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* The first time Liang-Qi shoots Cummings. Repeatedly.
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* The first time Liang-Qi shoots Cummings. Repeatedly. He seems to enjoy it.
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** In that same vein, she makes the cutest noises in bed.
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** In that same vein, she makes the cutest noises in bed. [[labelnote:hint]][[BrownNote Her voice is deadly]][[/labelnote]]
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--> '''Maria:''' She can eat a lot so she's a bit chubby, but she's very healthy!
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--> '''Maria:''' She can eat a lot so she's a bit chubby, but she's very healthy!healthy!
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* Canaan thinking that swallowing needles if one breaks a pinky promise as SeriousBusiness. This is lampshaded by Natsume as it's only an innocent promise.
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* Maria wondering why Canaan's name is [[spoiler: despiar.]]
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* Maria wondering why Canaan's name is [[spoiler: despiar.despair.]]
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* "I see. So you people prefer bread. I see."
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* "I see. So you people prefer bread. I see.""
* Maria wondering why Canaan's name is [[spoiler: despiar.]]
--> '''Maria:''' She can eat a lot so she's a bit chubby, but she's very healthy!
* Maria wondering why Canaan's name is [[spoiler: despiar.]]
--> '''Maria:''' She can eat a lot so she's a bit chubby, but she's very healthy!
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** Later in the desert, Maria asks Canaan to pose for a picture. Canaan becomes Adorkable in an instant.
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* Santana will make Hakko happy in bed. [[spoiler: By putting on a magic show for her when he comes home late]]
* Any scene with the Taxi Driver counts as a crowning moment of funny.
* Any scene with the Taxi Driver counts as a crowning moment of funny.
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* Santana will make Hakko happy in bed. [[spoiler: By putting on a magic show for her when he comes home late]]
later.]]
** In that same vein, she makes the cutest noises in bed.
* Any scene with the Taxi Driver counts as a crowning moment offunny.funny.
* "I see. So you people prefer bread. I see."
** In that same vein, she makes the cutest noises in bed.
* Any scene with the Taxi Driver counts as a crowning moment of
* "I see. So you people prefer bread. I see."
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* The first time Quang-Li shoots Cummings. Repeatedly.
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* The first time Quang-Li Liang-Qi shoots Cummings. Repeatedly.
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* Canaan flashing a peace sign in the picture she takes with Maria as they run for their lives.
* Maria is upset because they switched hotels, so Canaan won't be able to find her to hand out. Then Canaan pokes her face above the windowsill. They're on the fifth floor.
* The first time Quang-Li shoots Cummings. Repeatedly.
** When she does this again right in front of the anti-terrorist conference.
* Santana will make Hakko happy in bed. [[spoiler: By putting on a magic show for her when he comes home late]]
* Maria is upset because they switched hotels, so Canaan won't be able to find her to hand out. Then Canaan pokes her face above the windowsill. They're on the fifth floor.
* The first time Quang-Li shoots Cummings. Repeatedly.
** When she does this again right in front of the anti-terrorist conference.
* Santana will make Hakko happy in bed. [[spoiler: By putting on a magic show for her when he comes home late]]
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* Any scene with the Taxi Driver counts as a crowning moment of funny.
