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Changed line(s) 1,2 (click to see context) from:
* Book one, ''Saffy's Angel'': Michael's InsistentTerminology to Caddy as she calls him "Darling" every time she has a driving lesson with him.
--> "Don't call me darling, I'm a driving instructor!"
--> "Don't call me darling, I'm a driving instructor!"
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Changed line(s) 4,10 (click to see context) from:
* Book two, ''Indigo's Star'':
* Book three, ''Permanent Rose'':
* Book four, ''Caddy Ever After'':
** Saffy demonstrating her mastery of DeadpanSnarker - even in writing!
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* Book three, ''Permanent Rose'':
* Book four, ''Caddy Ever After'':
**
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---> Then she (Rose) looked at me very hard and added, "You and Oscar didn't catch it."
---> No, we didn't.
---> "I suppose," went on Rose, continuing her very hard stare although it was getting no response from me, "you and Oscar didn't eat the stuff that fell on the floor..."
---> True. We refrained from that temptation.
---> "... Or..." Rose paused, and she was just about to go one deduction too far and get herself into trouble when she was saved by the arrival of Eve.
* Book five, ''Forever Rose'':
* Book six, ''Caddy's World'':
---> No, we didn't.
---> "I suppose," went on Rose, continuing her very hard stare although it was getting no response from me, "you and Oscar didn't eat the stuff that fell on the floor..."
---> True. We refrained from that temptation.
---> "... Or..." Rose paused, and she was just about to go one deduction too far and get herself into trouble when she was saved by the arrival of Eve.
* Book five, ''Forever Rose'':
* Book six, ''Caddy's World'':
to:
--->
No, we
--->
"I suppose," went on Rose, continuing her very hard stare although it was getting no response from me, "you and Oscar didn't eat the stuff that fell on the floor...
--->
True. We refrained from that temptation.
"... Or..." Rose paused, and she was just about to go one deduction too far and get herself into trouble when she was saved by the arrival of Eve.
