouth is hilarious:
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'''[[spoiler:Gil]]:''' Yes, he is. He also has too much dignity to be carried like a sack of wheat, so please set him down.\\
'''[[spoiler:Gil]]:''' ''[Falls over]'' You didn't see that.\\
'''[[spoiler:Gil]]:''' ''[Falls over]'' You didn't see that.\\
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'''[[spoiler:Gil]]:''' [[spoiler:The King]] would chastise you, but his legs appear to be not working totally right. He requests you roll him over and prop him against a wall. \\
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'''[[spoiler:Gil]]:''' Ah, my thanks, vassal.\\
'''[[spoiler:Gil:]]''' Do not doubt my royalty, peasant.\\
'''[[spoiler:Gil:]]''' ''[Falls over again]'' ...I also find my muscles to be quite numb. Please hold me upright. \\
'''[[spoiler:Gil:]]''' Do not doubt my royalty, peasant.\\
'''[[spoiler:Gil:]]''' ''[Falls over again]'' ...I also find my muscles to be quite numb. Please hold me upright. \\
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'''[[spoiler:Gil]]:''' Ah, you are a valiant slave. When I next procure a castle, you shall be my primary manservant.
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* Chapter 36 has the standoff between [[spoiler:Kid!Gil and Saber Alter.]] Also doubles as a CMOA.
-->[[spoiler:Saber was King Arthur, the wielder of Excalibur, the sword of kings that could shatter armies in a single swing. It gleamed in her hands, a hungry darkness that devoured everything around it, like it was a black hole in her hand. It told the universe: ''[[BadassBoast I have crushed nations beneath my boot, and I am stronger then I was then. Kneel or die.]]'']]\\
[[spoiler:Archer was Gilgamesh, the king of heroes, first and mightiest. The light he emitted was not so brilliant as the perfect radiance of his adult form, but it still shone brightly enough to outline half the mountain in gold, vanishing only where Saber's darkness countered it. It told the universe: ''[[BadassBoast I am the barest fraction of what I one day will be, and my power can still shake the heavens. You are nothing before me.]]'']]\\
[[spoiler:Rin Tohsaka was a human, and she had never felt more human than at that moment. She looked back at forth between them, and said "We should run away." It told the universe: ''[[OhCrap Oh, shit]]''.]]
-->[[spoiler:Saber was King Arthur, the wielder of Excalibur, the sword of kings that could shatter armies in a single swing. It gleamed in her hands, a hungry darkness that devoured everything around it, like it was a black hole in her hand. It told the universe: ''[[BadassBoast I have crushed nations beneath my boot, and I am stronger then I was then. Kneel or die.]]'']]\\
[[spoiler:Archer was Gilgamesh, the king of heroes, first and mightiest. The light he emitted was not so brilliant as the perfect radiance of his adult form, but it still shone brightly enough to outline half the mountain in gold, vanishing only where Saber's darkness countered it. It told the universe: ''[[BadassBoast I am the barest fraction of what I one day will be, and my power can still shake the heavens. You are nothing before me.]]'']]\\
[[spoiler:Rin Tohsaka was a human, and she had never felt more human than at that moment. She looked back at forth between them, and said "We should run away." It told the universe: ''[[OhCrap Oh, shit]]''.]]
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* Chapter 36 has the standoff between [[spoiler:Kid!Gil Kid!Gil and Saber Alter.]] Alter. Also doubles as a CMOA.
-->[[spoiler:Saber -->Saber was King Arthur, the wielder of Excalibur, the sword of kings that could shatter armies in a single swing. It gleamed in her hands, a hungry darkness that devoured everything around it, like it was a black hole in her hand. It told the universe: ''[[BadassBoast I have crushed nations beneath my boot, and I am stronger then I was then. Kneel or die.]]'']]\\
[[spoiler:Archer]]''\\
Archer was Gilgamesh, the king of heroes, first and mightiest. The light he emitted was not so brilliant as the perfect radiance of his adult form, but it still shone brightly enough to outline half the mountain in gold, vanishing only where Saber's darkness countered it. It told the universe: ''[[BadassBoast I am the barest fraction of what I one day will be, and my power can still shake the heavens. You are nothing before me.]]'']]\\
[[spoiler:Rin]]''\\
Rin Tohsaka was a human, and she had never felt more human than at that moment. She looked back at forth between them, and said "We should run away." It told the universe: ''[[OhCrap Oh, shit]]''.]]
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Archer was Gilgamesh, the king of heroes, first and mightiest. The light he emitted was not so brilliant as the perfect radiance of his adult form, but it still shone brightly enough to outline half the mountain in gold, vanishing only where Saber's darkness countered it. It told the universe: ''[[BadassBoast I am the barest fraction of what I one day will be, and my power can still shake the heavens. You are nothing before me.
[[spoiler:Rin
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-->'''[[spoiler:Dark Sakura]]:''' ThereWasADoor, [[spoiler:sister dear]]. I know we left out a little welcome mat for you.\\
'''Rin Tohsaka:''' The tunnels were confusing, and your welcome mat tried to kill us. We decided to let ourselves in. [[spoiler:Sakura]], you look terrible in black. Kirei, you look terrible alive.
* [[spoiler:Kid Gil wondering why his older self likes Saber. [[InLoveWithYourCarnage Her Excaliburing the mountain gives him a few clues]].]]
'''Rin Tohsaka:''' The tunnels were confusing, and your welcome mat tried to kill us. We decided to let ourselves in. [[spoiler:Sakura]], you look terrible in black. Kirei, you look terrible alive.
* [[spoiler:Kid Gil wondering why his older self likes Saber. [[InLoveWithYourCarnage Her Excaliburing the mountain gives him a few clues]].]]
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'''Rin Tohsaka:''' The tunnels were confusing, and your welcome mat tried to kill us. We decided to let ourselves in.
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* Everyone’s reactions to [[spoiler: post-corruption Saber, particularly her [[GenkiGirl per]][[BloodKnight son]][[CasualDangerDialogue al]][[CameBackStrong ity]].]]
* During the [[spoiler:epic melee between Servants and Angra Mainyu's Curses, Achilles freaks out when [[StealthHiBye Robin Hood suddenly appears next to him in his chariot]]. While fighting side by side, Francis Drake hits on Karna, which causes the normally unflappable Karna to become nervous. Nero complains about having to fight all by herself, and Tamamo repeatedly points out she's standing right next to her, which Nero ignores.]]
* When Shirou and Saber finally defeat [[spoiler:Emiya Alter and Morgan Le Fay]], they are left totally confused because they were so busy fighting that they completely missed [[spoiler:Illya and Sakura summoning everyone in the Throne of Heroes.]]
* During the [[spoiler:epic melee between Servants and Angra Mainyu's Curses, Achilles freaks out when [[StealthHiBye Robin Hood suddenly appears next to him in his chariot]]. While fighting side by side, Francis Drake hits on Karna, which causes the normally unflappable Karna to become nervous. Nero complains about having to fight all by herself, and Tamamo repeatedly points out she's standing right next to her, which Nero ignores.]]
* When Shirou and Saber finally defeat [[spoiler:Emiya Alter and Morgan Le Fay]], they are left totally confused because they were so busy fighting that they completely missed [[spoiler:Illya and Sakura summoning everyone in the Throne of Heroes.]]
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* Everyone’s reactions to [[spoiler: post-corruption Saber, particularly her [[GenkiGirl per]][[BloodKnight son]][[CasualDangerDialogue al]][[CameBackStrong ity]].]]
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* During the[[spoiler:epic epic melee between Servants and Angra Mainyu's Curses, Achilles freaks out when [[StealthHiBye Robin Hood suddenly appears next to him in his chariot]]. While fighting side by side, Francis Drake hits on Karna, which causes the normally unflappable Karna to become nervous. Nero complains about having to fight all by herself, and Tamamo repeatedly points out she's standing right next to her, which Nero ignores.]]
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* When Shirou and Saber finally defeat[[spoiler:Emiya Emiya Alter and Morgan Le Fay]], Fay, they are left totally confused because they were so busy fighting that they completely missed [[spoiler:Illya Illya and Sakura summoning everyone in the Throne of Heroes.]]
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'''Illya:''' I hate your [[spoiler:girlfriend]].
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** His reaction when everybody oppose [[spoiler:Medea Lily]] being a leader for being a dark sorceress is to remark that they evidently never met Scathach.
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* [[spoiler: Archer!Herakles]] sees Medusa in her [[EldritchAbomination Gorgon form]]. He asks her if she would like to be [[AmazonChaser his fifth wife]].
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* [[spoiler: Archer!Herakles]] Archer!Herakles sees Medusa in her [[EldritchAbomination Gorgon form]]. He asks her if she would like to be [[AmazonChaser his fifth wife]].
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* [[spoiler: Caster!Gilles de Rais]] is still his gloriously creepy, insane self who disturbs anyone he meets. Saber confesses she still likes meeting him now better than their last interaction.
* [[spoiler:Medea Lily]] has none of the memories of her other incarnations, so she's understandably confused when every main character and surviving Servant from the Fifth War all tell her that they: don't like her, don't trust her, and ''barely'' consider The [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt Apocalypse]] to be a serious enough reason to work with her instead of killing her immediately.
--> '''[[spoiler:Medea Lily]]:''' ''"Why do you all hate me?!"''
* The entire KangarooCourt scene with [[spoiler:Rin, Illya and Saber basically trolling the Association. And then ''Zelretch'' joins in on the fun.]]
* [[spoiler:Medea Lily]] has none of the memories of her other incarnations, so she's understandably confused when every main character and surviving Servant from the Fifth War all tell her that they: don't like her, don't trust her, and ''barely'' consider The [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt Apocalypse]] to be a serious enough reason to work with her instead of killing her immediately.
--> '''[[spoiler:Medea Lily]]:''' ''"Why do you all hate me?!"''
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* [[spoiler: Caster!Gilles de Rais]] Rais is still his gloriously creepy, insane self who disturbs anyone he meets. Saber confesses she still likes meeting him now better than their last interaction.
*[[spoiler:Medea Lily]] Medea Lily has none of the memories of her other incarnations, so she's understandably confused when every main character and surviving Servant from the Fifth War all tell her that they: don't like her, don't trust her, and ''barely'' consider The [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt Apocalypse]] to be a serious enough reason to work with her instead of killing her immediately.
-->'''[[spoiler:Medea Lily]]:''' '''Medea Lily:''' ''"Why do you all hate me?!"''
* The entire KangarooCourt scene with[[spoiler:Rin, Rin, Illya and Saber basically trolling the Association. And then ''Zelretch'' joins in on the fun.]]
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* [[DeadpanSnarker Archer's snarky response to] [[spoiler:Dark Sakura]]'s philosophical declaration:
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'''Archer:''' So, I guess the thing to say now would be 'you're not my real mom'?
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'''Archer:''' [[ShutUpHannibal So, I guess the thing to say now would be 'you're not my real mom'?mom'?]]
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* Chapter 30: Kirei delivering the most sophisticated bit of BlackComedy to Sakura by casually revealing "in the interests of honesty" that he [[spoiler:killed her birth father]].
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* Chapter 30: Kirei delivering the most sophisticated bit of BlackComedy to Sakura by casually revealing "in the interests of honesty" that he [[spoiler:killed her (and Rin's) birth father]].
